Ok this is my first chapter tanks to Crowtalon for the reviews
Lightkit waited in the shadows, Darkkit walked past his hiding place. Lightkit leaped on his sister, and was immediately flipped over by the young she- cat. His sister pinned him down, and Lightkit knew that if she were an enemy he would be dead.
"Ok you two, stop fighting." Their mother Squirrelflight called out from the nursery.
Immediately Darkkit got off of Lightkit, and the two ran towards the nursery after their mother.
Lightkit's whole body shook with excitement. He and his sister were about to become apprentices!
"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the high ledge for a clan meeting!"
Firestar signaled with his tail for the two to come forward." Darkkit from this day forth until you have earned your warrior name you shall be known as Darkpaw, Sorreltail you are a brave and intelligent warrior pass on all you know to Darkpaw." He turned to Lightkit. "Lightkit from this day forth until you have earned your warrior name you shall be known as Lightpaw, Birchclaw you are a strong warrior pass on all you know to Lightpaw."
Lightpaw turned and touched noses with Birchclaw.
"Lightpaw! Darkpaw!" The clan cried.
The two newly apprenticed cats headed over to the apprentices den; there they were greeted by the other apprentices.
"Hello," a pretty gray she-cat called out to the two of them.
"I'm Hazlepaw." Then, she gestured to two toms, one gray one cream colored she said "These are my brothers
The gray one stepped forward "I'm Berrypaw," he flicked his tail toward his brother and said "This is Mousepaw."
The cream colored tom dipped his head in greeting.
Four other cats walked over to them. Lightpaw recognized the golden ginger she-cat Rosepaw, she was Leafpool's apprentice. The other three cats were Sorreltail's other kits.
The four cats walked up to Lightpaw and Darkpaw. A thin black tom came fourth. "I'm Lightningpaw." His voice was cheerful and kind.
A large brown tom dipped his head. My name's Thunderpaw." He said.
The silver she-cat bounded forward "I'm Icepaw." She meowed kindly. Gesturing to Rosepaw she said "This is Rosepaw."
Lightpaw blinked looking at all the other apprentices, "Where do we sleep?" He asked curiously.
"Anywhere," Hazlepaw replied her pretty eyes shinning.
It was late, but Lightpaw couldn't sleep he was to full of excitement. He was finally an apprentice! Lightpaw just couldn't get used to it.
"Lightpaw, Lightpaw" Darkpaw's voice called out from the Darkness.
"Yes" Lightpaw replied starting to feel sleepy at last.
"We're apprentices, but we'll still be best friends right?"
"Of course!" Lightpaw was shocked she would even ask that. "Why would you think we weren't?"
"I saw the way you looked at the other apprentices… especially Hazlepaw."
"Oh." Lightpaw was embarrassed that she'd noticed the way he looked at Hazlepaw. "We'll always be best friends nothing will ever change that nothing.
"Yeah," Darkpaw agreed "Nothing."
Lightpaw didn't know how much he would regret that later.
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