(That Scene when Gillbert and Oz are out walking, Alice is left napping at the apartment. Oz still doesn't know that Raven=Gillbert.)
"I left Alice with a note that said, 'I went with Raven on a loooooong bathroom break!" Oz winked mischievously. Raven blushed furiously and covered his nose to prevent a possible nosebleed. "You-you-" They were passing by a dark alley now, and Oz pushed Raven against the brick wall. It was almost night now, and the streets were emptying.
For a fifteen year old boy, Oz was quite strong. What a turn on, Raven caught himself thinking. "What-what are you DOING!?" He suppressed a moan as he slid down the side of the building. Oz was giving him a hickey. "No one will know," he breathed lustily. "Master- this-is-ohh," Raven submissively stopped his futile attempts and gave into pleasure. The young blonde's hands slid lower, lower, lower into the older man's pants. Despite Raven's protests, his erection said a different story. "Ah-h, Master-" The only sound of the night was Raven's heavy breathing. The fifteen year old encouraged the erection before covering it with his own.
The two were going at it like there was no tomorrow. "Oz-faster, faster, ohhh, yes! YES! Ah!" "GILBERT!" The two climaxed. In the midst of their pleasure, Oz flushed with embarrassment. "I-I'm sorry, you just...remind me of my old friend, Gillbert..." Raven tipped his hat to cover his eyes. "SO YOU SCREAM OUT HIS NAME INSTEAD OF MINE!? BITCH!" The younger teen looked at him curiously but said nothing.
An old hobo had paused with his grocery cart/ belongings to see what all the commotion was about. He shrugged, said, "That's some good yaoi," and kept strolling. The two shakily got up and began walking back to the apartment.
This was my first short lemon, and while I laughed hysterically at some of the sentences I wrote, I think it's OK. But really, that's up to the reviewers I s'pose. *shrug* Sorry about the random-ness....but ACCEPT IT! EMBRACE IT!