Several hours and more 'begone's later from Toph, Momo found some more reviews.

"Guys, I found some more reviews!" Momo exclaimed several hours and more begone's from Toph later.

Stop stealing my introduction, Momo, I wrote it first.

"Yeah, well, I said it first!" exclaimed the lemur, reading what appeared on the computer.

And SueBasher, don't you dare get rid of me like you did last time…

"Make me."

Well, since I don't want you to get rid of me, I don't think I will.

"I mean, make me not get rid of you like I did last time."

SueBasher2000, if you use that cursor against me, I will hijack your email and tell the creators to start calling Toph 'Toffee'.

"But that's cruel to me, too," protested 'Toffee'.

"Hey!" she added as Katara told her what the computer had said about her.

Let's see… Hmm… SueBasher, if you close my program again, I will send the other chapters of your Sue to our friends here so he can read them, Katara, if you continue to read incriminating things I'll write a Jetara, and Toph, if you smash me with that boulder, I'll invent a pairing for you.

"Like what?" asked Toph.

Hmm… Has any one written a Tzai? Toph and Fire Lord Ozai?

"You wouldn't dare…"

I'd post it, too. Just for you, Tofu.

"Tofu?"

Wave Maker said in a review: PS. SueBasher! Your Sue took my nickname for Toph! I totally thought of Toffee first! And Toph, deal with the nickname, atleast it's not Tofu like one of my friends calls you.

"Tofu?"

And with Toph out of the way, we can give you the reviews, and the newest chapter of the Sue's story!

"Actually, Random," Momo suggested, "We were thinking of only reading part of each review this time, in order to keep the readers from having to read the same thing over and over again."

So long as we submit the entire review, it's fine by me. Especially since I thought of that myself.

"Alright. So. Here's part of a review from… Midori Aoi, possibly the nicest reviewer we've had so far!"

"...Okay The beginning got me really hooked on, and tat's a good thing. it was well written and really catchy but...thing is you made the actual cannon characters have these completely different abilities that they usually didn't have on the show. Unless of course this is an AU thing and they originally had these gifts to begin with. THEN that would work. But if not, don't stress it too much. other wise it'll only attract flamers like honey attracts desperate bees..."

"Wow," Katara said. "That was... polite."

Momo did not deign to answer that. "And now... FireSaber!"

All in all, the sentences are a bit choppy. Maybe you should use some prepositions? A Marysue is a character in fanfiction that is perfect and uusually has the canon characters falling for them. And so far Myra seems like a Mary-Sue. I would suggest making her a little less... perfect.

"To those who don't know," Iroh put in, "Canon characters are characters who are originally in the show. Everyone here except for SueBasher and Random, plus all of our kind reviewers, is canon."

"Cannons go boom!" exclaimed Zuko. Everyone stared."What?"

"Okay, I'm not even going to ask," Aang told him.

"About what?" asked Zuko.

"Cannons go boom!" mimicked Sokka.

"Well they do!"

"Do cannons even exist in the Avatarverse?" asked SueBasher.

"They do in this version!" replied Katara.

"Here's… something from kittydemon18," Momo interrupted.

"Something?" asked Sokka.

"It's not precisely a review, just… something."

chocolate cookies for toph since she used the wand to try to

banish the sue. though she didn't want to she is turning out to be an

excellent asset to the war against the sues, chocolate chip cookies are my specialty

chocolate creme pie for katara

choclate covered creme filled donuts for zuko

chicken pot pie for sokka

vegetarian lasagna for aang

sweet tea for iroh

apples for momo

hay for appa

you can't fight sues on an empty stomach!

As she spoke, (or typed. Or was read) the foods appeared in front of everyone.

"Thanks, kittydemon18!" exclaimed Appa, digging in. Other thanks were echoed by the others.

"Here's a review from Unknown," SueBasher announced while they ate.

First of all, if Myra, who is from the Earth Kingdom, were to be a bender, she would be able to bend ONLY EARTH. Aang is the LAST airbender, so Myra wouldn't get airbending. Saying that Myra isn't a Mary Sue doesn't get more people to read your fanfiction. It's up to the reader to decide whether or not Myra is a Mary Sue. And I think she is. A Mary Sue is a female original character that's perfect in every way. About the special thing, one of my quotes is, "Show, don't tell." Show through dialouge and actions that Myra is special. Simply telling that Aang, Katara, Sokka, Toph, and Zuko knew Myra was special doesn't really work. Showing, not telling, will make your fanfiction better.

As the review was read, everyone finished their food.

"The next one is from i love zuko," Momo told them.

"I don't," Toph said.

"You don't what?" asked Zuko.

"Love you," she told him.

"That's nice. Who are you again?"

"Begone!"

Zuko did not be gone.

"And Random talked like a pirate," Appa put in.

Shut up.

"Now, whoeveryouare, be nice," Iroh admonished.

GAHH!

And with that little interlude over, the story continued as planned.

Aang has no idea who his mother is. Remember in the first episode?

You wouldn't know of fathers, being raised by monks.

-Zuko

Yes, I know it said FATHERS, but it also said he was raised by monks. Which means he wouldn't have any idea who his mother was or her name. Nobody has blonde hair in the Avatar world. Don't mention somebody if you don't know their name. She's not special because she knew of the Avatar. Almost EVERYONE knows of the Avatar by now.

"Did the Sue mean she knew of the Avatar, or where the Avatar was?" asked Sokka.

"I dunno, but she said of the Avatar," Katara told him.

"Hmm… lets hope she changes that into something more… understandable," Aang advised.

"The next thing submitted is from someone named Risu, who would like another chapter of the Sue's story," Momo said. "That is upcoming, and thank you, Risu for your advice."

"Wave Maker again, except this time, reviewing the Sue, not just helping us annoy Toph," Appa announced.

1) Never, ever, EVER say that your friend said to say that your story is not a MS so people would read it, and then say that you don't evenknow what it is. That is just the alarm to readers that it IS a Sue.

2) The story is very repetitive, and as Mistress Dizzy said, you could have tried looking up similar words as replacements(Hint: thesaurus. so as not to bore readers.

3)Katara can't sense bending. That's like saying writers can sense other writers or people who are good at math can sense other people who are good at it. Just because they have an ability, doesn't mean they have a link with other people who can do it.

4) Since when does insiting you can't bend make you special?

5) I checked on and while Myra is a very cool name, it isn't Asian, nor Asian sounding. It's Latin, infact, and names in the Avatarverse are often NOT Latin. Try a name that sounds more Avatarish.

12) This was way too short for a first chapter, even too short for a prolouge. You should have waited until you finished more before you updated.

Positives (Sorry, but there aren't a lot):

1) I really liked the opening.

2) I also really liked the part about Aang's mother having the same name. Pretty touching.

3) I find there nothing wrong with someone finding someone special because the person is pretty. That's perfectly fine with me.

4) You actually put a bio in for your char! That's like, a miracle in most Sues! Good for you!

Fix the problems, and you'll have way more fans. And quickly, before the flamers get here! shifty eyes before getting away before the flamers arrive

"Interesting," Iroh commented. "And where are the flamers?"

"More importantly, why isn't Zuko flaming?" Sokka asked. Zuko, meanwhile, was trying to juggle rocks, which wasn't working too well, but was better than his attempts to juggle knives.

Toph suddenly tried to hide the magic wand behind her back, looking very guilty.

"Toph, did you make Zuko not a flamer?" Katara asked.

"No, why would you think that?" asked the Earth Bender.

"Because it says on the computer that you were looking guilty."

"Well… er…"

She did. Actually, she was just trying to help, since flamers make the Sue's stronger, but she sort of…made a mistake…

"What mistake did she make?" asked Aang.

"Made a mistake, kissed a snake, how many doctors did it take?" Zuko chanted.

"Made him insane," SueBasher suggested.

Something like that.

"We have to change him back!" exclaimed Appa. There was a pause. "Eventually."

"Let's just wait," Iroh put in. "It won't kill Zuko to be happy for a little while."

"And it won't kill us to be around him while he's not evil," Katara added.

"I love you, you love me, we're a happy family, with a great big hug and a kiss from me to you, won't you say you love me too?" Zuko suddenly ended his song with giving Toph a hug.

"Are you sure?" she demanded.

"PyroJess has something to say about that," Momo told them.

"She does?"

"No, but she does have something to say."

cat eyes are plain unnatural, if you say that she is a demon/demon host than that will be even worse, sokka would not fall in love that easily, especially after yue, why would insisting she isn't a bender make her special? aang is the LAST airbender, check the name of the show,people cannot just gain a dead bending power and knowing about the avatar is not special, almost everyone does and he didn't fall in love because his heart already belonged to someone else? if you are going to do a pairing that hasn't been started in the show yet don't make it there at the start of the fic, keep to what has been shown!

"That pretty much covers it," Sokka commented. "And now, for the next installment in the Sue's story: Uhmm… what was it called again?"

"It was called… I forget."

"Alright! And now, for the next installment in the Sue's story: I forget!"

"Bending Nations."

"What about them?"

"Oh, never mind!"

Okay, so, I've seen people in books trying to explain what happened in the last book in context, so I tried to do that here. Hope it works!

Myra walked home from the place where she had sold bread to Aang, who thought she was special because she had his mother's name, Katara, who thought she was special because she was going to be a great bender, Toph, who thought she was special because she said she wasn't, Sokka, who thought she was special because she was beautiful, even more so that Yue, and Zuko, who thought she was special because she knew where the Avatar had been.

It was a good thing that Myra really was special, because she had known who Aang was as soon as she saw him. She had known that the Avatar was the last hope of the world, and been clever enough to tell Zuko that Aang had gone in a different direction than he really had.

But Myra didn't know that. All she knew was that Katara and Sokka must be wrong. She wasn't a great bender, or even a bender at all, and she definitely wasn't beautiful. Was she?

When Myra got home, she noticed that everyone seemed sad.

"What's wrong?" she asked her mother.

"Your brother Shiven is missing," her mother told Myra. "We cannot find him.

"I'll find him," Myra promised, and she ran out the door.

Myra looked everywhere for Shiven, before she decided to stop and think. Where could he be? Suddenly, she had an idea. She had promised to take her brother to climb the rocks as soon as she got off work, but because of Zuko, she had been late. Could he have tried to go by himself?

"No," whispered Myra, but she knew she was right.

The young girl ran as fast as she could towards the rocks where Shiven might be. Sure enough, he was hanging onto the cliffface for dear life, screaming for help.

"Shiven," Myra called, "Grab my hand!"

Shiven reached up towards her, but his grip loosened and he fell.

"No!" Myra cried, waving her arms desperately. Suddenly, Shiven was lifted out of the air and onto the ground.

He stared at her like she was a monster. "You're an airbender!" Myra's brother exclaimed.

Myra turned and ran.

Well, that's all I have so far. Does anyone have any ideas for the plot later on? I know she'll go to find Aang, like it says in the summary, and fall in love with Sokka and help everyone with their relationship problems, but do you have any other idea? Thanks if you do!

"Well, she got a little better," commented Katara. "I still don't get…"

"A little better?" demanded Zuko in a high-pitched voice. "That was amazing! Wonderful! The best story I've ever read in my whole entire life! It was beautiful! Stupendous! Great! I loved it!"

"Fire Nation must not have much reading material," muttered Sokka. He shouldn't have said anything, because as soon as he drew attention to himself, Zuko started hugging him.

"Toph!" screamed the blue-clad warrior, "Change him back!"

Toph waved her wand at Zuko. "Begone!" she shouted. Zuko did not be gone, but he did go back to normal. Just in time to find himself hugging Sokka.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! Get away from me!" shouted the prince.

"You get away from me, you're the one who was hugging me!"

"Was not!"

"Were too!"

"Was not!"

"Were too!"

"Was!"

"Were!"

"Was!"

"Were!"

And let's all just ignore them for a little bit while I tell you that I'm typing this as fast as I can while my family spends a little time at our old house, which has a computer, and I probably won't be updating much, since our new house doesn't. For now. Hope you liked it, and send a review for the Sue's new chapter! (Mostly those who haven't, I think she's probably getting an overload of concrit) Thanks to all of you guys!

"Did you just put an author's note inside the actual fic?" asked Momo.

Yes, Momo, I did.