A/N: OK, I know I only updated this yesterday, but I love this story and wanted to update. The next one I'll update is Drowning, but it won't be posted right away because of Mr. Contest. Yeah that's right, MR. CONTEST!! I said it. Oh, and if I don't update soon, then assume I've been arrested for the murder of my entire family, except my dog and my cat. I love them. Last night was torture. Right after I wrote the last chapter for this story and updated, I had to go with my mom and little sister and I was soooo pissed off. For no apparent reason. And then my little sister had to be an annoying little bitch and not shut up and I almost cussed her out and killed her, but I didn't 'cause my mom's all "ohh cussing is BAD! It makes you sound stupid!" She would have killed me if I had, so instead we got to Wall Mart and I left. Then they came looking for me and we had to go eat. It sucked. Now that your done listening (or rather reading) me spas at how horrible my family is, I'll stop. :P
Story: Fix Me
Rating: R (this chapter is why!!)
Genre: Romance/Angst... could sex be a genre?? ;) JK!
Chapter: 4 Open Up My Eager Eyes
Warnings: This is... (wait for it, wait for it... NOW) SLASH!!! Not into slash? Then how the hell did you get this far into this story?!? Dipshit... anyway, don't like, then make a new friend, namely the "back" button. This story also contains mentions of cutting. Not your thing? Go get a new hobby and shut the hell up.
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A/N 2: Ok, I'm in a mood. I said last chapter that there would be no sex in this story, and I'm sticking to that, but that doesn't mean there can't be... messing around in this. So yeah. You'll find out why no sex and it's a good reason. For those of you who follow my other story Drowning, it's gonna follow kinda the same plot line as this, but only in one regard. They'll be drastically different in everything else. And this story has more wry humor in it and it's more jaded than that one. So here you go. The chapter that made this story R rated.
WARNING: THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS GRAPHIC ALMOST SEX (BUT NOT QUITE) SCENES. IF YOU DON'T LIKE THAT, THEN PLEASE DO NOT READ! IT'S UP TO YOU. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
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Last time:
Blaise and Pansy looked at us for a moment, then both broke into to smiles and laughed.
I glared at them and Harry raised his eyebrow again.
Damn he's so sexy when he does that!
I mouthed 'Later' at him and smiled as Blaise and Pansy both smiled at Harry and shook his hand.
He looked slightly shocked.
Then I remembered something.
Harry has his own rooms...
Ohhh...
This is good...
This is VERY good...
Chapter 4:Open Up My Eager Eyes
ll Harry's POV ll
The remainder of the Potions class passed quickly.
Snape came over and looked at mine and Draco's potion and, for once, didn't have anything to say about it... bad at least.
Draco has this weird look on his face.
I'll have to ask him about that later.
Maybe he's gone crazy.
Wouldn't doubt it.
This class does that to a person.
Anyway...
Maybe I'm crazy...
I so lost my train of thought.
Well, the bell just rang.
Finally.
Draco grabbed my hand and is pulling me to the door.
Hmpf.
Dragging me around like this.
I'll have to teach him a lesson later.
"Hey! Watch it fairy boy!"
Great.
The Weasel has come to play.
"What was that?" asked Draco.
"So, Malfoy, you're a fairy as well I see."
"Sorry, I think you're mistaking me for Tinkerbell."
Draco looked down at himself.
"Yep. There is a definite lack of wings and sparkly dust here."
I burst out laughing at that.
"Think that's funny Potter?"
Ha.
Weasel actually talked to me.
"Actually... YES! I do! That was good Draco."
"Thank you," he said, quite smugly I might add.
Weasley turned as red as his hair.
We should sell tickets to have people see him do that.
It's very amusing.
While I was laughing to myself, Weasel drew back his fist and...
He punched me.
Oh hell no.
Draco righted me, and so I repaid Weasel for that little... whatever it was.
Ha.
One punch from me and he was on the floor.
Serves him right, the little bitch.
"Weasel," I spat.
"Don't EVER fuck with me, got that? I'm not going to put up with your crap anymore. So don't try it. Just go to hell."
I turned around and walked away.
ll Draco's POV ll
Holy shit.
Harry kicked Weasley's ass with one punch!
Glad I'm on his good side now.
I ran after him, catching up with him a few corridors down.
He looked really upset.
"Harry?" I asked gently.
He didn't answer me, just kept walking fast.
He got to what must have been his rooms, spat the password, and went inside, me trailing behind him.
He collasped on a couch and put his head in his hands.
I sat down next to him and pulled him to me.
"You ok?" I asked him, still softly.
"Yeah," he said after a moment.
I reached out and touched his face.
His skin is so smooth.
Sexy.
I tilted his chin up and looked into his eyes again.
They're so beautiful.
I feel like I could drown in them.
I wrapped my other arm around him, one hand still resting on his face.
I pull him even closer, never breaking eye contact with him.
My heart is pounding so heart I think it's going to explode.
In a moment that contains forever, we just sit there, staring into each others eyes.
If I could live forever...
Then I lean down and kiss him.
It starts out gentle, tender.
I lick his bottom lip and he opens his mouth.
God he tastes so good.
We both deepen the kiss.
I reach down and grasp the edges of his shirt, and I pull it over his head, only breaking the kiss for a moment.
He moans into my mouth as I grab one of his nipples and squeeze.
I pull my own shirt off and then attach myself to his neck, sucking and biting, listening to the most beautiful sound in the word.
Harry moan my name.
I'm in heaven and I'm sure Harry is too.
I can't take it anymore.
I reach down and begin to undo his pants, the shoes long gone, when he pulls away.
I look at him curiously.
"No sex..." he pants, slightly out of breath.
"Not yet, it's too soon."
I kiss him again.
"That's fine," I murmur against his mouth.
"But that doesn't mean I can't ravish your perfect body does it?" I squeeze him through his pants.
He gasps and his eyes flutter.
So I do it again.
"Of course... it doesn't..." he finally manages.
I go back to sucking on his neck and finish undoing his pants.
I push them down and start to kiss lower, sucking on his nipples.
He grabs my hairs and continues moaning.
Perfect.
I push his boxers down as well, leaving nothing between me and his perfect body that I love so much.
I stroke him for a minute while I continue licking, sucking, kissing, and biting his body on my way down.
I get to my knees and look up at him.
Then I realize that somewhere in all this we stood up.
Whatever.
He looks kind of dazed, his pupils slightly dilated, his already messy hair even more messed up, panting slightly...
He looks delicious.
I lick the tip of his erection and he gasps again.
"D-Draco," he moans.
That's all it takes.
I take him into my mouth as far as he can go and he screams my name.
He tastes REALLY good.
He begins to thrust in and out of my mouth, which just turns me on even more.
"Dr-Draco," he moaned again after awhile.
I stop sucking for a moment and look at him again.
He's really dazed now and looks so shaggable.
But not yet.
"Cum for me," I say against his throbbing member.
He needs no more direction and when I reattach my mouth to him he comes with a scream.
I drink all of him up.
I've waited so long for this.
After he's done, I lick the tip of his cock, just to make sure there's no more cum on it.
He starts to fall so I stand up and wrap my arms around his waist.
I kiss him lightly and whisper into his ear.
"I love you Harry."
He smiles tiredly at me.
I pick him and carry him to the bed, then take off my own pants and climb in next to him.
"I'll be right here when you wake up, love," I tell him.
He nods and rests his head on my chest.
I run my hands through his hair and soon his breathing evens out.
He's out like a light.
And so adorable.
I pull him closer and smile, drifting off myself, finally happy with the way my life is going.
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A/N: So, did that suck?? That's the first time I've written a "sex scene" even if there's no sex... yet. If this was good, then there will be more. And it'll be from Harry's POV. This suckers 11 pages. Wow. PLEASE REVIEW AND TELL ME IF IT WAS GOOD OR IF IT SUCKED!! I will greatly appreciate it.
Next chapter:
They tell the entire school about their relationship,
Draco gets a look into Harry,
We jump forward in time a little,
And you get to see some good 'ole fluffy romance with the boys.
Can't wait eh? I kno you can't! Look for the next chapter soon!! Till then, tootles! (REVIEW!!)
P.S. The chapter title is from Mr. Brightside by the Killers.