{The Speakeasy}

[Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 4 . Nov 1

This story is coming up nicely. Bubblegum and Susan are 'really' liking the new Finn. Wonder which will ride Finn first before Canyon? Wink wink. Keep up the good work.]

Hehehe, thanks for the lovely comments. I do believe the question has just been answered, lol.

[Guest chapter 4 . Nov 11

loving this story so far, really hope we get the next chapter soon]

Sweet. Love you...um...loving it, n...yeah.

Love you loving it, heheh.

[The Book of Eli chapter 5 . Nov 16

Interesting very interesting...]

Thanks. Writing it is just as interesting, I assure u.

[Atomsk the Pirate King chapter 5 . Nov 16

Awesome. Bonnibel is such a perv lol. Nothing like a nice romantic boat ride to the duo. But were Finn and Susan still kissing on the boat or doing tier 15? Anyway keep it up.]

Hahaha, yeah, I don't doubt she is. Well, aside from the fact that she has pretty much the whole town wired to watch, I don't doubt that she's got microcams and tons of surveillance equipment covering her friends that they don't even know about. The lady's nuts! She is the cutest control freak who has ever ruled!

Ah, yeah. Against Jakes wishes..."THEY WENT INTO THAT. They DID-DO-TIER-FIFTEEN!"...and Finn is now the better for it, hahaha.

[King69 chapter 5 . Nov 19

To be soon]

Done and done, hehe.

[The man chapter 5 . Nov 21

Nice been waiting to long for an update after this fic you mind making a danny phantom one would really like to see danny give it to valerie]

Yeah, sorry bout that. Had a bit of a grumble that life threw at me. Sapped all the mojo outta me, but, here I am! We're back, baby!

Ah, a DP fan, huh? Yeah, I'm an alright DP fan myself, but, Valerie isn't one of the gals that really turns me on. I'm a LOT more of a fan of Maddie and Paulina. I've had a story prepared for them for quite some time, but, the spark I had for it has kinda died down. I'd love to get it out though, if the 'need' arises, lol. Till then though, I'm waiting for the tide to come in, same as you, heheh.

[Anonymous chapter 6 . 5h ago

Haven't commented in a bit, but I'm still reading and enjoying this story. I've gotten over my issue with Finn's form, now I'm just picturing it as an older looking Finn doing these things and it's letting me enjoy the story instead of getting flustered over semantics.

Sex scene was still nice, you haven't lost your touch there. Always tickles me the way you go from lavishly describing a vagina as being a luminous, beautiful, intoxicating exotic flower one sentence then in the next you're being frank and calling it a cunt.

My favorite part of this story so far is Bubblegum, her subplot is really fun. She shoulda just uploaded everything into Finn when she realized it was a problem, but of course she just wasn't thinking straight for once.

Kind of worried how this situation will end for Finn, because right now he's a dreamy sex god all the ladies are into but what will happen after this? Will he go back to normal, won't that just disappoint everyone? Or will he stay like this forever, cause that would be pretty weird. I'd hope something will happen like he bangs them so good that they appreciate his inner heart or something sappy like that so that they don't even need him to be in hunk form, cause I'm not too fond on the other alternatives. But in the end it is your story and I'm just along for a sexy ride full of fluids and muffled groaning.]

Heya there. I guess you're related in some way to that other Anon from earlier, heheh. I'm in agreement to some extent over altering Finn's form and keeping him as him. The only big reason I was throwing that into the ring was because I can't really say it's plausible for the...well...little guy, heheh, to do such a big gal like Canyon unless he roughly increased in size as well. Also, breaking his innocence like this is kinda urking me too, but, what can ya do, yeah? If he's going to please a roughly experienced woman like Canyon...and possibly other gals along the way, lol, he's gotta know what it takes. And with the way Prubs over-engineers things, on occasion, she would've gone ahead and schlepped a buncha sex knowledge into his head and and into the nanites anyway, hahaha.

Lol, yeah, mixing it up with the prose comes roughly from the fact that sex in its own rights is both a majestic moment and also one that turns insanely animalistic, even at a moment's notice, depending on what the characters are experiencing at the time. Also, and this part is kinda annoying...terms are limited and repetition bugs the living hell out of me to no end, lol. Seriously, it's easier to describe COMBAT in comparison to sex, because, what's being described is basically a few minutes to several hours of repetitive motion, hahaha. That doesn't happen with the same frequency in combat as it does in sex...well...unless you're describing the guts and bare mechanics of a firearm or something, but, even then, that isn't an important detail that one should dwell on, in battle, unless it's intimate, like a duel...or a grueling stalemate. Then, we get lots of back and forth...but it's more depressing and boring than sex, hahaha.

...ehem...moving on, lol...

Finn's experience with Susan was a good deal mixed, I'd say, as was evident in the shifting vocab. Whole new worlds mixed with hard pleasure and pumping action...yeah, confused and mixed prose, enter stage right, lol. Well, not confused, but, yeah, definitely mixed: majestic plus downright raunchy, heheh...ESPECIALLY when it came to Prubs fingering herself until she exploded all over faux Finn, hahaha.

Yeah, speaking of which, Bubblegum's got a fairly unpredictable undercurrent in the storyline going on there. Even I'm not exactly sure where that one's going. Or am I? Heheh, only time will tell.

Lol, tru, she shoulda just tried to cram it all in on one upload, but, it appeared she was thinking more with her lips than she was with her brain. Even geniuses get blindsided when they're horny, it seems.

We're of a like mind when it comes loving the little hero as he is. A guy like him deserves love as is, yeah? On the other hand, as is demonstrated in the show...that size don't fit all, unfortunately. Heheh, I just might make it fit them all, though...because...my fapfic, not theirs! Hahaha!

I'd say more about the ending, but...oh, wait, heheh, I WILL say more about how it ends, because, um...I'mma write it, lol. I'm just not gonna say much about it from this point, hahaha.

Thanks for your correspondence. Do stay tuned for more exiting adventures of...myeah, nvm. This ain't no TV ad. lol.

{Author's Notes}

Arrighty, y'all. Thanks for sticking with me thus far. Sooo, yeah, why the slow release? Short answer: money problems, sickies, and, Susan's adorable, but, she's not exactly one of my top picks for gals, on AT. She was more of a curiosity. Combine those factors together, and, I really had to plow through this one to get it done. I really did wanna do at least a one off with her and also a Canyon, but, only time will tell if I have the jets to see this part through to the end.

Originally, I was planning on, lol, frustrating Bubblegum even more by making her do some kind of live edit to the nanites, resulting in her not even being able to touch herself while watching or even reach climax with them...or at all, and having her absolutely pissed about it, ultimately misplacing blame on Finn, mostly because he's the closest target. Buuuut...I didn't wanna be that mean to her, heheheh, and, I really wanted to give her her own pussy party. It's the least I could do, since she didn't actually have Finn himself to fuck around with...literally. I'm kinda glad I didn't go that route, in the end, because, I found the actual release a little difficult to navigate already, heheh.

Sooo, so, yeah, right now I'm just taking a bit of a break to recoup and recharge, so I can finish this one up.

Ohh, right, also, howzabout a little interactivity with the AT readerbase?

I was thinking of a few different branches off, on where to bring the story for the next part, and, I'm at a bit of an impasse. So, whatcha think...should I go light and whimsical for part II? Maybe darker? Maybe more actionie? Lemme know in the comments, n, help make my mind up for me, lol.

Alrighty. Thank you all for staying with. I hope you're enjoying reading this as much as I am in making it. Again, I could really, really use some help, money-wise, so, if anyone could spare a bit for me, please visit my woefully underdone patron page and consider becoming a patron, /demoncasket, at the obvious site, or, if you've a few microcoins, of the Bit variety, that you'd be so kind to spare, please consider donating to my wallet, address: 16ydk2MWPNFK7hMYUB97R8tRGZgdpGAXyg

Every little bit counts, and, my thanks to those who have helped me along so far. If any of my supporting fans have any suggestions on future content, please feel free to drop me a PM. Who knows? Maybe we could even hammer out a full on story together.

Good day and good luck.

A'Outrance,

D.