For the people who tell me "if you don't like it, don't read it": I don't read them, but I find them, like you find my things. And it's impossible not to take a look to see if the perpetrators have come up with a sensible excuse after 10 years.
Yes, I'm Fanfiction and I shouldn't criticize, but I ask you a question; why can we comment? On this site we can have our say on these fanfiction, why can't I have my say?
I'm writing it here not to spoil your fanfiction and I also ask questions but I've only had vulgar comments and comments where I agree with me.
Fanfiction where Annabeth cheats on Percy doesn't make sense. Let me explain: Annabeth is intelligent, she has a bond of trust with Percy that has grown through the years, the missions and the tartar, but all this seems to disappear when the new demigod arrives. Sometimes there's a love potion but where did it come from? Why didn't Drew use it on Jason in TLH?
Why when Percy disappears for months Annabeth does not ask questions?Last time he disappeared she went crazy.
Percy and Annabeth they don't live year-round at camp like they seem to do in these fanfictions.
I understand that the oath of the big three ended when Percy asked for that oath to be eliminated in TLO, but how can a child of the big three appear two years later and be the same age as Percy and Annabeth. Where he has been in the wars is how he managed to hide himself from monsters and satyrs; in the oath Percy specifies that the demigods of 12 must camp in the field because the smell is stronger at that age (it is seen with Percy that even if he had the smell of Gabe he was found by the monsters and by Grover).
Fanfiction in which Annabeth accepts immortality:
1) Annabeth has already refused immortality in TTC.
2) She has no ambition for power as a fatal flaw (if she has it where is she written?).
3) She has problems with the Gods, especially with Zeus, Hera, Aphrodite, Hermes and with her mother, I don't think she would like to spend eternity with them.
Fanfiction where Annabeth abuses Percy: where is she so abusive in the books? It seems that she doesn't care about Percy which is debunked in the HOO books
For the people who tell me "if you don't like it, don't read it": I don't read them, but I find them, like you find my things. And it's impossible not to take a look to see if the perpetrators have come up with a sensible excuse after 10 years
Yes, I'm Fanfiction and I shouldn't criticize, but I ask you a question; why can we comment? On this site we can have our say on these fanfiction, why can't I have my say?
I'm writing it here not to spoil your fanfiction and I also ask questions but I've only had vulgar comments and comments where I agree with me.