Nine pages! Well, I would have continued and posted later once more reviews got in, but it was getting pretty long. Never fear, though, any reviews sent after I finish this chapter will be included in the next one. Anyway, I'm going to be speeding through this to get as much as possible done before we move and lose internet access until mid September. Hope you enjoy it! Review, either to me or the Sue!

Thanks a ton to everyone who sent their reviews! The characters all love you now.

It was then that SueBasher reappeared. Yeah, bet you thought we'd seen the last of her, didn't you? I wouldn't be on it. Her annoyingness is too great to be stopped.

Suddenly, a plot hole opened and they could see what I was typing on the screen.

"Hey!" shouted SueBasher.

"Is this like the time we ran into the person writing our story last time?" asked Aang.

Yes, Aang, it is.

"What I want to know is why the author is insulting me," snapped SueBasher.

"What I want to know is what is going on," retorted Toph.

As Katara explained, the words appearing on the screen continued to insult SueBasher.

I'm insulting you because you're annoying and stupid!

"Look who's talking!"

I can't. I'm not talking, I'm typing. And if you're too stupid to notice that, then you're… stupid!

"You just said that!"

Well, in an attempt not to make you a Mary-Sue, you turned out as an awful and terrible person reflecting only bad traits.

"Just goes to show that those who can't write shouldn't even try."

Hey! I've created a monster.

"Seriously, can you write any original characters who are likable but not Sues?"

Can you? Or would you like me to tell Toph who really wrote the example Sue. What was her name? Celeste?

"Don't you dare…"

Hmm… and what was your real name again…

"Random, if you tell them that…"

"Who was it?" asked Toph, who didn't notice the hints because of a plot hole. And her knowing what was going on wasn't a plot hole, it was just Katara reading aloud.

"It was Random Stuff About Stuff!" lied SueBasher evilly. "Hey! I am not evil!"

I notice you didn't deny lying, SueBasher. Or should I say… Celeste?

There was a pause.

"Your real name is Celeste?" demanded Sokka.

"No!" exclaimed SueBasher.

Toph, meanwhile, was absolutely livid with rage. And if Katara reads this aloud to her, then I will write a Jetara!

"What's a Jetara, Toph?" Katara asked.

"You and Jet, why?" asked Toph, and went back to screaming at SueBasher without waiting for an answer.

"You wouldn't dare!" screeched Katara. If computers could flinch, it would.

"Write a Jetara! I would kill you!

Suddenly, they noticed that they couldn't see the writing anymore. Well, except for Toph, who was too busy yelling at SueBasher, and couldn't see anyways.

"Random! Get back here!"

"Wrote a Sue with me in it! I thought you said you'd deleted it!"

"I did," SueBasher promised. "I just kept that one chapter to use as an example…

"Traitor!" exclaimed Toph.

"Come on, Random, stop running away! What's that typing noise? You aren't writing a Jetara, are you? Random Stuff About Stuff get your virtual butt back here!"

"Uhh, Toph?" interrupted Aang. In fact, all of the guys were trying to talk to their enraged female counterparts.

"Katara…"

"SueBasher, maybe you'd better…"

"Let me handle this," suggested Momo with a voice he'd acquired from a plot hole. This time, it was a girl's voice, but whatever.

"Everybody QUIET!"

As predicted, everyone fell deathly silent and stared at Momo. "There's a Sue here," he told them calmly.

There was no mass panic, which would have been funny, and I'm glad I went away or I would be killed for saying that.

The Sue had blonde hair. That was the first thing they noticed. And they all knew what blonde hair was because of a plot hole opened by SueBasher.

"Is that… Myra?" asked Iroh in a strangled voice.

Sokka whimpered and hid behind Zuko, who was conveniently placed and also taller than him. The Prince stared at Sokka for a moment, and then moved aside, gesturing at the other boy as something between bait and a human sacrifice. Unfortunately, the plan didn't work.

"Hoo is My ra?" asked the Sue in horrible spelling. "I m Celeste."

"What" demanded everyone. SueBasher chuckled nervously.

"I thought you deleted her," Aang asked.

"Uhh… well… Technically, I never said I deleted her…"

"You said there was no way she could enter this world," Zuko accused.

"Unfortunately, that's my sister's fault…" began SueBasher.

"OMG! Wat r u al taking abot?" asked Celeste.

"Your sister?" snapped everyone.

SueBasher backed away as well as someone without a body could. "Err…"

"How…" Iroh demanded.

"Well… it's… It's Zuko's fault!"

Everyone turned to stare at Zuko, except Celeste.

"OMG wats gong on?" asked the Sue. She was ignored.

"His flames made Belle stronger," explained SueBasher, less nervous now that everyone's glares were on someone else. "When Belle died, she transferred her strength into another Sue. Celeste."

"Actually, that only works if a Sue has been posted," Momo pointed out. On cue, everyone turned to glare at SueBasher.

I'm glaring at you, too, piped up the typed words that appeared.

"Random, did you know about this?" Sokka asked.

Err… Hey, look, guys, reviews from the Order of the Reviewers to Myra are coming in!

"Don't try and change the subject," warned Zuko.

"Hoo is My ra?" asked Celeste.

"We'd better read the reviews and worry about them later," suggested Iroh. With the last few glares aimed at the computer in general and Celeste, who hadn't really done anything but deserved to be glared at for stupidity alone, they sat down to read.

"The first review is from…" began Momo.

"Wait!" shouted Appa. "We need to get it to the Sue, don't we?"

SueBasher quickly accessed the story again, eager to do something useful. "You don't have to type, Iroh, I can do it," she offered sweetly. Nobody replied except Celeste.

"I nomely no evrthing but wat is tipe?" asked the Sue. She was ignored.

"Alright," read Momo. "The first review is from Mistress Dizzy!"

Hmm. I'd like to say this story has potential, but there really hasn't been much to go by yet. You start out seemingly long after you meet the girl, and suddenly you're back in the present? It's very confusing. Also, instead of telling the reader that everyone thought Myra was special, how about showing the reader, through dialogue and action? It's far more interesting, and would draw the reader in more. Also, the character's looks don't fit the universe. Avatar is based from several different Asian cultures. When's the last time you saw an Asian person with naturally blonde hair? Everyone else's hair is black, brown, or shades in between, save for Yue, the moon girl, who's name you couldn't be bothered to look up? It's quite easy to look up a name, there are several very good fansites out there to choose from and glean information.

The yellow-green eyes fit well, because she's from the Earth kingdom, the cat-like pupils are a bit odd, but perhaps they have some significance? That's all down to you, I guess. Her being tall and delicate is fine as well, but how about some description of what she's wearing? Is she in a frilly kimono, or is she wearing stolen soldier's armor? Give us a little more to go by.

Also, having author's note in mid-story makes it distracting from the story. But, then, that's my opinion, I've seen a lot of authors do it, and it doesn't bother most people. Your grammar and spelling are quite alright, but some your sentences are a tad repetitive and sometimes choppy. Perhaps look up different ways to say the word 'special' and sprinkle them throughout?

Hmm, what else, what else... The bit about Zuko seems a bit telling. I mean, if you say he's going to show up in the first chapter, then it ruins any sort of surprise if all the readers know he's on his way somehow.

Good things- the name, Myra. I think it's lovely, and the bit about it being Aang's mother's name is cute. She seems the right build to be an airbender, being tall and thin would probably help (seems to work for Aang, although he's a bit short).

ALright, I take it back. You've got a good handle on your language, so I'll say you do have some potential.

"There's the first review, do you have it typed up, SueBasher," asked Appa.

"Yes," SueBasher replied. They didn't notice that she had just copied and pasted, and they didn't notice Random pointing it out.

"The next review is from Brix."

OK, that is all ready a sue and the fic inside a fic was only like 3 paragraphs. No one in the Avatar verse has blond hair, cat like pupils, or yellow-green eyes. Gah! It's a Sue! Must burn it! Burn! Burn! Burn! takes out flame thrower and burns computer screen to find no damage is done. Pulls up a piece of paper, pencil and certain colored pencils and draws sue then burns the drawing Mwahahahahaha! Take that sue!

There was a pause in reaction to all of the evil laughter before they continued as normal.

"Okay. Got that, SueBasher?"

"Sure-be do."

"Okay. Never say that again. Who's next, Momo?"

"Kittydemon18."

I hope I'm doing this right this is in response to that new sue bashing fic you've posted, which looks excellent but why is the sue more powerful than the last one and already able to influence characters, mostly Iroh, so strongly?

Err… appeared on the screen. Because… They were weakened by the last Sue and more likely to… react to it? Like poisen oak! The more times you get it, the more susceptible to it you are! Yeah, that sounds right.

Glad you liked it.

"Shut up, Random," ordered Momo.

Make me.

SueBasher clicked so that the program Random was using was exited.

"Thank you."

SueBasher beamed.

as to critiquing the sue (this does not reflect upon random stuff aboutstuff's true writing capabilities in the least. This is all directed to the hopefully fictional author of the sue story)

Ha! (Yes, it is fictional)

"SueBasher…" She exited the program again, thus ending author interludes.

If you're going to create a character for the avatar world then at least make her look more like someone who actually came from the world. cat pupils are not natural and there has yet to be ANYONE ever shown with blonde hair, people either have brown or black hair or white in the case of old age or being blessed by the moon like Yue, the moon girl to you since you failed to do the proper research in your so called story about character backgrounds. Also, the only person that could POSSIBLY be able to sense bending in someone without sounding completely OOC is Aunt Wu, who you probably don't know because you don't pay any attention to the important though lesser known characters. Katara is unable to sense bending ability within a person and Toph is not an encouraging person, she is sarcastic, slightly selfish, rude and friends only to a VERY small select few. Zuko is an angsty permanently exiled prince who has trouble with being humble and realizing that his father is a jerk and that he should listen to his elders, especially Iroh and his friends. He is not someone who would fall in love easily, if ever and having him feel affectionate towards a girl he only saw for perhaps a few minutes is completely unbelievable and don't even get me started on Sokka!

end review

how was that? did I flame too much?

"What do you think, guys, did she/he?"

"Yes."

"No."

"Nope."

"Maybe."

"Chicken."

"I'm hungry."

"Who cares?"

"Yes and no without the yes or the no."

"Perhaps…"

"Hmm…"

"She reviewed."

"Duh."

"Why are there more people answering the question than there are here?"

At that, all of the random people disappeared and the plot hole closed. And Momo continued reading reviews. "This one is from Zelscar."

Why would you say your character isn't a Mary Sue if you have no idea what a Mary Sue IS? That makes...lesse...One black mark on your record. The next of course is that why in the world would your character be special if she wasn't a bender? Lots of people aren't! And I'm sorry, you can't exactly gain airbending powers out of the blue. You either have it or you don't, and if she was a bender, she's be an EARTHbender. Moving on to appearances, the Avatar world is based off of ancient China/Korea/ect. No blondes, sorry. Plus, aside from the airbenders and many of the Fire Nation, people here don't have green-yellow eyes. And as for cat pupils, not only are they out of character they are extremely impractical as cat's pupils are slitted horizontally, letting them see horizontally, thus she wouldn't be able to see well. as a closing note I shall repeat one of fanfictions unwritten, yet golden, rules. Original characters are made to help the plot along, they shouldn't have the whole thing revolve around them, nor should they be the love interest of ANY cannon character. -nods- Thank you, that is all.

Jack the Monkey:-screech-

Alright, THAT'S all then.

"Hoo is Jack the Munke?" asked Celeste.

"Shut up, please," replied Toph. "See, I'm being polite," she added.

"But hoo is Jake the Munke?" repeated the Sue. "Toffee, y wont u anser me?"

"GAH! My name is not Toffee!" Toph screamed. She waved a magic Sue-banishing wand she had gotten from a plot hole.

"Begone, Sue, and never bother this fandom again!"

And so the Sue disappeared. And they were all happy.

"Thank you, Toph, the next review is from loalaa."

Well, it could be worse. Your spelling/grammar seems to be good. It definitely needs some work though.

First off: Aang is the last airbender. That means there are no more. Which means that girls from the EARTH nation do not randomly gain airbender abilities. A Mary-Sue is a perfect character. Or close enough. Katara can't sense if people will be great benders or not. If anyone can, it would be Aang. Aang shouldn't know his mother's name. He was raised by monks. Myradoesn't fit into the Air nation naming scheme all that well. The moon girl is YUE. Look it up if you can't remember. Sokka should NOT instantly fall in love with new girls, because he is still mourning Yue. He's still interested in Suki, but he was long before Yue. People in the Avatar world do not have blond hair. They do not have cat-like eyes. I suppose they might be able to have yellow-green colored eyes...

Zuko doesn't think people are special because they know of the Avatar

Oo

Oh, and one last thing: Putting 'Not a Mary-Sue' won't help people read it much. Others should be the judge to whether or not she is one.

"Hey, look, it's a face!" exclaimed Katara who had been unusually quiet and OOC lately. She pointed at the little thing and instantly brought up another program on the computer and began typing smiley faces.

"Okay… Well, Momo, any more reviews," asked Sokka.

"Not yet." Momo turned to face an empty space.

"Keep reviewing, folks! They don't have to be too long! The next chapter and maybe a few after that will all be reviews!"

"Wat is a captur, and hoo r u taking 2?" asked Celeste.

"Begone!" yelled Toph.