Sup. So I decided I wanted to update this story… So yeah, enjoy.
1: This strays from the original concept.
A: True, but this is still technically the Naruto from civilian ninja, just having birth parents in Minato and Kushina. But then again, this is supposed to be a separate story itself from the main.
2: Can I stop using Hayabusa as Naruto's last name?
A: Well… It is his last name and all, for his true (Ninja) self anyway. So I will try limiting how many times he says his true last name, but don't count on it being completely gone as the last name was gained from his connection with the falcons.
3: What was the seal that Iruka slapped onto Naruto?
A: It was a simple seal that would identify whether or not Naruto was under the control of Kurama.
4: Is there any other neglected Naruto stories like this?
A: Well… Since I use the Naruto I created for all my "Ninja: (input)" stories, I would say no. But there are neglected Naruto stories that simply have Naruto go from neglected kid at the age of 3 to a godlike person at the age of 7… Or they start off with Minato and Kushina congratulating the brothers or sisters who aren't neglected, before panning over towards Naruto who is always on a roof. Anyway, there isn't any neglected Naruto stories like this one, but there are neglected Naruto stories.
Anyway, without further ado, onto the story.
"Speaking"
"Thinking"
"Summons/ bijuu speaking"
"Summons/ bijuu thinking"
"Fire style: Great fireball technique"
"DAMMIT NARU-KUN! STOP CHEATING SOMEHOW!"
"I AIN'T CHEATING DAMMIT!"
"THEN HOW ARE YOU GETTING THESE QUESTIONS ALWAYS RIGHT! YOU EVEN GUESSED THE NAIDAIME HOKAGE'S AGE!"
"HE'S AN OLD FART! IT ISNT MY FAULT I KNEW HOW OLD HE WOULD BE NOW!"
"… And I thought we were loud when we have ramen for dinner…" Muttered out a tired voice of the fourth hokage as he glanced upwards towards the second floor, where his son and his new friend Satsuki, fought over each other for the most bizarre reasons, much to the rest of the households charging as they simply released multiple tired sighs.
"Tell me about it dattebane! I haven't even managed to help Mito and Kasumi over the fear that Naruto-kun and Satsuki-chan will hurt themselves at any minute… And with Naruto's rather fragile body, it could really hurt him." Grounded out Kushina as she laid her head down on the kitchen table where Minato released a small chuckle as he stroked his wife's hair softly.
"Well, I guess that's what happens when you introduce two children who simply connect with each other… They just don't know when to be quite…" Replied Minato as he glanced once more up towards the celling… Where the sound of pure silence ran through the house…
When both parents heard this, the two of them snapped to attention and quickly dashed off towards Naruto's room, which the two children were huddled up in.
It hadn't been over a month since Naruto and Satsuki met, and it wasn't longer that Naruto chose to stay in the civilian academy with Satsuki, which surprised the parents as they listened to him countlessly begging to enter the academy, only to be turned down due to his best interests.
"Naruto! Satsuki! Are you ok!" Screamed Minato as he threw open his "son's" bedroom door wide open, with Kushina hot on his tracks.
And what did the pair get awarded with? A pie to the face each, which then slowly began to slip from their faces and onto the floor.
"….."
"….."
"….."
"OH KAMI!" Screamed a voice loudly, which was then soon followed by a rather deep thumping sound along with the sounds of laughter running through the room.
This laughter was soon joined by another, more feminine voice.
"N-N-Naruto-kun! I-I- I can't- br- breathe!" Squealed out a voice as the feminine owner of said voice soon fell towards the ground in a huff, joining in with the other voice as the two Namikaze parents simply stared forwards in pure shock after the surprise pie to the face.
However, as soon as the shock and surprise ran out, a sudden demonic pressure was felt by the two laughing children, causing them to immediately stop their laughing and look on towards the source of the demonic power.
And sure enough… A glowing red Kushina was smiling at them, causing the two to shiver.
"… Na… Ru… To… Kun…" Ground out Kushina in a deathly tone, deliberately making the pauses in her word as she took a step closer with each pause.
Raising her hand up towards the sky slightly, Kushina gave her "son" a death smile before standing directly in front of him with her demonic like smile still in place.
"YOU BAKA!"
(One hour later…)
"Why… Why did you do that? I could have taken it…" Mumbled Satsuki as she clenched her tiny hands into a fist.
Staring down towards Naruto's face, Satsuki could only release a small sigh of irritation as she glared down towards the blond haired seven year old lying in bed with a massive swell propped up on his head as he laid there in silence.
"Baka… Now what am I supposed to do? You've been asleep for hours and i haven't been able to do anything but study since kaa-chan and tou-san were busy… And Kushina-san said that because of the prank she wouldn't take me home…" Grumbled out Satsuki in a soft tone as she moved a single hand around Naruto's face for a moment, making sure to rub the whisker marks sitting upon his face as she did so, which was secretly one of her favourite past times, before moving her hand up towards the now purple bump sitting upon his head… Well the two bumps since the idiot jumped in front of her to stop Kushina-san's hit to the head. Thus resulting in two super powered punches to Naruto's frail body, something that immediately caused Kushina to call for a doctor to help him.
Sadly, the doctors and medical ninja's were all busy, which caused the hokage to personally check over all his medical staff to see how they could be understaffed to a point they couldn't spare a single medical nin or doctor to help check up on their fragile son.
Moving her hand once more around Naruto's face, Satsuki let out a single tear due to how terrified she was at seeing Naruto's rather lifeless eyes once Kushina was about to smack her on the head, only for him to take the hit.
It was like a light switched off as he fell onto the floor… And it was so frightening to a point that something had come out of the event… Her two crimson eyes holding a single tomoe.
Sitting on her chair besides the bed, Satsuki moved to lower her head down towards Naruto's heart where the soft patter of heartbeats hit her ears as she continued to gaze towards Naruto's sleeping face.
Narrowing her crimson eyes at him once more, the girl softly rubbed her head on his chest.
"You're my only friend since I was considered a failure in just about everything revolving around being a ninja, and because I'm from a clan of ninja's… That makes me an outcast… Only my mother and older brother don't see me as a disgrace… And if my twin knew what disgrace was… I'm pretty sure he would look at me like that as well…" Cried the girl silently as she rested her head on Naruto's chest with her long hair fanning out over Naruto's and her body as she laid there in silence.
"Ok… Even I would feel bad if I did this to someone…" Muttered Kurama as he glanced over towards a silent Naruto who was sitting within his Yin energy pool with a look of grief on his face as he continued to manually increase his Yin release so that it would match up towards his now only slightly larger yang energy.
Not breaking his position Naruto's face continued to hold the grief like position it was stuck in.
"I know Kurama… And I do feel bad… I could have easily healed the damage as Kushina's hand left me, but I didn't take into the consideration of how fragile this body is, even with the large amount of Yang energy it possessed. I underestimated this form since in my body I was easily able to survive a bisection and even have my skin strong enough to block rather weak kunai slashes and ninjutsu attacks… I guess I was just used to how my body could literally survive anything should I have any energy left within me…" Spoke Naruto, his voice running through the mindscape as he sat within his yin energy without the slightest of movements as he floated in the silver-ish energy.
Huffing, Kurama continued to lie down on his pillow.
"Well… From what I've seen, that line of thought is acceptable since I have seen it through your memories... After all, taking on Shikaku at the age of thirteen, surviving a literal bloodbath gained from Danzo and his cronies… And then there was the whole training from those pesky falcons and finally, to top it all off, the leader of Akatsuki you killed… If anyone would have a decent enough reason to be overconfident, it would most definitely be you…" Replied Kurama as his mind briefly went back over towards the encounters he spoke of, one of which was Naruto walking away from the Yahiko pain body which was being burned to ashes.
Still floating slightly in his Yin energy, the blond child mentally nodded.
"But even then… It was arrogance at the fact that I SHOULD have been able to heal what caused Satsuki here such stress… Not only did I forget that due to the excess amount of Yang energy, which is nearly perfectly matched with my Yin energy, I also forgot that my Yin-Yang energy pool is still nowhere near as large enough to automatically heal me at instant speeds… Either way, I can always improve my capacity as I have a longer amount of time to train in my energies. Then when I did before… Either way, I don't even know if the Akatsuki is even around in this place, or if they are even evil like before…" Thought Naruto as he simply directed his Yin and Yang energies, while also increasing his Yin energy, into a combined pool that sat just behind the white chakra pool that was cascading down in a waterfall like fashion.
Rolling his eyes beneath his closed eyelids, Kurama released a tired sigh.
"From what I saw through your and the other Kurama's memories, nearly everything is exactly the same. So there is a large chance at Akatsuki is here in this… Reality I guess… And although the memories were nearly identical, there shouldn't be anything else changing. Best bet brat? Continue to train and hope that Akatsuki won't become a pain in the ass for you." Grumbled out Kurama before falling silent, leaving a rather happy Naruto as he slowly opened his eyes, showing a crimson set within the Yin energy pool.
"I guess… And since I can actually now feel my energy in sync… I'm going to wake up now…" Thought Naruto before his body began to break up into white particles before disappearing within the depths of his Yin energy pool.
Kurama didn't even say a goodbye since he was sealed in the brat.
Sending a burst of Yin and Yang energy into his head, which instantly healed the rather painful, to his current body, bruise. Naruto slowly opened his eyes before smiling down towards the now asleep Satsuki before lifting his head up a bit and moving a single hand over towards Satsuki's head, where he then began to gently stroke the girls long raven black hair.
"You know… Even if this is a different reality that I've been stuck in… You're still the same as the other Satsuki… I can feel it you know… But… Unlike the other Satsuki I knew… I'm going to help you grow into someone who will make everyone else jealous of you… While they neglect you now… They will simply irritate themselves at the loss of someone as amazing as you when you develop and grow…" Muttered Naruto softly before moving a single lock of hair that was covering her right eye before tucking it behind her ears, causing the girl to slowly awake from her slumber with her still crimson eyes staring directly towards Naruto's crimson eyes.
Giving a smile, Naruto tiled his head a bit.
"Had enough sleep Satsuki-chan?" Asked Naruto, causing the girl to stare at him in pure silence for a moment… Before moving her body around to lung at Naruto and hold her hand next to his.
"Naruto! Please don't do that again! I was so scared that you-" "Died? Please Satsuki-chan… Have a little faith in me! Remember, the two of us are going to train and become badass ninja's!" Shouted Naruto joyfully as he hugged the girl to his chest…
Where her nipples erect?
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Ignoring the rather odd thought, Naruto continued to joyfully hug his friend before pulling away from her and giving a single thumbs up that Guy himself would be proud of.
"Yosh! Let's start out training right know! I know a perfect little place that will help us get super strong together, just make sure not to tell anyone where it is ok?" Asked Naruto as he suspiciously glanced around side to side, something that made Satsuki let out a giggle as she nodded at him.
"Ok Naruto-kun… But do you happen to know how to turn my sharingan off? Kushina-san told me I have to stop sending chakra towards my eyes… But I don't even know how I'm doing that…" Asked Satsuki with an embarrassed blush on her face, causing Naruto to chuckle in his head as he simply moved a hand towards her forehead.
Using a small bit of his chakra, Naruto severed the chakra Satsuki was subconsciously sending into her eyes, before letting out a wink.
"Guess I'm ahead of you then Satsuki-chan! I already know how my chakra feels like." Spoke naruto, thumbing his chest as he looked up towards the celling heroically… Only to feel someone glaring at him…
And that someone… Was Satsuki…
"How do you know how to use chakra… If you weren't born with any?" Asked Satsuki as she glared at the now confused Naruto, before he suddenly understood what she meant and lifted his hands up in a surrendering fashion.
"Ohh, my chakra… right… Don't tell anyone… And this will be our secret… But I created my own chakra using a super-secret technique I accidently learned..." Whispered Naruto into Satsuki's ears, causing the girl to look up at Naruto in pure awe, as displayed with the rather weird stars appearing within her coal black eyes.
"Can you-" "Teach you it? Oh I plan to… But first… We are going to need to train your body and mind, along with your current chakra. Reason being… It's safer to do the technique when you're older. In fact, I only survived by pure luck when I accidently created the technique." Replied Naruto, cutting off the girl as he poked her small nose with his forefinger.
Letting out a grin, Naruto grabbed hold of Satsuki's form before moving off the bed and moving towards the door to his room with Satsuki held within his arms in a bridal position.
Looking down, Naruto let out a happy grin before looking forwards toward the door… Where he let out a rather disturbed stare as he watched his "mother" Kushina staring towards the two at them with twin waterfall eyes with her hands grasped within each other as she stood at the open bedroom door.
"My… My naru-chan… Is this what people mean about their children growing up so fast? Should I worry about Kasumi-chan and Mito-chan also doing this with other boys in their school? I have no idea what I should be doing right now but I'm happy and sad at the same time… I-"
Blinking at the woman, Naruto slowly edged his right foot towards the door… Before smashing it shut into his mother's face, before simply turning around and looking towards his bedroom window.
Shaking his head at the thought, Naruto moved his head down towards Satsuki, before giving the girl within his grasp a rather blank stare as the girl was looking at him with the same crying happy expression as Kushina did, before sweat dropping as the girl trembled within his arms.
"What are you doing Satsuki?" Asked Naruto in a rather bland tone, causing the shivering girl within his grasp to fidget a bit before looking away from Naruto with a large blush.
"I-i-it's my first time… Please be gentle Naruto-kun." Muttered Satsuki as she sent glances towards him and his bed multiple times, causing the blond haired teen, whose eyes were once again blue, to simply freeze in place as his mind went over towards the girls answer…
Before shivering slightly.
"This feels really wrong considering that 1. She's seven. And 2. I'm mentally sixteen…" Thought Naruto for a moment… Before simply dropping the girl onto her small bottom and sitting across from her in a mediative position.
Ignoring her rather cute pout, Naruto lifted a single hand up, silencing the girl before sending her a serious stare.
"For now Satsuki-chan. I am your teacher. Listen up, I'm going to help you unlock your chakra, since mine works in a similar way to everyone else's ok. But, when I do. The two of use will then go to the training ground tomorrow to train in a technique called the "leaf floating exercise" where you will be balancing a leaf using your chakra. Once you can do that for 2-minutes straight, you will be given two leaves and must then hold them both for 4-minutes. This will continue till you have five leaves that you will hold for ten minutes. Do you get this Satsuki-chan?" Asked Naruto, gaining a determined nod from Satsuki as she raised her hand up into the air.
Raising a single brow, Naruto nodded towards her.
"Yes Satsuki?" Asked Naruto, getting another serious stare from the girl.
"Tomorrow is Monday and we have school." Replied Satsuki, causing Naruto to simply nod for a second with his eyes closed… Before snapping them open with a smile sitting upon his face.
"Excellent! This will make it even harder for you since you will have your attention split between the teacher and your control. Thanks for telling me Satsuki." Replied Naruto, gaining a rather bland look from Satsuki as she glanced over towards the left of Naruto's room where a set of homework assignments that were left untouched from when she entered Naruto's home hours ago.
Lowering her head with a miserable cloud over her head, the girl released a small sigh.
"Yes sensei." Replied the girl, causing Naruto grin as he moved a single hand towards Satsuki and rubbed her head softly.
Sending the girl a wink, Naruto moved his hand away from Satsuki.
"Then… Let's go unlock your chakra then."
And that is it. Hope you enjoyed the chapter and all.