Well, first, i would like to thank Tsunade-sama, and Adventurous Dream Girl for their reviews, and say this one little piece to my lovely little review/flamer-chan, that is, if you are even a chan...
What's with you? If you flame me, i don't care, but i am curious...
What the heck can i improve on? I want to know, so that i can actually improve on it!
Thank you.
Now, like i said last time, Orochimaru's left the author's notes section, for now...
But now we have a lovely little hotttttttttttt Itachi!
Itachi: Hn.
Me: Isn't he cyooooooote! I hope i'm not the only one that thinks so.
Itachi: Hn.
Me: Oh yeah, i don't own Naruto, or The story, or anything like that. I do 'own' my charachters i made up, and my brain, so this idea, though it's been used before, being reworked by me, is different than any others. And so, i guess i own this plot.
Itachi: Good job
Me: He...just spoke... -faint-
Itachi: You don't do that too now, just read, then go and fall off a sewer line, but don't faint infront of me.
DL(you all know baddtotheproverbialbone is my twister twin sister, in real life):just shut up.
Itachi: why aren't you affected by an Uchiha?
DL: You don't wanna know...i guess i could say twin thing.
Me: -just woke back up- yeah, like i'm feeling for the both of us! not fair!
DL: on with the story. -giggles evilly-
She yelped and stumbled, she had been only walking at the moment, so she didn't hit the ground too hard.
It was still hard enough for her.
"Hey! Watch what you're doin!" she sputtered, glaring in the direction that the kunai had whizzed from.
"Oh! I am truly sorry! My teammates and I had no idea there was anyone here!" Lee half cried, half shouted out. In truth, they had. But they didn't notice her till she was really close, which made them think that she was a ninja, and an enemy to Konoha. (Her hitae is with her sensei)
"I guess it's okay..." she eyed them warily, now fully aware of what had just transpired. They now thought she was a civilian mistaken for a ninja, she could put this to her advantage. Now all she had to do was play her cards right...
"Yosh! Thanks ever so much for your forgiveness!" the green-spandex-suited one cried out. Hugging her, though not as hard as he would his teammates, it was still pretty hard.
"Ouch-kibibbles! That hurts! You're not letting me get enough air!" she wriggled till he released her, and smacked him one upside the head. She half expected him to dodge, he was strong and fast, but thought he was just letting her get her revenge since she was a civilian, so she hit him rather softly.
"Sorry! I am truly! I deserved that!" he cried. Yup, he had stayed put for her, how sweet. She wasn't going to forgive him that easily though. "I shall express my sorrow with my youthfullness!"
"Yes! I get it, now please don't hug me again, or touch me." Okay, she would forgive him right now, if it would only keep him from touching her again. 'Damn, that's gonna bruise' She thought.'not my fault though,...or his... I'm frail by normal civilian standards, let alone ninja.'She was currentlytrying to get a look at the two in the trees. She couldn't make out who they were. She waved to them.
"Hey! You can come down! I swear I don't bite! Hard!" The one on the left dismounted her branch like it wasn't even there and landed a few feet in front of her, followed shortly by the other, who was silent.
Korochi gaped. She knew who this was. Oh great. She was soooooo dead. And why didn't she recognize the green guy? He was always at her house visiting her family in her time/place/world, what-/when-ever the heck it was.
They dismissed her shock as just simple 'oh-my-god; they-just-did-something-normal-people-can't-do!' regular people shock, and assumed she didn't live in a ninja village.
"I'm Tenten, This is Neji, and you've already met Lee here." she smiled. "Are you lost? We can help you get back to Konoha if that's where you came from." She held out her hand, which Korochi refused.
"Sorry, I don't need any help, I can find my way on my own. I was just wandering." she added the last in an effort to not sound rude. It didn't really work, except on the green guy.
Though she should say it especially didn't work on the white haired guy, who narrowed his eyes at her. She knew she shouldn't have been rude to the girl, but she couldn't help it.
That's the kind o person she was. A blurter.
"Alright then! Pleased to make your acquaintance! We must get back to training now, so if you wish to leave, go right on ahead!" He looked ready to hug her, and she stepped away.
There was a rustling in the underbrush, and she jumped on purpose, making it seem like she got scared, to which the brown-haired one with no pupils, Neji, smirked.
"Lee! My lovely disciple! It is I! Gai-sensei!" She nervously looked around. Ninja or not, She did NOT want to get hugged by another person.
And it didn't help that she knew full well who might be doing the hugging.
"I am here Gai-sensei!" A man stepped out of the brush, a mirror image to Lee, and vice versa.
"Lee! My flower of youth!"
"Gai-sensei! My sensei!"
"Lee!"
"Gai!"
"Lee!"
"Gai!"
"Lee!"
This was followed by a round of hugging, and she absolutely despised it. She wanted out of there. NOW.
"Well, I guess this is my cue to leave..." as an afterthought, she leaned in closer to Tenten and whispered into her ear. "They scare me." Tenten laughed and watched her go for a few moments till she turned back to her sensei.
"Tenten-chan, who was that lovely young ninja you were with just now? She had a great air of youth!" Gai excitedly skipped (A/n: -shudder-) up to her.
"Huh? Gai-sensei, she was just a civilian."
Gai gave her a puzzled look. "No, she was a ninja; did you not notice how she left so quickly? or her chakra, how it is still slightly swirling on the breeze right here, ahhhh, and how fast she was, I can't even sense her anymore..." his look became stern at the same time Tenten froze and Neji narrowed his eyes. Lee was the same as his sensei.
"Find her." Gai spoke, and they flew through the trees, following the chakra trail that led them securely along a path. One well known in the future to its first follower.
Welllll... how do you like it? Yeah, i hope you do like it!
Itachi: Hn.
DL: Swoon!
Itachi: -raises eyebrow-
Me: one word, a very satisfactory one too.
Itachi: you mean--
Me:-interruptingvery quickly-Payback.
Itachi: Hn.
Me: Well, please;
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