The Path of Frienship
By : Tsubasa Caligrapher
Chapter 10
Disclaimer : Yes, I do not own Power Rangers ... but I DO own the character Sophie ... pretend I put this in the other chapters too ...
Thanks : KaiAN-Chan, Azure Kaze, Pretty Diva, The Similerian
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" Uh oh. " Kim gulped. After they had gotton cleaned up and eaten lunch, they were working out in the training center ( which Ernie called the Youth Center because training center sounds too ... prisony ) when Kim noticed her mom coming to them.
" Hey mom ! " Kim said, putting on a smile and running to her.
" Kimberly Ann Hart. " she stared her down. This made even more nervous, it was actually be better if her mom was screaming her head off. Kim reached her mom and gently pushed her out the exit.
" Trini ? Kim told her mom she was going with us right ? " Jason asked, slightly frightened.
" Ummm ... yeah ! I'm sure she did ... I think she did ... " Trini thought, not really sure.
" Why ? " Zack asked cautiously.
" Because if Kim didn't tell her, than she's not getting into trouble, we are. " Billy explained. They all gulped and chuckled in nervousness.
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" Hehehe ... hey mom. " Kim said nervously.
" Kimberly. " She said, not looking at her daughter.
" Yes ? "
" Why did you not tell me you were leaving and forced your father into doing it ? " she asked.
" He offered ? " Kim shot.
" Is that the best you can do ? "
" Ummm, no. Not really. " Kim admitted.
" How can you be so ignorant ? " she asked angrily.
" Wha- ? "
" You went alone with a group of boys and that other girl, you guys stayed at a local inn over three nights, what else did you do dear ? I saw your ripped clothes, don't tell me you did anything to disrerspect our family. "
" Of course not ! We were just attacked on our way home. " Kim mumbled.
" By what ? " her mother looked alarmed.
' Well, at least it seems like she cares. ' Kim thought.
" Nothing, just kids who wanted to ask me out ... well, all us out actually. " Kim pondered.
" Really. " her mother said, unbelieving.
" Yes mother. " Kim said.
" Fine. So, do you want to accept your my punishment now, willingly, or do I have to give you your lecture and then force you into your punishment. "
" Punishment ! " Kim almost yelled.
" Yes, now do I have to force you into it or not. "
" No. I'll just take it. " Kim said glumly.
" Fine. Remember my cousin Joaqin ? "
" Joaqin ... Uncle Joaqin ? You're not going to make us go to another one of his fashion shows are you ? " Kim asked in horror. She remembered three years ago when she went to one of his fashion shows. He thinks is a good designer, but truthfully, all his clothes make her gag. Her eyes almost burned when she saw them.
" No, of course not ! " her mother said as Kim let out a sigh of relief.
" You and your friends are going to model in it. "
" NNNNOOOOOOOO ! " Kim shrieked as she fell to her knees.
" Glad to see you are taking this well. " her mother said before leaving her alone.
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The others were helping Billy with a karate stance when they heard an inhuman howl echo throughout the center.
" What the heck was that ? " Jason said fearfully.
" I think that was Kim ... " Billy said.
" Wow ... do you think her mom ate her ? " Zack asked seriously.
" Zack ! " they all yelled at him, slightly wondering the same thing.
" What ! I mean, did you see her when she came in here ? I swear, her eyes flashed red when she saw us ... it was like ... demon ! " Zack said, pointing to his eyes and then at Trini's.
" Stop that ! " she said, swatting his hand away. Suddenly, the doors burst open and a sagging Kim walked over to Ernie's booth and collapsed on it.
" Whoa, I think something bad happened. " Jason muttered as they advanced to Kim and sat beside her.
" So Kim, what's our punishment this time ? " Billy asked straightforwardly.
" I guess this isn't the first time you guys got in trouble ? " Trini said perceptively.
" No, but it was all mostly Kim's fault anyway. " Billy said.
" Was not ! "
" Yes it was Kim. "
" Fine. But our punishment totally sucks this time. Remember my Uncle Joaquin ? " Kim grumbled.
" You Uncle Joaquin ? ... oh my god ! " Billy gasped as he remembered the horror. Kim dragged him along with her three years ago when they had an extra ticket. He fell asleep within two seconds but he remembered Kim's words.
" If I'm suffering, I'm not doing it alone ! " she sneered as she pinched him everytime he started nodding off.
" Wait, Joaquin Hart ! He's you uncle ? " Trini said in fright.
" Yeah, why. How do you know him ? " Kim wondered.
" He's the worst fashion designer in history. All of our clothes weren't stolen, I made some of them myself ... although we had to steal the frabric ... " Trini mused, losing her point.
" Why, what do have to do for this guy ? " Jason asked nervously.
" We. Have. To. Model. In. His. Fashion. Show. " Kim groused.
" NNNNOOOOOOOO ! " they all wailed.
" Wow, that must have been how I sounded. " Kim sighed as she hit her head against the counter.
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" This sucks. " Zack said as they went to the empty lake once again.
" Are you sure we can't get out of it ? " Jason whined.
" Yes, I am. Wait, Trini ! You design clothes right ? " Kim said as they all rested on the ground.
" Yeah, why. "
" Can't you make some better clothes than my uncle and offer it to him so he can let us model in them instead ? " Kim asked hopefully.
" I'm sorry Kim, but I haven't worked in two years, I don't have any designs. And, I don't have any materials with me. " Trini apologized sadly.
" I don't care what you say, I am NOT going to model. No ! " Jason said stubbornly.
" No ! If we're going to be forced to model, so are you ! " they all seethed angrily to him as they glared at him.
" No ! Modeling is not my thing ! I refuse to be looked at like a slab of meat, prancing down the aisle ! " Jason said defiantly.
" Wow, what's up with him ? " Kim whispered to Zack.
" I don't know. I guess after all those years of Divatox staring him down everywhere he goes finally got to him. " Zack whispered back as she nodded understandingly.
" But please Jason ! I don't want to even think what my mom will do if we're not all there. " Kim begged but he still nodded no. Kim saddened then got an idea, she pulled Zack and Billy together and whispered something into their ears. When Jason turned back, they were all doing puppy-dog eyes and pouts but he wasn't falling for it this time.
" No, I am not falling for it this time. " he said as he crossed his arms. They all sighed and Zack came up with a brilliant plan.
" Trini, please ! You have to ! " Zack pleaded after he whispered the plan into her ears.
" Fine, but this is a once-in-a-year thing. Ok, everyone, stand back. " said Trini as she tapped Jason on the shoulder. He turned around to be confronted by the woman who taught him and Zack the way of life. She gave her all powerful puppy-dog eyes and if he didn't cave immediatly, they could see him weakening.
" Oh ... fine ! " Jason gave up as Trini turned around smiling.
" Yes ! I knew you could do it ! " yelled Zack happily as they all jumped in joy.
" Ok, now that we have had our fun, how much time do we have to be depressed and nervous before we have to go to your uncle's theatre ? " Billy asked.
" Umm ... tomorrow. " Kim smiled sheepishly.
" Well, that was quick mourning. " Zack joked.
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The rest of the day quickly passed and they couldn't wait until the next day ... they couldn't wait.
" Are you guys still awake ? " they heard Zack yell.
" You betcha. " he heard Jason.
" I can't believe I have to wear horrible clothes ... and then model them. " Billy sighed.
" Yeah. " the Zack agreed. After moments of silence ...
" Aren't we supposed to be sleeping ? " asked Jason.
" Yeah, but I don't want to. Everytime I close my eyes, I get nightmares from this morning. " Billy said. They all shuddered as they remembered how vicious the attack was.
" Zack, you were lucky. " Jason said,
" How was I lucky ? I had to fight off every single guy that went after Trini. " Zack said.
" So ? Me and BIlly had to fight off every single guy that went after us. And you were right the gay community is as strong as ever. " Jason slightly shuddered.
" Hmmmm, I guess you are right. I am lucky ! " Zack smiled. Jason and Billy sat up and grabbed their extra pillow and threw it at him.
" Wow. Jason, you have been a bad influence on him. " Zack said as he sat up and threw both pillows back at Jason. Jason immediatly shot up and threw a pillow back at Zack and Billy.
" Oomph. Why am I in this too ? " Billy said as he used the pillow to guard himself from one thrown by Zack.
" Because it's never fun if everyone's not included. " Jason said with mock-innocence as he guarded himself from multiple pillows. After the small pillow fight, they each got their pillow back and reeled their hands back when they heard the doorknob turning. When Mr.Stone's head poked in, they had already feinted sleep.
" Ok, now I really am sleepy. " Zack yawned. Everyone agreed and they fell asleep surprisingly quickly. A pillow fight could take a lot out of you.
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" Hurry up children. We must hurry. " the queen urged them into the small beat-up carriage. They stared at the poorly built wooden carriage and hesitated. But they didn't have a choice when large guards approached from behind them and threw them in. First Jason on the right, Billy on the left, Trini on Jason, and Zack on Billy.
" Well, that was pleasant. Zack, do you mind ? " asked Billy as they all picked thmselves up and sat down, wedged tightly together.
" The queen just couldn't get us a bigger carriage huh. " Trini said as she noticed a rat crawling on the floor.
" This is so wrong. " they heard Kim as she jumped onto the carriage.
" Kim ? Why are you here ? Shouldn't you be in the other fancy carriage with you parents ? " Zack asked as he squirmed when he saw a cockroach.
" Yeah, but this is part of my punishment. " she grumbled angrily. She was about to sit down but realized that there was no spaces left.
" Uhhh, I guess I can't ask you guys to scoot over huh ? " she smiled.
" Ummm ... why don't you sit on Jason's lap ? " Billy asked innocently while the two concerned gasped.
" ... why ? " they both shouted.
" Well ... because Jason is the largest one here and it's the most obvious choice. " Billy said as the other two nodded.
" Hmmmm, I don't know ... "
" Why, do you not trust him ? " Zack asked.
" No ! ... I mean yes ! But still ... " Kim was still unsure.
" Come on, I'm sitting right here too. " Trini said. Kim seemed to ponder over it but she could feel the carriage shaking, meaning they were going to take off soon so she just gave up and sat on Jason's lap. It was ok for a moment ... but that moment ended when they hit a ditch.
" Aaaaggghhhh ! " they all yelled as they were thrown onto the small floor.
" Ow ! Kim, get off ! You could have totally prevented me from having children ! " Jason said in pain as he lifted Kim up.
" Oh my god ! I am sooooo sorry Jason ! " she apologized.
" Ummm ... you guys ? A little help ? " they heard Zack as he stuck his arm out from the bottom of the pile. They all hurried and sat back up while Zack dramatically gasped for air.
" Ok, Billy come here. I don't want Kim sitting on my lap anymore. " Jason said as he glared at the embaressed Kim.
" Why me ? " Billy asked, blushing.
" Because with Trini, the same thing could happen and Zack is just too big. So, you're smaller than Zack but bigger than the girls. " he said.
" Wow. " they all chorused.
" Yes yes, I know. But Billy, come here right now and then everyone can admire my smartness later. " Jason said as he pulled the protesting Billy onto his lap.
" Well ... are we there yet ? " Zack asked Kim.
" No, we're not even close. It's going to take a long, long, long, long, time. Huh, Billy. "
" Yeah, last time we had to wait until nightfall before we got there. " Billy recalled.
" Nightfall ? "
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Billy was right, it was nightfall when they arrived but they had all already fallen asleep. Jason was slightly leaning forward with his head in the crook of Billy's neck and his arms around Billy's waist, Billy's head leaning on his shoulder. Trini was leaning against Jason's arm while Zack was leaning to the side of the carriage with Kim's head on his shoulder.
They would have continued sleeping peacefully if the driver didn't hit another ditch and brake too quickly.
" Aaaaggghhhh - oomph ! " they all jumped up and were forced to the right. After the initial blow, they all fell back to the floor.
" Oh dear ! Kimberly, what you doing ? " came her mother's voice as they noticed the carriage door was open.
" It's not my fault ... who's our driver anyway ? " Kim asked as everyone slowly got up and jumped off the carriage.
" Well, since our old drivers are on their vacation, we had some slave volunteers. " she said nochalantly.
" Who ? " Kim asked cautiously as she fixed Billy's hair.
" Ummm, these two. " she said, pointing to the drivers before she left and went towards the theatre. When the group leaned over, they saw ...
" Bulk and Skull ? " they said unbelieving.
" Hey Kim ! " said Skull as he waved at her happily.
" AAAaagggghhhhhh ! " she screamed, thinking that those two were their ride home. Skull's and Bulk's ears started ringing and after it finally died down, they fainted.
" Wow, Kim must have inherited some demon powers from her mom - ow ! " the trio whacked Zack before Kim could hear him.
" Come on you guys, we have to go. " Kim gumbled as they followed her into the theatre.
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" Nnnooo ! " the group of five shouted as they were pushed into individual dressing rooms after they had a brief greeting with Kim's uncle but realized they were late.
" No, hands off me dude ! " they heard Jason yell.
" Hands off my hair girl ! " Zack yelled sternly.
" What the heck is that ? Where in the world did you get red leather ? " Kim asked in wonder.
" Whoa ! This is cut way too short ! " Trini yelled.
" Sheesh ! These pants are too short ! I can see my legs ! " they heard Billy complain. And as quickly as they were dragged in, they were pushed out.
" Oh, my god ! " they all said. Trini was wearing an orange and yellow dress ... in strange designs and was cut way too low. Kim had on a leather dress with a red back and a white front ... with strange designs on it ... like a painting, a bad one. Zack had on an afro wig ... and wore retro-styled blue and yellow clothes. Billy had on a tight, tight blue shirt with a yellow jacket in his hands and a leather cross straps on his back with plaid yellow pants ... that were too short. Jason, well ... he looked good ! He had on a platinum t-shirt with a red jacket, collared with black and had on a pair of tight red plaid pants.
" No fair Jase ! Why do you get the good clothes ? These aren't even my colors ! " whined Zack.
" Wow, you look cute with spiky hair. " Kim smiled, seeing Jason blush.
" Our clothes are too short. " Billy grumbled as he stared down at his legs and tried to move his shirt. Trini stared down too.
" Dear god. " Trini said.
" Ok, chop chop children, the crowd's awaitin. " said Joaquin as he came in.
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After Joaquin's speech, the music started and lights started flashing about. Zack came out with Trini on his arm. When they reached the end of the walkyway, they disconnected and spun while the crowd clapped and they walked back. Next came Billy with his jacket over his shoulder and Kim came with her hands on her hips. As they reached the end of the walkway, Billy turned back and exchanged the jacket to the other side while Kim spun twice and the crowd clapped as they walked back.
Then as Jason walked out, an encore erupted throughout the theatre. At the end, he pulled back his jacket and gave them a side pose, then started walking back, turned, and then walked behind the stage.
" God, these pants are tight ! " Jason whined.
" Well, so is my shirt. " Billy sighed.
" Great job children, and to thank you for your participation, you get to keep them ! I am just feeling generous today. " the group chuckled as Joaquin walked away, then they broke down, whimpering into their hands.
" Well, that was a whole lot better than I imagined it would be. " Kim said.
" Yeah, at least we got encores. " Trini added.
" But, Jason got the most. " Zack said smiling, seeing Jason blush again.
" Ok, now that we're are done with this, let's go change back into our clothes. " Billy suggested. They all nodded and went back to their dressing rooms and they all screamed, besides Kim that is.
" Where are my clothes ! " Jason, Zack, Trini, and Billy yelled.
" I threw them away because they were raggedy. " they heard Joaquin yell. They all looked at eachother and gaped while Kim came out in her traditional pink robe, flipping her hair back and staring at them.
" He threw our clothes away. " they told her before she asked.
" Oh, well that poses a problem doesn't it. " Kim thought. After moments of silence, they all sighed in defeat.
" I guess we just have to wear these until we get home. " Kim said.
" Fine. But Jason, give me your jacket. " Billy asked, reaching his hand out.
" Why ? " Jason asked, starting to take it off.
" Because this yellow one is too small. I think it was only for me to carry around ... " Billy mused as he tugged at his shirt, trying to lift it but he couldn't.
" This shirt is so tight that I can't even take it off ! Can you guys help me ? " Billy asked as he took off his glasses. Jason gripped the bottom of his shirt and lifted it up, peeling it slowly off until it reached his head where it got stuck. He pulled with all his strength but it was still stuck. Then Kim, Trini, and Zack got behind him. They gripped onto eachother's waist and got ready to pull.
" 1, 2, ... 3 ! " shouted Jason as they all pulled and the shirt easily slipped off, landing on them as they fell to the ground.
" Wow, thanks you guys ! " Billy smiled as he slipped on Jason's jacket.
" Well, a bit big but it still looks nice. " Kim smiled and gave him a thumbs-up.
" Ok, let's go sneak back into the carriage and wait until it's time to go home. " Trini said as Zack threw off his afro and she led them to the exit.
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" Don't even you guys. " Jason said as they passed Bulk and Skull.
" Sure, but can you turn away ? You shirt is blinding me. " Bulk laughed.
" Yeah, blinding ! " Skull mimiced. They all sighed and proceeded into the carriage. As soon as they sat in their previous arrangements, Billy and Jason yawned.
" Wake me up when we get home. " they both said as they quickly fell asleep, falling against eachother.
" Wow, this is going to help a lot. " Zack muttered as the remaining trio huddled together.
" So, you guys are absolutely sure you guys don't mind. " Kim asked again.
" Yes, stop worrying about that. It's not that big of a deal anyways, we're only one day apart anyway. " reassured Trini.
" So, Zack. Did you find the machine under Billy's bed ? " Kim asked.
" Yeah, and are you sure that it works now ? I remember you telling us of the bubbly blue incident. " Zack smiled.
" Well, I think so. And I have to go to this other party already so I might as well have one with my friends. " Kim hugged them.
" So, you told Ernie everything right ? " Trini asked.
" Yes yes. And you girls got all the decorations right ? " Zack asked.
" Yeah. Hmmmm, I wonder what they'll get us for presents ? " Kim mused.
" Oh, but me and Jase bought you presents together ok ? " Zack clarified. They were going to discuss more but Jason and Billy started stirring.
" Shush everyone, we'll talk more about this at home. " Kim said. Everyone quickly came back and they rode home surprisingly peacefully this time. Zack was able to push Jason and Billy upstairs while Kim and Trini went to the Youth Center.
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" You guys ! Hurry up and come down to the Youth Center ! " Zack yelled as they woke up in the afternoon.
" Why ? " Jason asked tiredly.
" Just hurry up ! " Zack said as he got dressed and ran downstairs. Jason and Billy stared at eachother in confusion as they also got dressed and warily went downstairs.
" Hello ? " Billy called out as they reached the darkened Center. Suddenly, the lights shot on and confetti exploded everywhere !
" Surprise ! " yelled their friends and fellow slaves as they shot out of their hiding places and pulled down a banner reading : HAPPY BIRTHDAY BILLY, JASON, TRINI, ZACK, AND KIM !
" Hey you guys ! " yelled Kim as she ran over to them a gave each of the birthday boys a kiss.
" Kim, what is this ? " Billy asked, flabbergasted.
" It's our birthday party you silly goose ! Since I have to go to my own boring party tomorrow, me and the others decided to all throw just one big party instead ! " Kim yelled happily.
" And are you guys sure about this ? I mean both of your birthdays are tomorrow. " Jason questioned the other two.
" Of course we are ! " said Trini happily as she gave him a kiss.
" Yeah ! Come on ! On to the party ! " Zack yelled happily as some dance music echoed throughout the room. He pulled them all into the crowd and they started dancing.
" Billy ! I need your help ! " they heard Ernie yell after awhile. Billy looked over and saw his machine, the Cakemaker 1000.
" Oh my god ! It's just like two years ago ! " Billy yelled as he helped Ernie try to make the blue foam coming out of the machine disappear. Everyone laughed as they slipped and skidded until Billy made some quick-minute adjustments and it stopped.
" Wow, I am messy. " BIlly said looking down at himself.
" Jason, go with him and get the presents too while you're at it. " Zack told Jason as he brang Billy outside and they went upstairs.
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" Happy Birthday ! " after hours of partying, it was finally sunset and time for cake. All five surrounded the sixteen candle-lit cake and blew it out. Everyone applauded as they started cutting the cake.
" Hey, we get the first try ! " Bulk yelled as he and Skill pushed themselves to the cake.
" Hey, what are you talking about ? It's Jason's and Billy's birthday ! " Kim yelled.
" No, it's ok. " Billy held her back. Ernie handed the two each a slice of cake and they were about to dig into it when someone came from behind and accidently pushed them into it ! Everyone exploded in laughter and the party proceeded from there.
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" Present time ! " Kim yelled happily as she produced four small wrapped packages and gave one to each of them.
" Come one you guys ! Open it ! " Kim said giddily. They all held their breaths in anticipation as they all took off the covers at the same time.
" Oh my ... " Trini was at a loss of words as she held up the beautiful shiny necklace. When she looked around, she saw that everyone else got the same thing, even Kim who already had it around her neck. It was a light silver chain and had a small pendent in the middle with a peridot jewel imbedded into it.
" Our birthstone ... " she heard Zack say quietly in awe.
" Friends forever ... " Billy and Jason said in unison as they looked at the back. Trini flipped it over, and there it was. In beautiful cursive letter, the words that would bind them together forever. Kim waiting eagerly for their reaction, unable to read their faces.
" Thank you so much ! " they chorused as they tackled her with multiple hugs, leaving her dazed when they left her.
" Well, glad you guys liked it ! Now, onto more presents ! " she yelled.
" Me next. " Billy said as he gave them a thin wrapped package to each of them. They slowly unwrapped it to reveal a framed portrait ... of each of them.
" Billy ... " Kim said full of emotion. It was a simple drawing in black and white, but it was so realistic, she could tell he put a lot of soul into it. It was her, standing on the balance beam in a leotard and smiling brightly. It was when she was eleven years old and had won her first championship. Zack's picture was him in mid-motion. He recognized it as only last week, when he had perfected a new dance step and showed it to everyone excitedly. Trini's was of two weeks ago, when she had perfected a new kata. She showed it to all of them proudly but she never knew Billy was capturing the moment right then and there.
" Is this - " Jason started.
" Yes, It's the same afternoon as when I was sick. " Billy smiled. It was Jason sitting cross-legged on a chair, reading his book with his eyebrows furrowed. It was so good, Jason couldn't believe that it was being given to him.
" So ... do you like it ? " Billy asked nervously.
' I guess this is the price I pay for never showing anyone my work. ' he sighed sadly. Jason looked at him unbelievingly, which made Billy even more nervous.
" Do you seriously think I wouldn't love this ? " Jason smiled brightly. Billy sighed in relief and braced himself as everyone gave them a hug.
" You crazy child. " Kim teased him as she gave him another kiss.
" Ok ok ! Our turn ! " Zack yelled as he gave Kim, Trini, and Billy a small box. They opened it and it revealed a small platinum ring with thier names on it.
" It's beautiful ! Thank you guys ! " Trini said happily, noticing that small stones were imbedded in each one, each their favorite color. Trini had citrines, Kim had rose zircons, Billy had aquamarine jewels, and the other boys lifted their hands, showing they had rings too, Zack had dark alexandrites, Jason had rubies. After hugs were exchanged, they turned to Trini.
" Here you go ! " Trini said excitedly as she handed them each a small package. They all opened it and stared in awe at the beautiful silk clothes incased in them.
" So this is where all your frabric went ! " Zack smiled. Each of the boys got a suit and a silk shirt and tie, with their matching colors. Zack got a deep violet, Jason had a maroon shirt, and Billy got an indigo shirt. Kim picked up a silk jersey v-neck dress in pink and twirled it around in glee.
" Thank you so much Trini ! I'll wear it tomorrow ! " Kim yelled as they all gave Trini hugs.
" Ooh, the last dance. Come on Billy ! " yelled Kim as she dragged Billy onto the dance floor.
" May I ? " Jason held his hand out to Trini.
" Of course. " she said, leading him to the dance floor. When they looked back, they saw Zack was dancing with Angela, a fellow slave friend.
" Thank you guys so much for today. " Billy whispered into her ear.
" Your welcome ! We all planned it together, though it was Zack who suggested it ! " Kim said.
" Really ? "
" Yeah. " and they continued to move to the slow song.
" So, did you like you present ? " Jason asked.
" Yeah, it's great. How did you guys afford it ? "
" Me and Zack bought all the jewels, but it was Zack who helped make the platinum rings, then we gave them to the local jeweler and he gave us a discount. " Jason told her. The song ended and they all bowed.
" Well, this day turned out well ! " Zack smiled as he swung his arms around Jason and Trini.
" Yes it did. " Billy sighed as they went and joined the group.
" It's out own happily ever after ! " Kim laughed. They all helped clean up and they went back upstairs and collapsed into bed, sleeping with a smile on their faces.
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Yay ! So, how was this chapter ! If this has any mistakes, I am sorry but it's like 3 in the morning and I'm just finishing this up. So please review and tell me what you think ! Please !