They Call Me Killer Chapter 5: Telling Max, a maximum ride fanfic

We flew him to the hospital and risked being seen. By now he is unconscious. We told the doctor's he jumped off a building. HAHA, that was a lie.

We were waiting in the waiting room. I know we should've have fled New York, but Max said we had to stay to make sure he was going to be all right. I didn't think he was going to.

You learn well, my friend.

We aren't friends! FUCK OFF! I never meant to hurt him that much!

I guess my anger rubs off on you.

What do you mean?!

I mean, soon enough we can become one.

Well, I'm sorry to say, that's not going to happen.

I'm afraid it will, and there is now stopping it now.

You're just trying to scare me!

It's good that I can tell the truth and scare a little wimp like you.

You'll learn to like it.

NO!!

"Fang? Fang, are you okay?" Max asked.

I mumbled a reply.

"Can you tell me what happened? The flock is asleep." She whispered.

I turned my gaze on Max, my pale skin, even paler. My dark brown eyes' color was faded. My face was expressionless. Everything was cold, and timid.

"Its him." I whispered.

"Who is 'him'?" She asked, brown eyes concerned.

"It's Killer."

"Who is he?"

"He is trapped. He is inside my head."

I looked around frantically when I heard footsteps, but they just faded away.

Max waited for me to speak.

"He talks to me."

"He-" I started.

"Wait." Said Max, getting up to close the window that was making a lot of racket.

When the window was closed, I could smell the antiseptic smell even more, and hear the silence increasing in this part of the hospital. It's just like The School in many ways. I hated it here.

I met Max's gaze again, I spoke dark and coldly, "He told me to hurt him, he controlled me at first when I was teasing him. He stopped when he felt my anger, when that guy walked up to you and touched you. All it took was a little encouragement to let out all my rage at him. By the time I realized what I was doing, it was to late."

I lowered my head, "I'm so sorry. I really didn't mean to hurt him, or anyone."

I saw as Max began soaking it all in.

"It's okay Fang. Its just we were terrified when we saw you attack him. Your appearance changed. Your eyes went from dark brown, to black to a dark shade of crimson red. We thought you were going to kill him, and any other people that walked by. I wanted to get you off of him, but some how I couldn't. I never even saw you attack an Eraser with that much rage."

Max put her warm hand on top of my cold hand. She held it for a while then said,

"You are so cold and your skin is pale. You should try to get some rest."

I mumbled an okay and closed my eyes. Max never let go of my hand when I fell asleep.

I was outside. My feet stood cold on the grass coated with morning dew. It was black. I couldn't see. I timidly walked forward.

"72 hours, 22 minutes, 10seconds." Said a voice that echoed across the land.

"In that time, it will change you life."

"In that time, no one can be respected."

"No one can learn to trust."

"There will be no emotion."

"There will be only one thing to focus on."

A spotlight went on and I spotted a tall dark figure walking towards me.

"Me." The echo turned into a voice.

The figure had short black greasy hair. His eyes were a piercing red.

He laughed. It was evil. He knew something. I didn't.

He grinned at me, showing sharp yellow teeth.

"All in good time" He says.

Could that be Killer?

I know its short, Im typing the next chapter, so hopfully ill get it on by tomorrow. I need some help to decide what to do in the story. When reviewing, tell me if its a good idea if I make Killer a vampire, it would make the story alot longer, which is fine by me, as long as you guys like it.

TELL ME IF YOU WANT KILLER TO BE A VAMPIRE. (sorry that im giving that away...)

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I NEED TO KNOW. (even though i might do it anyways, tee hee)

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