Sorry about not updating...
Authors notes: sorry that this late..i just changed all classes!!!! I'm so sad.. Well no one guessed who it was... and only 1 person told we to update weekly...I will give a few more chapters for u to decide... ok well I do accept anonymous reviews.. So you have no reason not to review!!! Thank you to all my twenty reviewers!! cheers erupt, gets hit in the head with dozens of flowers catches a few and hands them to the revewers except Vegeta basher.. I hope it has enough twists and turns.
Noodle loving ruby= thank you! I hope your better now!!!! Just so you know this chapter is dedicated to...none other than you!!!!
Kagome of winter dances= thanks cherry! What's that whole smiles @Yamcha? (shudders noticeably!)
Lunatic angel= hey thanks Ajla!
Pia= thank you! You give me a lot to think about!! Your very helpful and I thank you for every thing!
Misstress frostic= hey you actually answered!!! Thank you!
Carrie= thank you!
Mushi-azn= thank you! Hey ; ) theirs Vegeta!!!
Adbzfan2k03= thank you! I hope they are!
Vegeta basher= to you..i haven't got much to say.its your opinion whether Vegeta or Goku is better..i happen to love Vegeta..if u don't like Vegeta then don't read my fic.its going to have lots of Vegeta goodness! And by the way. Vegeta is WAY better than kakarott!
Fereva= yes.but use ur imagination... I know u have one!!!!
Last time (+)-(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_
Bulma walked out of the mall, back straight, next to Chichi with a forced smirk on her face. But in her eyes their was all the emotion she was feeling...if one looked more closely they'd see a tear running down her cheek as she walked, she tried to hide, it but to no avail because someone *did* see the hurt anger and defiance in her eyes...but who?
******new********
that person was... none other than 18.(no one guessed it was 18!! Ha ha fooled ya all!)
18, seeing Bulma's tears she became infuriated.
********flash back********
during the walk from la Sophia jean to the food court 18 saw some cute jeans and told chi and Bulma that she would catch up to them in a few minutes. After buying them she looked at her watch and saw the time..
"oh my god. I have been in here for 25 minutes their probably worried!!" 18 said while franticly shoving her wallet in her purse.
running to catch up, she knocked over a few people and offered a few rushed apologies. suddenly bam she smacked into something or rather somebody.
"ouch, I never knew their was a wall here! Oh. hi Vegeta! What's up?" she asked hurriedly dully he replied a short "nothing." "Hey vegeta," 18 asked, "where are you going?"
scowling he replied "food court, why?"
"no reason, im just meeting Bulma and chi their about..5 minutes ago! Want to walk with me?" 18 asked
" what ever, come on lets go already." He said while walking away
when they get their they see a small crowd gathered around a three some.(no hentai meaning)
hey, see that crowd, want to see what's up?" 18 asked skeptically
" yes, lets go" he said
" hey Vegeta," 18 asked, " isn't that Bulma and Yamcha?"
" yes it's the onna and the weakling, by the way it looks the onna is going to kick his ass." Vegeta smirked as he thought of the weakling being pummeled by Bulma, with the sweat glistening off her flawless body.. I have to get the onna out of my mind, it is a disgrace for the Saiyan prince to act like this, to have these human emotions running through me.
" hey, Vegeta, earth to Vegeta. hey! Your back! Well do you want to watch?" 18 squealed
" humph, what ever. this is going to be boring.. The human weakling vs. a Saiyan female scorned.no contest!" Vegeta mumbled
*********present*********
18 walked quickly to Yamcha and punched him hard enough to knock out a few teeth and barely leave him conscious.
Seething with anger 18 screams " you lying cheating, bastard I'm going to rip you a new throat!"
angrily she lunged for him but was held back by 2 strong arms.
" let go of me ass hole!" she yelled. Her anger was multiplying by the second.
pointing Vegeta said " look who you are calling ass hole"
Looking back 18 saw krillen and blushed he blushed back.
" you just called your own boyfriend an asshole" Vegeta choked out.
"sorry krillen, but Yamcha made me so mad, I couldn't help.."
she was cut off by Vegeta saying "I will take care of the weakling"
cracking his knuckles Vegeta picked up a sniveling Yamcha and delivered a swift kick to his ribs, while punching his face before he even hit the floor. Yamcha decided to retaliate and punched Vegeta in the ribs as hard as he could muster. But Vegeta being a Saiyan, the prince no less it felt like a flea bite.
Amused he asked " is that all you got weakling?"
After about five more minutes of yamchas punishment the crowd had disappeared, already knowing the out come. Security came and told Vegeta to leave.
Laughing Vegeta grabbed Yamcha by the neck and took him outside to the parking lot.
Smiling Vegeta whispered " your so weak, you don't even deserve to live."
Charging up a ki blast Vegeta was about to throw it at Yamcha when he suddenly heard
"VEGETA NO!!!"
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
evil cliffy!!!! Ha ha!!!
Who was it? review and tell me what you think!
Authors notes: Sorry its so short, I had a lot to do and would of posted sooner if my computer would function right! I have had this chapter written since the 6th maybe even eairlier! Thanx bunches!
NOTICE: I need at least 5 new reviews to continue! Have you read or wrote any good stories lately? Email me or review me if you have, I would love to read them.
Thanx ******++++++******++++++
chibi saiyan sarah
Authors notes: sorry that this late..i just changed all classes!!!! I'm so sad.. Well no one guessed who it was... and only 1 person told we to update weekly...I will give a few more chapters for u to decide... ok well I do accept anonymous reviews.. So you have no reason not to review!!! Thank you to all my twenty reviewers!! cheers erupt, gets hit in the head with dozens of flowers catches a few and hands them to the revewers except Vegeta basher.. I hope it has enough twists and turns.
Noodle loving ruby= thank you! I hope your better now!!!! Just so you know this chapter is dedicated to...none other than you!!!!
Kagome of winter dances= thanks cherry! What's that whole smiles @Yamcha? (shudders noticeably!)
Lunatic angel= hey thanks Ajla!
Pia= thank you! You give me a lot to think about!! Your very helpful and I thank you for every thing!
Misstress frostic= hey you actually answered!!! Thank you!
Carrie= thank you!
Mushi-azn= thank you! Hey ; ) theirs Vegeta!!!
Adbzfan2k03= thank you! I hope they are!
Vegeta basher= to you..i haven't got much to say.its your opinion whether Vegeta or Goku is better..i happen to love Vegeta..if u don't like Vegeta then don't read my fic.its going to have lots of Vegeta goodness! And by the way. Vegeta is WAY better than kakarott!
Fereva= yes.but use ur imagination... I know u have one!!!!
Last time (+)-(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_(+)_
Bulma walked out of the mall, back straight, next to Chichi with a forced smirk on her face. But in her eyes their was all the emotion she was feeling...if one looked more closely they'd see a tear running down her cheek as she walked, she tried to hide, it but to no avail because someone *did* see the hurt anger and defiance in her eyes...but who?
******new********
that person was... none other than 18.(no one guessed it was 18!! Ha ha fooled ya all!)
18, seeing Bulma's tears she became infuriated.
********flash back********
during the walk from la Sophia jean to the food court 18 saw some cute jeans and told chi and Bulma that she would catch up to them in a few minutes. After buying them she looked at her watch and saw the time..
"oh my god. I have been in here for 25 minutes their probably worried!!" 18 said while franticly shoving her wallet in her purse.
running to catch up, she knocked over a few people and offered a few rushed apologies. suddenly bam she smacked into something or rather somebody.
"ouch, I never knew their was a wall here! Oh. hi Vegeta! What's up?" she asked hurriedly dully he replied a short "nothing." "Hey vegeta," 18 asked, "where are you going?"
scowling he replied "food court, why?"
"no reason, im just meeting Bulma and chi their about..5 minutes ago! Want to walk with me?" 18 asked
" what ever, come on lets go already." He said while walking away
when they get their they see a small crowd gathered around a three some.(no hentai meaning)
hey, see that crowd, want to see what's up?" 18 asked skeptically
" yes, lets go" he said
" hey Vegeta," 18 asked, " isn't that Bulma and Yamcha?"
" yes it's the onna and the weakling, by the way it looks the onna is going to kick his ass." Vegeta smirked as he thought of the weakling being pummeled by Bulma, with the sweat glistening off her flawless body.. I have to get the onna out of my mind, it is a disgrace for the Saiyan prince to act like this, to have these human emotions running through me.
" hey, Vegeta, earth to Vegeta. hey! Your back! Well do you want to watch?" 18 squealed
" humph, what ever. this is going to be boring.. The human weakling vs. a Saiyan female scorned.no contest!" Vegeta mumbled
*********present*********
18 walked quickly to Yamcha and punched him hard enough to knock out a few teeth and barely leave him conscious.
Seething with anger 18 screams " you lying cheating, bastard I'm going to rip you a new throat!"
angrily she lunged for him but was held back by 2 strong arms.
" let go of me ass hole!" she yelled. Her anger was multiplying by the second.
pointing Vegeta said " look who you are calling ass hole"
Looking back 18 saw krillen and blushed he blushed back.
" you just called your own boyfriend an asshole" Vegeta choked out.
"sorry krillen, but Yamcha made me so mad, I couldn't help.."
she was cut off by Vegeta saying "I will take care of the weakling"
cracking his knuckles Vegeta picked up a sniveling Yamcha and delivered a swift kick to his ribs, while punching his face before he even hit the floor. Yamcha decided to retaliate and punched Vegeta in the ribs as hard as he could muster. But Vegeta being a Saiyan, the prince no less it felt like a flea bite.
Amused he asked " is that all you got weakling?"
After about five more minutes of yamchas punishment the crowd had disappeared, already knowing the out come. Security came and told Vegeta to leave.
Laughing Vegeta grabbed Yamcha by the neck and took him outside to the parking lot.
Smiling Vegeta whispered " your so weak, you don't even deserve to live."
Charging up a ki blast Vegeta was about to throw it at Yamcha when he suddenly heard
"VEGETA NO!!!"
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
evil cliffy!!!! Ha ha!!!
Who was it? review and tell me what you think!
Authors notes: Sorry its so short, I had a lot to do and would of posted sooner if my computer would function right! I have had this chapter written since the 6th maybe even eairlier! Thanx bunches!
NOTICE: I need at least 5 new reviews to continue! Have you read or wrote any good stories lately? Email me or review me if you have, I would love to read them.
Thanx ******++++++******++++++
chibi saiyan sarah