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LiNe: In case you haven't figured out who it was that was staring at Hermione, and I knew I should've put more detail in their, It was Ron and Harry.
AndinaOfRivendell: Cool Name! Thank you for reviewing, but what do you mean by me having an "original writing technique"? I'm new at this answering review stuff.
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter, Blah Blah *yawn* But I DO in fact own this plot.
Needed Chapter two,
Tweaks and Jokes
By: Blue Fire KrAzEd
"Eat dung!" A portrait of an old wizard in blue and green roves yelled at passing 1st year.
"FUCK OFF!" A portrait of an young wizard fighting a large red dragon said to another student as if the student was bothering him.
Fred and George Weasley snickered from the end of the hall. The brightly torch-lit hallway was shaking with insults coming from every wall. Just about all the paintings, suits of armor and statues that had never before been seen, were making rude hand gestures, signing offensive songs, or just throwing horrid insults and comments at the first soul or person that passed.
"George, my dear brother, I have to say, this sure put a kick in my tush!" Fred said leaning against a statue that was signing something about a man named Yankee Doodle riding a rocket and the Muggle candy, Hershey's chocolate.
What is that s'pose to mean? George asked, raising an eyebrow at his brother.
"I don't know," Fred shrugged.
"What are you guys doing?" A familiar voice said behind them, the two fiery red heads turned, and noticed the dark haired, famous, Harry Potter and their younger, also red headed, brother Ron Weasley.
"Harry, Ron! Let us show you our newest product for our shop," George said, in a sort of announcing matter.
"What is it?" Ron said, not bothering to cover his interest. Fred and George pointed to the hallway, grinning mischievously from ear to ear. Ron and Harry looked into the hall, it was empty and eerily quiet.
"Is Hermione with you?" Fred asked, "'don't think she's be to happy with us if she saw this," Harry and Ron exchanged grins that had satisfied and dark feelings in them, then turned to the twins and shook their heads.
"No she's not with us, she's busy," Harry said coolly, still grinning, it had been two day's since the potions essay was assigned, and Ron and Harry were having the time of their lives torturing Hermione.
"Alright then," George said, "Just go ahead and walk into the hall." Ron and Harry obeyed, and the intense silence that had just been the hall was broken by several statues and portraits' insults and threats. When Harry and Ron returned, they were laughing to a point of hysteria. After a minute of so they calmed down, Harry still humming to a different version of the "Yankee DoodlE" song, this time something about macaroni.
"Disturbing Décor!" Fred announced, "Seven Sickles a portrait, 2 Galleons a armor, and 5 Galleons a statue. Don't know where they got that Yankee Doodle stuff, but it works! I can't wait to see the look on Filch's face when he gets a tip off of this. Don't want to stick around and see though, were going back to the Common Room, to avoid any accusations." Fred continued, and he and George headed to a flight of stairs, closely followed by Ron and Harry.
"How'd you do it this time?" Ron asked as they began to climb the stairs.
"Remember last year, that poster we made of Umbridge? We just took that idea and made it so it's sentences stay full," George said, recalling their talking poster.
"That was funny the first few comments, but then it became quite annoying," Harry said, also remembering, they passed a window and he looked out of it and noticed it was way passed sunset, "When did it get dark?" He thought to himself, then shrugged.
"Fifteen to nine," Ron said, mildly surprised, obviously, he had noticed the darkened sky.
"Oi! Hermione, What are you doing with all those books THIS time?" George said suddenly, Harry and Ron's heads shot over to where George's voice was being directed to. Their standing at the foot of another staircase, was their bushy, brown haired friend, Hermione Granger, she was carrying about five heavy books in each arm seemed to be suffering to get up to even the first step.
" Oh just doing some homework," Hermione responded quietly, avoiding her best friends' cold stares. Harry, Ron, Fred and George walked forward, none of them saying anything else to Hermione, they passed her and began climbing the stairs. After five minutes, when they were nearing the Gryffindor Common Room entrance, Hermione still far behind, Ron whispered to Harry, "I didn't think an essay would take that much time or that many book to complete, do you think we should at least help her carry the books," He had a hint of guilt in his voice, looking backwards at Hermione quickly.
"She deserves this!" Harry responded in a harsh whisper, though he seemed stiff, "After what she said!" They all walked in silence for another minute or so. As they arrived at the Common Room entrance, the Fat Lady turned to them, "Password?" She asked.
"Gryffin Snake," Harry said, the Fat Lady's portrait swung forward, Hermione was the last to walk in.
Thinking she would go unnoticed, and being more than right, she walked up to her dormitory as quickly as she could with all of her books, and continued her, Ron and Harry's essay.
*~*
There you go, sorry it isn't every long or eventful, I just needed to get George and Fred into the story. I will continue if I get at least ten reviews for the whole story. I'm kind of tired, and I'm still trying to keep up with other stories I'm reading as well as trying to finish reading OotP, I can't make myself finish that book, I have delayed it for like a week already and I am dying of suspense, being at the best part. Anyways, Please Review and I hope you enjoyed
*~*Blue*Fire*KrAzEd*~*
LiNe: In case you haven't figured out who it was that was staring at Hermione, and I knew I should've put more detail in their, It was Ron and Harry.
AndinaOfRivendell: Cool Name! Thank you for reviewing, but what do you mean by me having an "original writing technique"? I'm new at this answering review stuff.
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter, Blah Blah *yawn* But I DO in fact own this plot.
Needed Chapter two,
Tweaks and Jokes
By: Blue Fire KrAzEd
"Eat dung!" A portrait of an old wizard in blue and green roves yelled at passing 1st year.
"FUCK OFF!" A portrait of an young wizard fighting a large red dragon said to another student as if the student was bothering him.
Fred and George Weasley snickered from the end of the hall. The brightly torch-lit hallway was shaking with insults coming from every wall. Just about all the paintings, suits of armor and statues that had never before been seen, were making rude hand gestures, signing offensive songs, or just throwing horrid insults and comments at the first soul or person that passed.
"George, my dear brother, I have to say, this sure put a kick in my tush!" Fred said leaning against a statue that was signing something about a man named Yankee Doodle riding a rocket and the Muggle candy, Hershey's chocolate.
What is that s'pose to mean? George asked, raising an eyebrow at his brother.
"I don't know," Fred shrugged.
"What are you guys doing?" A familiar voice said behind them, the two fiery red heads turned, and noticed the dark haired, famous, Harry Potter and their younger, also red headed, brother Ron Weasley.
"Harry, Ron! Let us show you our newest product for our shop," George said, in a sort of announcing matter.
"What is it?" Ron said, not bothering to cover his interest. Fred and George pointed to the hallway, grinning mischievously from ear to ear. Ron and Harry looked into the hall, it was empty and eerily quiet.
"Is Hermione with you?" Fred asked, "'don't think she's be to happy with us if she saw this," Harry and Ron exchanged grins that had satisfied and dark feelings in them, then turned to the twins and shook their heads.
"No she's not with us, she's busy," Harry said coolly, still grinning, it had been two day's since the potions essay was assigned, and Ron and Harry were having the time of their lives torturing Hermione.
"Alright then," George said, "Just go ahead and walk into the hall." Ron and Harry obeyed, and the intense silence that had just been the hall was broken by several statues and portraits' insults and threats. When Harry and Ron returned, they were laughing to a point of hysteria. After a minute of so they calmed down, Harry still humming to a different version of the "Yankee DoodlE" song, this time something about macaroni.
"Disturbing Décor!" Fred announced, "Seven Sickles a portrait, 2 Galleons a armor, and 5 Galleons a statue. Don't know where they got that Yankee Doodle stuff, but it works! I can't wait to see the look on Filch's face when he gets a tip off of this. Don't want to stick around and see though, were going back to the Common Room, to avoid any accusations." Fred continued, and he and George headed to a flight of stairs, closely followed by Ron and Harry.
"How'd you do it this time?" Ron asked as they began to climb the stairs.
"Remember last year, that poster we made of Umbridge? We just took that idea and made it so it's sentences stay full," George said, recalling their talking poster.
"That was funny the first few comments, but then it became quite annoying," Harry said, also remembering, they passed a window and he looked out of it and noticed it was way passed sunset, "When did it get dark?" He thought to himself, then shrugged.
"Fifteen to nine," Ron said, mildly surprised, obviously, he had noticed the darkened sky.
"Oi! Hermione, What are you doing with all those books THIS time?" George said suddenly, Harry and Ron's heads shot over to where George's voice was being directed to. Their standing at the foot of another staircase, was their bushy, brown haired friend, Hermione Granger, she was carrying about five heavy books in each arm seemed to be suffering to get up to even the first step.
" Oh just doing some homework," Hermione responded quietly, avoiding her best friends' cold stares. Harry, Ron, Fred and George walked forward, none of them saying anything else to Hermione, they passed her and began climbing the stairs. After five minutes, when they were nearing the Gryffindor Common Room entrance, Hermione still far behind, Ron whispered to Harry, "I didn't think an essay would take that much time or that many book to complete, do you think we should at least help her carry the books," He had a hint of guilt in his voice, looking backwards at Hermione quickly.
"She deserves this!" Harry responded in a harsh whisper, though he seemed stiff, "After what she said!" They all walked in silence for another minute or so. As they arrived at the Common Room entrance, the Fat Lady turned to them, "Password?" She asked.
"Gryffin Snake," Harry said, the Fat Lady's portrait swung forward, Hermione was the last to walk in.
Thinking she would go unnoticed, and being more than right, she walked up to her dormitory as quickly as she could with all of her books, and continued her, Ron and Harry's essay.
*~*
There you go, sorry it isn't every long or eventful, I just needed to get George and Fred into the story. I will continue if I get at least ten reviews for the whole story. I'm kind of tired, and I'm still trying to keep up with other stories I'm reading as well as trying to finish reading OotP, I can't make myself finish that book, I have delayed it for like a week already and I am dying of suspense, being at the best part. Anyways, Please Review and I hope you enjoyed
*~*Blue*Fire*KrAzEd*~*