Umm… Well, this is my first fic (that, may I note, is only a prologue so far…) and all that yadda yadda yadda… so please be nice! K, danks!

-DarkShadow97

p.s. I know it's really short...sorry!



The street lamp flickered. The wind blew softly, slowly picking up speed. Thick, black clouds hung above the city, swallowing it in darkness. Everyone was inside, hoping to wait out the approaching storm. A pair of cat's eyes glinted somewhere in the shadows. The streets were empty, and nothing made a sound.

It was the perfect night for a murder.


Whoa. That was weird.

The alarm buzzer still rang in Eva's ears. She sat up in bed and stretched her arms up, while yawning. She twisted her wrist, and then she moved on to her legs and feet, eventually standing up.

Eva Evercrest was a semi-tall, sixteen year old girl, who had a fit body and a good build. She did well in school and was a talented piano player. She lived with her parents in Tofino, Canada. Her favorite cereal was "Fruity Whirls", but that's beside the point.

There was a note on the table. It read:

Eva,

Your father and I will be going out to diner tonight, and won't be back until late. I put some supper in the microwave for you. Love you muchly,

X's and O's, Mom.

Typical mom, always in a rush. Eva thought as she went over to the microwave to see what her mom had left. She yawned sleepily.

Baked potatoes, steak, and beets. Great. My favorite. Sarcasm was a big thing in Eva's personal life. She sighed and walked over to the cupboard. Now for something truly great.

She pulled out the box. She picked up a bowl and spoon on her way to the table. Her parents were both designers, so Eva's house was high-class, and well-organized.

The perfect family living in the perfect house.

Eva sighed again and poured her cereal. She put it back in the cupboard and grabbed the milk out of the fridge. She dipped her spoon in the milky mess. Eva grabbed the newspaper laid out on the table and read the headline. A typical school day in the life of Eva Evercrest.

The school day had been fairly boring so far. It had crept by slowly for Eva. The good news was, her most-hated subjects – like Math, Science, and French – were now over, so the rest of the day would be a breeze. And it was lunch, which meant she could talk to Hara, her best friend.

"Say what?"

"I said that I had a strange dream last night. It was weird!" Eva told her Hara. "I'm going to try and draw the guy out."

"There was a guy?!?" Hara asked, sounding interested. "Tell all." Hara was the type to pump someone for all of the information. Eva loved that about her.

"As I said, I'll try to draw it, and fill you in from there." Eva replied calmly.

"Well, at least tell me what he looks like. Spare me that strain."

"Ok," Eva shrugged. "He had long blond hair, which was pulled back in a braid with bangs, and matching eyes that shone like gold. He was wearing white gloves and a long red coat –"

"He sounds dreamy," Hara interrupted.

"– Yeah, yeah, whatever. As I was saying…uh… what else… oh!"

"What? What?" Hara was intently listening now.

"He was short!"


So…..SORRY ED!!!!! PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!!! Anywho's…… did you like it? Have any ideas? Anything I can change/improve on? If so, please REVIEW! (Wow, some of my sister's (and Ed's!) habit's of yelling are rubbing off on me! heehee) So yea… I'll try to post more stuff soon…O.o Dank-you!