CHAPTER 5
ED FIGHTS THE AUTHOR BUT THERES STILL A STORY
STORY SO FAR: Ed and Krissy are alone talking and she is going to travel with the Elric's and get her auto mail soon
Krissy asked question ling so why do you 2 travels? "(Krissy has lost some of her memory only that she doesn't know it)
Ed: well we are looking for the philosopher stone, have you heard of it?
Krissy: well the name sounds familiar but I can't say I have before.
Ed: I see umm I have a question to ask you
And just then Winry appeared with a happy look on her face. Winry "are you ready for your auto mail? "
Krissy was shocked and was very scared, "w-wait what! "
Winry, "oh don't be such babies it won't hurt…. Much."
Krissy said "WHAT DO YOU MEAN MUCH! "
Winry ordered Ed, "Ed can you go grab a weel chair for young Krissy and take her to the operating room."
Al came and Winry ordered him to do the same thing and so he did and she was in a weel chair easy to go. Ed wheeled her off to the operating room and they placed her on an operating table. Krissy was worried. Ed and Al left the room and waited in the living room. Ed had a question that was bugging him. He thought, well if she actually is my other hafe from the other side of the gate would she happen to know who the other Al to? Well Krissy is probly in a terrible state I don't want to ask her too many questions well not yet any how. Al interrupted his thoughts.
Al: brother is something bothering you. It looks like you're in a trance of some sort. Were you thinking about something?
Ed: Nah I'm ok I was just thinking of something about that girl, from what she told me she is from the other side of the gate and if that is actually true then on her way to this world she could of seen your body and then we know for sure that your body is there, but I don't want to disturb her.
Al: Good thinking Ed but she will leave here soon.
Ed: not likely you see she is going to travel with us from now on and help us out some more.
Al was shocked he didn't want Krissy to come it could be too dangerous. We had some life threating things happen to us and I don't want to have another person hurt or killed in the matter. Al finally spoke up. "Brother doesn't take me wrong but I don't think this is a good idea. A lot of people have helped us in the passed and they got hurt and even killed and I don't want that happening to Krissy. She's too young to die she has a life and I know deep down she wants to leave just like me with me and my armor. I know she can help us really very much I do but I don't want her to get killed in the process."
Ed: yea I know what you mean but we are very strong we can protect this short girl. Wait speaking of which how old is she? She looks like she could be 12 years old.
Al: who knows she can probly be as old as you or me.
Ed: true I'm surprised I haven't heard a peep from the shorty
Al: should we tell her about our human transmutation? Or should we just keep it in the dark and regret it later like in all the other fan fictions on this web site?
Ed: Well to tell you the truth I have read some fan fictions on here and they are pretty good.
Al: only because you're the real main character in all the stories and no one likes me only because I'm in a tin can.
Al starts to cry well tries to anyway. Ed couldn't handle it any more. Ed said "well how about the author of this super cool story has the next chapter be. AL'S TURN TO SHINE! "
Al was over whelmed. Al said "Brother you REALLY mean it, thank you so much. "
Ed: no problem I'll be right back I need to talk to the author.
Ed walks to Utikomi (that's me)
Ed:" Utikomi if that is actually your real name make sure the next chapter is called AL'S TRUN TO SHINE. And if you don't you will be sorry and I mean it if you don't next time then well I will have to kick your ass and this cool story won't go on with you dead."
Utikomi was shocked. She said shockingly but yet brave. "I will Mr. Elric but PLEASE DO NOT KILL ME I'M ONLY A POOR 14 YEAR OLD GIRL PLEASE! "
Ed said "well then put my little brother on the title of your next chapter and include him more in the story I know you love me and all and worship me and wish I was real but you have to make my little brother in the story more often. Or if you do not then I will have to tell every one who is reading this all of your secrets and I'm sure you don't want that to happen do u? "
Utikomi said almost crying "Edward you're so... so mean. Fine in the next chapter I will make some thing embarrassing happen to you because I have more power then you I control this story and you don't. "
Ed said " so I don't care now please get the hell out of here your wasting to much time and remember what I said. "
Utikomi said with pride "Yes Edward I will try my hardest."
Ed said smiling "Ok then but name this chapter "Edward and The Author fight" ok?
And then Ed shoved her to the door and kicked her out the door and he walked back down smiling and he looked at his brother. Ed said "well I told the author to add you more in the story and it's your turn to shine on the next chapter. "
Al: but you abused her brother and you threatened to kill her but hey oh well as long as I'm the main character I couldn't care less.
The author looks outside the window and cries sadly and runs away to type her next chapter of "Krissy meets THE FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST"
Ed and Al kept talking about the author and how stupid she is and Ed told Al that he's going to spill her secrets any way Al thought that was cruel but yet funny. Ed and Al talked for what seemed like years sipping their coffee well Edward did
And just then krissy appeared.
A/N I tried my best and this chapter I wanted it to be a lmao type 1 aka lf my ass off cuz to me like them types of story so you better remind me to make the next chapter and chapter name about Al or other wise I'll get my ass kicked. SO PLEZ R&R AND TELL ME HOW TO IMPROVE AND I WILL COMMENT YOU BACK !