So I've decided to leave the original Underfantasy and And the Dream Goes on where they are and post the revision as its own story. That way y'all can see where I changed stuff and where I didn't! It's not because I felt bad about getting rid of something one person may or may not have enjoyed. Not at all! ^_^;
…moving on!
In the next few days I will post the first three chapters of the revision, just to give y'all a taste and see if it's to your liking. If so, great! If not… that's par for the course, really. =/ After chapter 3, though, I'm going to wait about a month before posting the rest. I need a little more time to get more buffer under me. -.-;;
I hope you'll enjoy the new, (hopefully improved) Underfantasy! See y'all there! :D