Chapter 2
Nellie woke up hours later in a cold dark place. She opened her brown eyes and saw nothing, but darkness. Darkness and a dim light across the room, the light belonged to the hall which was outside the door. Naturally after a few moments spent wondering where she was, she tried to move. She pulled her right hand away from the wall only to find that she was stuck there, chains bound her to the wall. Frantically, Nellie tugged at the chains sobbing thinking that this couldn't happen to her. She was a good girl, never really did anything to terrible, lied occasionally, but that was it. She slaved away all day and night for Mr. Todd, wishing that he would love her, but he never did. All that time longing for the touch of someone else had driven her insane, insanity lead her to become numb.
As she still tried to free herself from her shackles, the hand cuffs that bound her ripped into her pale skin leaving small cuts. From down the hall she could her screams of other people being tortured and killed, she would rather let herself bleed out than suffer that kind of death. She had heard stories of what the Death Eaters could do, what they did to muggles like her. People they took in never came back out, they never got away.
The door to the right of hers unlocked itself as Nellie heard almost twenty people scream. This made her think, not just one person screamed. If they had entered her room she would be the only one screaming because she was the only person in the room. She thought back to before when she first heard the screaming, it had always been heaps of people at once. Why was she in a room by herself? She wondered. This was either a very good thing or a very bad thing, judging by the shackles that bound her it was not good.
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more to come i just wanted to post what i had so far.....tell me whatcha think :)