Well, here's a new story, i've been working on this one on my comp., so it's not like i had to type up one that was already written on a notebook. (damn, that's just too darn frustrating sometimes...) But yeah, it's a new one, i think, and i also think i might have made a new style for Naruto! or at least someone that's close to him, in a special way...

Anywhoo, onwards and upwards before i spill too much!

I'd like to say hello to all that willreview, and all thatwon't; right now. And also, thanks for readin, so now do some reviewin and tell me that you did!

Also, befores i forgetssssss...

Orochimaru:Hello, Kyu-ku-ku-ku

Me: He's here for a reason...It's cause i scared off all my rabid lawyers with an army of plotz bunnies...hmpf, babies.

Orochimaru: Yesssss. Now, as many should know, plotz bunnies are only the size of miniature bunnies, which can fit in your hand, and be snuggled gag,and some of the stronger ones can grow bigger or smaller at will, and all are soft and, ugh, cuddly.yes i said that, stop drooling.

Me: Grrrrr...it's to cute not to drool! And you're doing it too!

Orochimaru: I'm drooling for a different reason.

Me: ...OoO...I will attack you with a stick if you keep thinking that.

Orochimaru: whatever. My point right now it though...Snakes eat rodents, and they are classified under rabbits, which are classified under rodents. Following that? No? Good. It means i eat them, so she can't scare ME off with silly little multicolored rainbow snugglyrabbits...ugh...-shudder- but i will stay here and do my job, or i won't get to leave.

Me: There's his real motive, he wants outta here. Well, can't say i want him in here that bad either, sooooo.

-pout- I don't own Naruto, or any of the others, or the actual show, or manga, or anything!

Whaaaaaa!

well, now that that's done, i do own some things here, but it should be easier to figure that out on your own. If not,ask me, and Orochimaru can come back for a visit to clarify!

Orochimaru: You just love taking a bad guy into your lair and torturing him where he can do nothing.

Me: Yup! false cheerleader smile

Orochimaru: Itachi's got nothing on that for creepiness...

Well, anywhoo, he's going bye bye now! not! at the end of this chapterhe gets to go, next up is Itachi!

Wait, (get's stick) Haha! you're still thinking about them! (thwacks Orochimaru one a couple of times.) NOW, to the story!


"Help! Sensei!" the cry came from the left, he wasn't going to make it in time, nor was her sensei.

Damn it all to hell.

"Koro-kun!" that came from the left as well, good. The boy would buy him time to get there.

He dispatched the snake that he was fighting and sped off. Making it to the clearing just in time to see ninja holding back the blonde-haired kid with black streaks in his hair and his facet-less eyes boring into the back of Orochimaru's skull. He tried to get to the girl Orochimaru was holding by the neck against a tree, but didn't get the chance, he was immediately captured.

"Kyu-kyu-ku-ku-ku" he laughed, his slitted eyes twisting manically in a sneer. "I have you now, there's no escape. Give me the scroll." he ordered.

Another ninja came down from the trees, and was caught. This made it two older jounin, and three younger genin. Soon after this moment, there came a flash of light as kunai danced off their target's blades, and three more ninja, all genin as well, were caught.

"...y..." Korochi managed to start, before Orochimaru blocked her air.

"What? I can't hear you. Oh wait." he grinned, his sharp fang-like teeth glinting in the faded light. He was enjoying every moment of this. "Let me allow you to breathe so you can betray your friends to save them."

"You...-gasp- know...what?" she asked, looking strait at him. "I...hate bastards who...think they can...just take...what they...want...especially...from me!" she growled out, and kicked him in the gut, using the last of her physical strength to push him several yards into a tree.

"You want this Oro-bastard?" she yelled out. "Well come and get it!" she opened the scroll and read it, doing hand signs as Orochimaru and his other ninjas abandoned the rest of the group and charged at her, anything to get her to stop.

"No! Stop Korochi!" The blonde said again, his eyes no longer burning holes into Orochimaru, but filled with tears and big puppy-dog eyed-ness, her body was engulfed by light, and no one could move as it swallowed them as well.

"Haien, gaietsen, foreques, qourtin, sentai, phoro, bein, nakgaze, besti..." Korochi repeated what was on the scroll, not able to understand the strange language for the life of her, but she did know that she was thwarting Orochimaru, and not betraying her friends. The scroll melted away at the last word, and the light started to fade.

(A/n: may i just say now, i have no clue what sh ejust said, i made it all up, the scroll words and stuff. It's something that you're just not really supposed to know, i think.)

Orochimaru gasped as the scroll faded from her hands, he was at her back, so he only saw the top part as it faded and melted. He didn't see it going inside her, or else he would have had a new goal, kidnapping her.

Korochi saw that the sound ninja and Orochimaru were still there, she knew some of the power of the scroll, and used it, flinging them out of the strange warp just before it faded away, sufficiently sending them many, many, many miles and miles away. (a/n: pretty far, eh? Well, they need to be, oh, and by the wayside, most of them, and definitely Orochimaru, end up a couple ten twenty to thirty miles away from the sound village, and that's all you need to know for now)

They all stood and stared, they were on a cliff, overlooking a town.

"No way." The male sensei breathed, looking out at the town below. Not possible.

"Where are we?" Korochi asked, her voice pale in shock.

"I think...we're in Konoha..." his voice trailed off.

"No we're not! My house should be right there! But it's not!" the blonde hyper one said.

"I don't know what to tell you, but this definitely isn't our Konoha..." the female sensei spoke, her name was Kashi.

"Well, we better do a scouting, find any hostility, do not retaliate, return to the usual meeting place, if it's even there..." The male sensei closed his eyes and scanned the area.

"What do you see Itaku-sensei?" The blonde asked.

"Shut up Nuken!" Kashi said, losing patience with her fellow jounin's student.

"Well, there is nothing immediately hostile, nor has anything realized our position." Itakusaid in monotone, smirking at their faces as they tried not to laugh at his impression of a certainsomeone.(a/n: no one knows they're there; man, that sensei he's imitatingloves the technical terms, a lot)

"Alright then, move out!" Kashi spoke, and they vanished.

---------------------------Later, about...an hour...-----------------

Korochi was scouting around the woods, her squad had already stopped and was in their meeting area with the other squad, squad A. Theirs was squad X. She grinned, she had made that up herself. It stood for eXelent, and was just her way of showing her goofishness.

She ignored the slight twinge in her stomach, and kept looking around. The meeting area was a good distance from Konoha, just so that they could keep from being seen, and when they trained there, it helped keep the other teams from finding them. The other teams were always so competitive, and it really irked her sensei when they interrupted their own vigorous training to have them train with them.

Same for the other squad.

She looked around. All of them probably had eaten lunch, and were planning on how to get back, which was next to impossible without the scroll. And no one had any idea where it was. (a/n: inside her! and even she don't know it! bwahahahahah!)

She had been the only one to stay behind and continue scouting. She was determined to find something to help her team. And currently, that meant all of them.

She wasn't really paying any attention, so it came as a surprise to her when a kunai whizzed right. By. Her. Ear.


That was a good cliffie, ne?

Hope you enjoyed it!

Orochimaru: Great, time to go -walks out-

Me: Well, -singsong voice- there goes mr. america! there he is, mr. america! such beauty, and pristene! mr. america! don't know the rest! so i'll leave him be!(for now)...

Mr america!...couldn't help one last shot while he's still in hearing range...

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