Sorry about not updating...
Authors notes: sorry that this late, ( I seem 2 be saying this a lot as of late.). I have many great excuses, even better then last time I promise :D! in order of importance: my aunt had surgery because her stomach blew out, she's a little better now, my guinea pig died, we had her for like 5 ½ to 6 years, i had band practice, my second cousin had a baby at age 45, and last the evil homework!
Good fic corner: have a new fic out! Its called karaoke madness! Come check it out! Its just getting started but its pretty good, its quickly catching up in the review department! if you want to read a very good b/v fic look for Veil by Shigasu, its really good! The keys by cool mercury is an attention grabber! Most definitely a good one! But sadly it only had 2 reviews.from me. as all writers know that we need reviews to keep going!
Review corner:
Alexia: yes I have read frozen in time! Its really good, I suggest it to everyone.
Kagome osd: your weird. u like Yamcha. ::smacks some sense into her::
Answers: ok. I wont your no fun!
Ruby: hey, its your reviews that keep me going! thanx! And I totally agree on the whole Vegeta is better than Yamcha!
Adbzfan2k03: I will read your fic, but lately I have been very busy! Soon I will read it! It is on my high priority list!!!!
Dewilliams: naaaa, its 18.. hey its not vageta its Vegeta. (
Chosa: thanx its reviews like that that make me happy!
Last time:
cracking his knuckles Vegeta picked up a sniveling Yamcha and delivered a swift kick to his ribs, while punching his face before he even hit the floor. Yamcha decided to retaliate and punched Vegeta in the ribs as hard as he could muster. But Vegeta being a Saiyan, the prince no less it felt like a flea bite.
Amused he asked " is that all you got weakling?"
After about five more minutes of Yamcha's punishment the crowd had disappeared, already knowing the out come. Security came and told Vegeta to leave.
Laughing Vegeta grabbed Yamcha by the neck and took him outside to the parking lot.
Smiling Vegeta whispered " your so weak, you don't even deserve to live."
Charging up a ki blast Vegeta was about to throw it at Yamcha when he suddenly heard
"VEGETA NO!!!"
~~~~~(new)~~~~~
with sadistic laughter Chi chi said "no no, let me have the honors..after all what are friends for?" (damn ALL of Bulma's friends are up in her business!)
so with that Vegeta's ki blast slowly disappeared as chi chi took Yamcha out. After about ten minutes chi chis assault ended. With a glair in Yamcha's direction she clearly spoke " I haven't worked out in months, and still you were no challenge."
Looking in Vegeta's direction she spoke " I don't understand Vegeta, It isn't any fun when they don't fight back!"
With a smirk he laughed out " yes I know, but what are you doing here any way?"
" oh, I forgot my purse at the food court, I came back to get it after I dropped Bulma off." Chi chi said
after retrieving her purse they all said there good bye's and were on their way.
~~~~~ Bulma's house~~~~~
chi chi had known Bulma and her family for so long that she no longer knocked, she just came in or used her key. Once she got in she ran up the stairs to Bulma's room and lightly knocked.
"Bulma can I come in, I have some stuff to tell you"
"sure chi" Bulma softly replied
opening the door chi chi saw Bulma lying on her bed face down with pictures of when her and Yamcha were still going out scattered every where. When Bulma heard the faint sound of chi chi's feet padding against the carpet she looked up.
"wow chi, u look like hell." Bulma giggled
chi chi looked in a mirror finally noticing her bride of Frankenstein hair, dirt smudged cheeks and torn shirt.
Blushing she replied " well after I dropped you off I found I didn't have my purse, when I went to get it I saw Vegeta beating the hell out of Yamcha"
Curiously Bulma asked " but chi, that STILL doesn't tell me why u look like a dog chased you around town"
Proudly chi chi said " I was getting there!"
with a dreamy look in her eyes she replayed what conspired between herself and Yamcha. Bulma shocked to say the least was speechless.
" wow, then I guess between you, 18 and Vegeta he's pretty fucked up then hun?" Bulma asked
" you could say that!" chi ch giggled at the thought
after a half hour of girl talk they decided it was time to "clean house"
" hey b-Chan, do u feel better?"
"yea chi, way better"
with a sadistic smile Bulma lifted her favorite picture of herself and Yamcha and handed it to chi chi. Going to her drawer she found several things she wanted.
Rubbing her hands together Bulma said "its time to clean house!"
Pulling out one of the items out of her drawer she smiled lovingly at it, "Zippo, how much sanity your gonna give me"
With that she snatched the picture away from chi chi and lit the picture on fire, all the while she smiled the biggest smile chi chi had ever seen. Grabbing another lighter she tossed it at chi chi and the bon fire began.
~~~~~ an hour later~~~~~
chi chi left and now that the pictures had all been ruined Bulma laid content on her bed. Grabbing a bottle out of her nightstand she examined it carefully.. smiling at what was going to happen to Yamcha once the contents of the secret brew and him met. With a smirk that could rival Vegeta's best, she said "Yamcha should know better than to mess with a scientist, especially Bulma briefs!" with that she drifted off to a peaceful slumber.
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authors notes: well what is in the secret brew? Wait and find out as soon as I get off my lazy butt and update! But in order to update I need reviews! Even though this was just a filler and had no real substance it did have a few parts that you will see why I put them in later on. sorry its short!
I have a few things to ask:
should I kill off Yamcha? ( I already know ruby's answer) Should I make the chapters longer or shorter? And finally should I update weekly?
Have you read or wrote any good stories lately? Email me or review me if you have, I would love to read them.
flames don't bother me so send them my way if you want!
Thanx
Chibi
Authors notes: sorry that this late, ( I seem 2 be saying this a lot as of late.). I have many great excuses, even better then last time I promise :D! in order of importance: my aunt had surgery because her stomach blew out, she's a little better now, my guinea pig died, we had her for like 5 ½ to 6 years, i had band practice, my second cousin had a baby at age 45, and last the evil homework!
Good fic corner: have a new fic out! Its called karaoke madness! Come check it out! Its just getting started but its pretty good, its quickly catching up in the review department! if you want to read a very good b/v fic look for Veil by Shigasu, its really good! The keys by cool mercury is an attention grabber! Most definitely a good one! But sadly it only had 2 reviews.from me. as all writers know that we need reviews to keep going!
Review corner:
Alexia: yes I have read frozen in time! Its really good, I suggest it to everyone.
Kagome osd: your weird. u like Yamcha. ::smacks some sense into her::
Answers: ok. I wont your no fun!
Ruby: hey, its your reviews that keep me going! thanx! And I totally agree on the whole Vegeta is better than Yamcha!
Adbzfan2k03: I will read your fic, but lately I have been very busy! Soon I will read it! It is on my high priority list!!!!
Dewilliams: naaaa, its 18.. hey its not vageta its Vegeta. (
Chosa: thanx its reviews like that that make me happy!
Last time:
cracking his knuckles Vegeta picked up a sniveling Yamcha and delivered a swift kick to his ribs, while punching his face before he even hit the floor. Yamcha decided to retaliate and punched Vegeta in the ribs as hard as he could muster. But Vegeta being a Saiyan, the prince no less it felt like a flea bite.
Amused he asked " is that all you got weakling?"
After about five more minutes of Yamcha's punishment the crowd had disappeared, already knowing the out come. Security came and told Vegeta to leave.
Laughing Vegeta grabbed Yamcha by the neck and took him outside to the parking lot.
Smiling Vegeta whispered " your so weak, you don't even deserve to live."
Charging up a ki blast Vegeta was about to throw it at Yamcha when he suddenly heard
"VEGETA NO!!!"
~~~~~(new)~~~~~
with sadistic laughter Chi chi said "no no, let me have the honors..after all what are friends for?" (damn ALL of Bulma's friends are up in her business!)
so with that Vegeta's ki blast slowly disappeared as chi chi took Yamcha out. After about ten minutes chi chis assault ended. With a glair in Yamcha's direction she clearly spoke " I haven't worked out in months, and still you were no challenge."
Looking in Vegeta's direction she spoke " I don't understand Vegeta, It isn't any fun when they don't fight back!"
With a smirk he laughed out " yes I know, but what are you doing here any way?"
" oh, I forgot my purse at the food court, I came back to get it after I dropped Bulma off." Chi chi said
after retrieving her purse they all said there good bye's and were on their way.
~~~~~ Bulma's house~~~~~
chi chi had known Bulma and her family for so long that she no longer knocked, she just came in or used her key. Once she got in she ran up the stairs to Bulma's room and lightly knocked.
"Bulma can I come in, I have some stuff to tell you"
"sure chi" Bulma softly replied
opening the door chi chi saw Bulma lying on her bed face down with pictures of when her and Yamcha were still going out scattered every where. When Bulma heard the faint sound of chi chi's feet padding against the carpet she looked up.
"wow chi, u look like hell." Bulma giggled
chi chi looked in a mirror finally noticing her bride of Frankenstein hair, dirt smudged cheeks and torn shirt.
Blushing she replied " well after I dropped you off I found I didn't have my purse, when I went to get it I saw Vegeta beating the hell out of Yamcha"
Curiously Bulma asked " but chi, that STILL doesn't tell me why u look like a dog chased you around town"
Proudly chi chi said " I was getting there!"
with a dreamy look in her eyes she replayed what conspired between herself and Yamcha. Bulma shocked to say the least was speechless.
" wow, then I guess between you, 18 and Vegeta he's pretty fucked up then hun?" Bulma asked
" you could say that!" chi ch giggled at the thought
after a half hour of girl talk they decided it was time to "clean house"
" hey b-Chan, do u feel better?"
"yea chi, way better"
with a sadistic smile Bulma lifted her favorite picture of herself and Yamcha and handed it to chi chi. Going to her drawer she found several things she wanted.
Rubbing her hands together Bulma said "its time to clean house!"
Pulling out one of the items out of her drawer she smiled lovingly at it, "Zippo, how much sanity your gonna give me"
With that she snatched the picture away from chi chi and lit the picture on fire, all the while she smiled the biggest smile chi chi had ever seen. Grabbing another lighter she tossed it at chi chi and the bon fire began.
~~~~~ an hour later~~~~~
chi chi left and now that the pictures had all been ruined Bulma laid content on her bed. Grabbing a bottle out of her nightstand she examined it carefully.. smiling at what was going to happen to Yamcha once the contents of the secret brew and him met. With a smirk that could rival Vegeta's best, she said "Yamcha should know better than to mess with a scientist, especially Bulma briefs!" with that she drifted off to a peaceful slumber.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
authors notes: well what is in the secret brew? Wait and find out as soon as I get off my lazy butt and update! But in order to update I need reviews! Even though this was just a filler and had no real substance it did have a few parts that you will see why I put them in later on. sorry its short!
I have a few things to ask:
should I kill off Yamcha? ( I already know ruby's answer) Should I make the chapters longer or shorter? And finally should I update weekly?
Have you read or wrote any good stories lately? Email me or review me if you have, I would love to read them.
flames don't bother me so send them my way if you want!
Thanx
Chibi