I'm really sorry that I haven't updated in a while, but I've been having trouble with this story. So, here is what I'm going to do. I'll put down what the requirements are, and if you guys want to, you can write the 1st paragraph or so. The lucky winner gets a shout out and an entire paragraph of admiration towards them, and their paragraph featured in the story. Just PM me, and I'll pick the one that I like best.

REQUIREMENTS

has to be in Bella's point of view

2. here is a submission that a reader sent me... I like the angle they're going with....

What can Edward say to defend himself and his actions? What can Jacob do to keep

Bella's attention on him? How can he keep her from remembering her love for Edward? What does Bella really want? Does she want Edward, the otherworldly creature that takes her breath away, or Jacob, the gritty, earthy creature that she has begun to depend on?

For Chapter 4, I think there should be some competition between Jacob an

Edward for Bella, nothing violent, although I can see them making nasty faces

and snarling at each other but both trying to really charm Bella and sweep her

off her feet. The girls at school will drool with jealousy when both of these

gorgeous men are are bringing her flowers and singing too her (that in itself

could be fun!!)

3.I want Bella to try and separate Jake and Edward from fighting...

end part will be Bella begging for them to stop fighting....

Thanks guys!!!!! I really thank you guys so much for reading the story... and continuing w/ the chapters.... okay as I say before and I will continue to say,

Review!

PM me w/ characters!

Subscribe!

Read!

Thanks!

edit.... march 16

unfortunately I haven't had any submits for the story.... if you haven't got anything PM me and let me know, or if you do have something, let me know as well... send me what you have. Even if it's a sentence.... or a few words or just and idea. I really need some inspiration for this story... please just give me some feedback. any thing is good... even if you review and say i want more written... just let me know... heres what you guys can do... see that review button just sitting there and staring at you? well, just click on that review button, and type in either this or something else... "chachalaca" believe it or not, it's actually a word. here's the def....

a pheasantlike tree-dwelling bird of the guan family, with a loud harsh call. It is found mainly in the forests of tropical America

so either type that in, or even one letter... i just want to know that people are still interested reading my story.... i just want some feedback. So in conclusion, just PM or review me, i want some feedback.