Well have you guys liked my story so far, since I wouldn't know as there is no reviews…. But there is much more to come!
I will be skipping directly to the Laotians arrival on the planet Yanir since I think there is no point including the space travel in between. As I am a man of action, I want to see skies filled with anti-aircraft fire and battles on open planes where blade clashed against blade, the rumble of tanks and the strum of arrows!
Some reading the stories will want to have a chapter of when they traveled in space (hopefully not) but I will not make one at this moment , but if I do it will have more adventures and stuff like that which people that want to see some interesting stuff are looking for.
So be ready for more blistering Sci-Fi action! Also I will most likely be adding a chapter during the weekdays and 2-3 chapter on the weekends. So I am hoping for this story to be 12-14 chapters long with maybe a sequel or entirely new story following it. So there will most likely be new stuff every few days for all you mega-readers.
I will probably put a chapter like this every once and awhile to inform you about crap and tell you important changes and stuff, And PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF THE GOD-EMPEROR give me some reviews/comments so I can learn what to fix or add.
So good day and may the Machine God watch over you. Lord Magos Jadinar