hey! i realize that the only person to review this it Kouga's Older Woman! Thank you sooooo much! I really appreciate it! I'm so surprised that she was the only one reviewing, even though I promised you guys a sneak peek! I guess that you guys just really hated the story then... I will continue the story, but I will only send it to people who ask that it be sent to them... if the readers of the story really want me to post it on here, then just tell me! PM me and tell me that you actually want to read this! I'm not sure that I want to post it if you guys think it's that bad! At least I'm guessing that you think it's bad because I said review if you want to keep this story going. You guys didn't review, so I'm guessing that you didn't want me to finish the story. This will be my last public update unless someone tells me that they want the rest of the story on Fanfic. I'm sad and disappointed... for reasons listed in the previous update... So please review... that is if you want the story finished of course. Let me know whether or not you want to read the rest. Even if it's to say to stop writing than that's okay! Just please please please please please give me some feedback here. I'll give it a couple of weeks before I update again... it really isn't worth my time to do this if no one wants to read this. So.. give me your opinions. Thanks... hope you enjoy this.
Bella POV
The scent of honey was overpowering. I automatically broke away from Jacob and crawled to the other end of the couch. The scent that came with the flashbacks and images of him in my mind was just to much. Curling myself into a ball, the tears once again spilled over. The waves of pain that had only lapped at me before now reared high up and washed over my head, pulling me under. Although, unlike before, I did not sink to the bottom. I held on to the brink of sanity, clutching, grasping for something to hold me up. I thought of Charlie, he needed me to stay alive. Renee too; what would she do? She has Phil now, but there had to be someone that I would stay for. Someone who would ground me, who would keep me in a safe harbor. Some one like, some one like... Why couldn't I think of anyone except, except.....? Jake! He was my safe harbor, I had decided that this very day! He was mine, and he could be mine forever, assuming that he wouldn't lose interest.
Slowly, so slowly, I raised my head, to face him, the one that held me up and then tore me down. Instead of seeing him, I saw Jake and Edward staring daggers at each other from opposite sides of the room.
They were hissing words back and forth across the room, to fast and to low for me to understand, although I caught brief words through the conversation.
"broke the treaty"
"Betrayed her"
"danger"
"redhead"
Those were just some of the words flashing back and forth.
"Hello? Jake? Edward? Can we just talk in normal voices? I think we all need to calm down and just relax. Jake know what happened since I was with him, and Edward know what happened when I was with him, but you guys don't know what happened when I wasn't there. Why don't we just start from the beginning?"
"Yes, honey, that sounds great" Jacob murmured as he took my had.
"Wait a minute, wait a minute, wait a minute! Alice called me here, to help her, saying that she desperately needed my help. She told me to be here as soon as possible. I came to help my sister under the pretense that you" he stated ominously while raising a finger to point at Bella "were dead because you jumped off of a cliff! Bella, how could you do that? I thought that we had an understanding! I told you not to do anything dangerous, and you go jumping off of cliffs! WHAT! Did I hear your thoughts right dog!?! She bought motorcycles and she has been riding them all over La Push? Bella..." he broke off pinching the bridge of his nose between his thumb and forefinger.
Just then, Alice burst into the room and ran over to Edward.
So I hope you enjoyed this, and I'm anxiously waiting to see your opinions on the story.. was it good bad? too short? too vague? Do I need more detail? Should I only do it in Edward's POV? What about Jake's? Should I put it in his POV? OR what if I did it in 3rd person? What about that? hmm? I just want to know your opinions... let me know... give me feedback and click on the little review button below... At the very least, put yourself on alert, so you know if I do decide to post new chapters, you will know when I do! Thanks and please review!