Kyuubi: Next one, kinda sad.
Ed: I still say that you're more angst-filled then me!
Kyuubi: Hey! I can only write angst in poems, not stories! The closest to angst I've gone in a one-shot is Bluebird...which I need to post sometime...maybe someday, but not today!
Ed: You're hopeless. Disclaimer: Sue, make an ass out of yourself, so go ahead, I won't get into trouble!
Swirling, swirling everywhere,
Lost in a sea of emotions.
When I try to find one,
I get blown away.
Everything seems to float by me,
Time is moving so slow.
I can't get a grip on reality,
And everything passes by me.
voices and phrases I can't remember,
Broken fragments of old talks,
Twirl in my ears.
Visions and moments of times past,
I can't remember where,
Fly in front of my eyes.
As my vision and hearing starts to fade,
I can smell metallic fluid with my nose.
Other smells join with the first,
Most I can't remember when.
As the ground rushes up to meet me,
I start to feel numb.
Caresses and touches from a place I can't remember,
Come forward.
As my last breath shatters forth,
I remember someone I love.
And I lay still.
Kyuubi: POV from someone dying. If you couldn't tell. The one who they love is someone who has already died and are going to meet in heaven.
Ed: Wow, kinda good. Anyway, Read and Review please!