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The wind whipped through Brambleclaw's fur as he rushed past the trees of ThunderClan over to the RiverClan boundary. It was a dark, stormy night and not the best for going to another clan's territory. Brambleclaw sneaked through the undergrowth of the other clan's land.
As Brambleclaw got to the camp he called out, "Stormfur are you there?" Then, Hawkfrost emerged from the reeds of the camp.
"Brother? What brings you here?" he asked.
Brambleclaw gulped and stammered, "I have come to see Stormfur."
"And why, may I ask," Hawkfrost pierced Brambleclaw with his cold, ice-blue eyes.
"Well, it doesn't really matter," Brambleclaw said.
"I guess I could send him to you. I know how close you sun-drown cats are," Hawkfrost exclaimed surprising Brambleclaw with his kind gesture.
"Thank you so much," Brambleclaw thanked his half-brother. "I'll wait right here." Hawkfrost vanished into the reeds again. Brambleclaw watched and waited. He saw the river, churning over and over as it splashed against the river's banks.
"Brambleclaw? Why are you in RiverClan territory?" Stormfur was puzzled as he jolted the tabby from his thoughts.
"Come with me!" Brambleclaw urgently said. He raced through the long grass, as thorns pricked his pads with Stormfur racing behind him. Finally, he stopped in a small, grassy area.
"Squirrelflight has had her kits," Brambleclaw began.
"What! But this is too early! How can this be? And, how did you know I was the father?" Stormfur went on a rampage.
"She has two kits, one light orange and another gray, just like you," Brambleclaw carried on as if Stormfur had never interrupted him.
"Did she name them yet?" Stormfur asked, calming down.
"The gray one was named Rainkit, she is a girl, Squirrelflight wants you to name the other tom," Brambleclaw answered his question.
"We have to get there right away!" Stormfur announced.
"How will we get you in the camp?" Brambleclaw put Stormfur's thoughts into perspective. "Squirrelflight is too weak to get out of the nursery, and you can't just stroll into our camp."
Stormfur sighed and slumped down, "Fine, but tell her to name the orange kit, Sunkit. Good-bye Brambleclaw, tell her I love her." Then, the gray tom got up and disappeared into the thick undergrowth. Brambleclaw got up and ran back to his side of the forest.
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"Name the other kit, Sunkit," Brambleclaw told Squirrelflight when he arrived, huffing, back from camp.
"I want Stormfur to name him! Not you!" Squirrelflight stubbornly said.
"Stormfur did name him," Brambleclaw reassured her.
"How do you know?" Squirrelflight hissed.
"I just came back from seeing him, I told him about you and he wanted to name the remaining kit, Sunkit," Brambleclaw told the fierce, orange she-cat.
"You went to go see him?" Squirrelflight was astounded.
"Yes, I knew how much it meant to you," Brambleclaw replied.
"Well, then thank you," Squirrelflight yawned and lay back on the dirt floor of the nursery. Within minutes she was fast asleep along with her kits. Brambleclaw left the nursery and ran smack into Sorreltail.
"What are you doing?" Brambleclaw asked.
"Moving into the nursery!" Sorreltail bounced happily.
"That's great, I think I know who the father is though," Brambleclaw slyly said as Brackenfur looked on proudly.
"Yeah, I can't wait for my kits!" Sorreltail was so bubbly as she moved into the lichen that covered the entrance way to the nursery.
"At least her kits will be respected and honored , what will happen when Squirrelflight and Stormfur's secret is revealed?" Brambleclaw thought as he looked at the nursery wall.
I hoped you all liked this chapter. I know Stormfur didn't come to ThunderClan in this chapter, but believe me, he will. Next chapter will be in Leafpool's POV. I also know that Hawkfrost was a little too nice, but don't flame or complain about that. Please review!