CH 1: two special days

It's 12:48pm in the mushroom kingdom, small mushroom people known as toads were running around with their normal busy lives. But today was big; today is the ultimate Mario kart race to see who was the champion of the road. Everyone was riled up and were off to the track to see who became Victorious. On a nearby hill with a small tree pointed toward a huge pink castle (peach castle) stood the hero of the mushroom kingdom Mario. Mario sighed and looked out into the distance, he was a finalist in the race, but before he went to the race he decided to get a little fresh air.

"Ahhh..." He leaned up against the tree and dosed into his thoughts

"Hmm, the big race should be fun, but for some reason It feels like there's more to today than just that…" he closed his eyes.

"as if something else is going to happen, something very importa-"

"MARIO!"

The sudden out burst startled Mario so much he jumped up and hit his head on a tree branch and fell on the ground. Mario sat up and held his head, after a few moments he was better and saw three figure running up the hill to him. One looked almost like him only his shirt and hat were green and the hat had an L on it. And his overalls were more of a blueish purple color. And he was taller then Mario too! It was his little brother Luigi, he can be a coward at times but he always finds courage when his friends need him. The second figure was a young woman wearing a long pink dress with a sapphire in the middle of the top, she was holding up as she runs. She had red high heel shoes and has long blond hair and wore a gold crown on her head with rubies and sapphires. She was the beloved ruler of the mushroom kingdom princess peach! She's kind, generous, and at sometimes brave. She constantly is kidnapped by the evil king bowser, but Mario always jumps in to save her. The two had been in love for a small while but decided to wait before anyone said anything. And the third figure was a type dinosaur. He had lime green skin with a red sattle on his back, he had a big round nose and wore orange shoes. It was his best friend Yoshi! Yoshi is a gentle and kind dinosaur he has a long sticky red tongue that has been proven useful through his adventures. He's quick on his feet and very fast. However Yoshi is also a skilled fighter witch makes him even more proud to help his friends. The three ran up to Mario who had just gotten up.

"Mario! We have been looking all over for you!" Peach stated

"Yeah! Oh and sorry for scaring you like that." Luigi laughed rubbing the back of his head.

"The race starts in an hour, and we wanted to see if you were ready to go!" Yoshi added. Mario smiled and jumped up.

"Don't worry I'm ready for big race! I just thought I'd get some fresh air first…" he looked back towards the castle.

"Mario… is something wrong?" Peach asked. Mario looked back at her.

"Oh! No no… Nothing's wrong princess, it's just that I have a strange feeling I just can't seem to shake off."

"Strange feeling?" Yoshi asked confused

"About what?" Luigi added

"Well, I feel like something very big is going to happen. Bigger then the race."

"Hmmm… y-you don't think it could be an attack from B-bowser?" Luigi shivered

"I doubt it! Bowser might be a baddie, but even he doesn't attack during a kart race! He even promised not to attack during the final Race." Yoshi answered

"Well, I don't know. I might just be going Coo-Coo crazy from all the excitement for the race." Mario said as he adjusted his cap. "I'm sure it'll pass." He then looked at his friends

"I should do just fine in the race if you three are there to cheer me on!"

" And we will!" Yoshi said happily. But then he looked glum

"I just wish I was still in the race just a little longer…" he said sadly

"Well, that's the shame of losing in the second race " Luigi laughed while patting the dinosaur's sholder. Yoshi growled at the remark.

"Um, excuse me but, you lost in FIRST race!" he shot back. Luigi backed up and stammered

"W-w-well if Wario hadn't fart bombed me I wouldn't have passed out and flown off the track." The princess sighed and got between them

"boys, let's not fight we need to get to the race. You coming Mario?" Mario nodded

"Lets- a-go" he shouted. The four of them ran down the hill and headed to the race.

Meanwhile In another world where ampaermorphic animals live with humans , a blue blur shot by leaving behind a nice wind. It ran through a huge loop-de-loop and didn't stop till it reached a cliff that over looked empire city . The blur turned out to be sonic the hedgehog, the hero of his world he ran at the speed of sound and has stopped numborous deeds from his nemesis Dr. Eggman. But today was also a special day here too! Today was the grand opening of the Sonic the hedgehog museum. The people were so grateful for all the things he's done the decided to build a museum based on his life and heroic deeds as a way to say thanks. But before Sonic went to the ceremony he decided to get some fresh air as well but just like Mario, Sonic had something on his mind.

"This should be cool! A huge musuem! Nice of them... but it kinda feels like something more bigger more important is going to happen…" Sonic shook his head

"What am I thinking? The worst that could happen is Eggman attacking. And even if that happens dealing with that will be as hard as cumpling up and throwing away a piece of paper." Sonic did a few leg stretch's.

"I'd better get going! Wouldn't want to be late to the party!" then he laughed to himself "What am I saying!? Me?! Late?! Never! I really must be going crazy!" the hedehog then took off.

In the streets of Empire cirty… a long car was driving down the freeway, sitting in the front seats were a red and gray robot circular headed with a skinny body and was floating., and a yellow cube headed robot that was a lot like the first one only more hunched over. Orbot and Cuebot and standing in the back was a robotic duplicate of Sonic, metal sonic. A video screen popped up and on the screen appeared a bald man in a red jacket with yellow buttons and he really needed to work out, plus he wore black pants with black boots, and he had a huge brown mustache. He spoke to the robots.

"Listen, I'm just sending you a reminder how you only got ONE shot at this mission. So whatever you do DON'T screw it up!"

Metal sonic nodded being unable to speak

"well, to be honest Metal… I was mostly talking to Orbot and Cuebot…"

"Oh come on boss…" Cuebot said sadly

"When have me and Orbot ever let you down?" and there was this long awkward silence in the car. But Eggman broke the silence and asked

"Do you REALLY want me to answer that?" Cuebot was about to say something when Orbot hit him on the head.

"No… I'd prefer not…" Orbot responded.

"good… now as for Metal, don't go trying anything! Remember who has remote access two your self destruct mode." Metal nodded again only his red eyes were glowing. He had betrayed Eggman before but now Eggman had managed to hack into his main frame. Although Metal still loathed working for Eggman, he really had no other choice at the moment. But destroying Sonic was still his main objective.

"Now that that's all settled… GET GOING!" then the transmission ended and the video screen went down. Orbot and Cuebot looked at eachother nervously.

"Well, let's move. We don't want to upset the boss." Orbot sighed

"Yeah! He was pretty close to dismantling us last time we messed up." Cuebot reminded while shivering. Orbot nodded and pressed a button turning on the invisible cloak for the car and started speeding down the street.

Yep, here's the new version of chapter one! To be honest, this chapter was already pretty good all by itself. So there aren't that many changes to it. And no, metal Sonic does not speak in this story… yet…

So, anyway what do you think of the new version? Let me know please!