Ha, here is the 11th? chapter.

Oh and one of the new characters called Zantina, yeah, she is mine, mwhaah, and Faro belongs to Helen Dunnmore, Maximum Ride and the others belong to James P! Who rocks! (.)

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BTW! This is starting off in Fang's POV.


Maax, where is Max.

'Um, whats you're name?' I asked, had I already asked.

'Zantina' She said fixing something into her hair. I felt weird being here, can I expand my wings?

I looked around at how much room I had to spread my wings, my wings were now a good sixteen wing span, awsome. I carefully unfurled my wings, I think I looked scary since Zantina opened her eyes really wide.

'Wow' She breathed. 'You look like an angel'

'Why thank you, I'm going to try my wings out underwater' I said and took off.

I glided through the water not far from Zantina, she actuallt followed me a bit, it was easy. WAIT WHERE'S MAX.

'Sorry, Zantina, I have to find my friend, Max' Her face fell a bit.

'Max, oh, the girl you were with' she said, she grabbed my hand and smiled, and she let out a weird calling sound, it sounded like a screech in a song, but sounded. . . . . . . Dont know how to put it.

I nodded and smiled back, we soon surfaced on this island, I choked up water and laid on the sand before saying "hi" to the flock, but Max didnt have any of that, she bombed on me, litterally.

'Fang!' She gasped and jumped on me, I WAS sat up.

'Hello' I said warily.

'I was worried, I didnt know where you were' she said in a rush.

Her hair was still wet from when I had pulled her into the water, and she had a blotch of sand on her face, which I brushed away with my thumb, she blushed and stood by. . . . Another, boy, with a- Ahem - tail.

'This is Faro' She said.

-------Max's POV------

Fang came back, I bombed him.

'This is Faro' I breezily, Faro waved with a lop sided smile.

'You're Fang?' He said shifting in the sand again, next to his friend, Zantina, obviousley, the one who stole Fang. Well, goin' a bit over the top there.

'Yes' Fang had set his jaw, did he get injured?

'Oh, well, I hope to see you soon, Max' Faro said bowing his head.

I blushed. 'Okay, thank you for, y'know' I said.

'Bye' They said then dove off in the water.

I turned round to the flock, it was getting really dark, the moon was, beautiful, wait, what am I saying. I shuddered.

'You cold?' Iggy asked sensing me shake.

'Nah, shouldnt be, it is warm' I patted his back, he nodded and sat down against the palm tree by Gazzy.

'Anybody hungry?' I held up the back-pack.

They all shot up their hands, I had to throw the bag down as they dived in for it, exept Fang who was watching the moon, its best to leave him alone.

We had, marshmallow's on a fire, Fang joined us on that, and we had, just basically junk food, boy arent we healthy, not, and we dont have those cheesy adverts where there are kids singing "Eat your beans!' why.

Finally once we had all finished eating, we packed up, The Gasman and Iggy dug a hole and hid a bomb in the sand for. . . .Pirates.

(A/N: i want to be a pirate. . No JOKE)


Later, At night, Mwahahahah. . . . . .

'Maaax' Nudge whined, boy she hasnt changed.

'Yeah?' I asked turning around.

'Sleeeeep' She said shutting her eyes and curled up on the sand.

'Angel, you okay?' I turned my head to her as she hugged me.

'Fang's angry' She said holding onto me, she was scared?

'What do you mean' I asked. 'What did you read?'

'I cant make it out, angry about something he should of done along time ago, but now its to late, then I read, maybe I still have a chance' She said focusing.

'Hang on be right back' I gave a small smile and sat next to Fang, Angel looked at me warily, he was that angry?

'Hey' I said sitting by Fang as he watched the moon.

He grunted.

'Wanna talk about anything?' I asked sounding casual, he looked at me awkwardly.

'No'

'Whats wrong tell me? Angel caught your thoughts' I said.

He glared at the moon. 'I should have done something ages ago, which, I think I'll do now' He took a BIG DEEP breath.

'You can tell me anything' I put my arm over his shoulders.

'I- I love you' He blurted.

I stared at him in shock, what, wait, should I be happy, I dont know, Love? LOVE? 'Sorry, did you just sa-'

'Yes, I did, have done for a loong time Max, and only my feelings have grown, not shrunk' He said bitterly.

Should I reply yes?


Sorry people. Mwahahah.

So, should she say . . . . .

"Oh I love you to Fang" ?

Or .

"I cant believe you, I just cant feel the same way" then storm off leaving Fang a mess.

Hmmm, I'm going for the second one.

XD

Bye bye!

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