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Heresy
Time: Day Two 1623 Hours
Planet: Lorn V
His mind was all a blur! He woke up and slowly opened his eyes but quickly closed them as a searing white light burned his eyes.
"Jack?" A man's faint voice called out. "Jack are you awake?" he asked again. This time his voice sounding much closer. Jack moaned as he slowly opened his eyes and tried to get up but fell down again as a white hot pain burned his chest and a dizziness overtook him.
As he slowly got up again the man called to him "Jack I'm glad your awake you've been asleep for almost two hours now!" "What!"Jack asked "What happened to the battle and the Chaos!" "They retreated" the man informed himand "you were found right near a Lemen Russ wreckage". He paused "your almost the only one left Jack"
ThenJack remembered, he had shot the captain with his own gunbut wasn't able to fully realize it because a Defiler walker had blownthem upand he was torn through the chest with a bolter round.
"How? Why?" was the only reply Jack gave until he stutterd "Who?" "If your asking who I am, I'm a medic for the Imperial battalian who found you". "As for who is left you will have to go and see" he reasoned.
"Alright" Jack rumbled as he started to get out of the bed he was in. "AH!" he screamed out in pain as he tried to stand. "Oh no!" the medic whined as he helped Jack up and gave him a needle. "Hey what was that you gave me?" Jack asked "Just some pain killers and medicine to help you get back to the rest of your Karskin squad" "Thanks" was all Jack said as he moved out the door and into the base wondering what had come over him and why he had shot his captain.
AsJack headed towards the main building in the military camp he heard far off artillary blasts and gun shots.He saw lots of men running around from building to building. AsJack opened the door to the base he could see at least five of the six men wounded. "Hey!"a man he remembered to be named Bill said "Im glad your not dead man! "Our whole Squad but us was killed off in that last battle and man" He said holding up his arm "It was a nasty one! One of those cultists got me in the arm!"
AsJack walked towards the middle of the building ina briefing room he came upon one of the other Karskins. "Hey John your alive too!" Jack said as he approched the giant round table where John was standing. "Yup, I got a nasty bash on the head from a Chaos marine" John said as he turned to fully regard Jack and his wounds. "Jack I hate to tell you this but, the captains dead..."
"Yeah I know" said Jack getting a little scared. "I saw the cultist who got him from behind"he said quickly "Until the tank blew up" "Yeah I heard about the tank" "The rest of us here are going to wait and heal" John said watching Jack " But you on the other hand, are going to lead some new rookies coming as reinforcements from Talorn" Jacks face simply went blank for a moment until he saw John watching him. "Sure I'll lead them" Jack replied as he started to move from the room "But I have no leadership training and my chest wound is horrible" John wasexpecting this "Dont worry about that Jack, the way you led those troops out there in battle, you were amazing" "Oh and don't you worry about that injury, it will heal in a couple of hours with that shot the medic gave you"
While John was talking Jack quickly put on a grinning face but on the inside Jack was furious. "These slakers are taking the battle off to lay around while my chest wound is more grievious then all their wounds put together!" Then Jack realized they are using him as a scape goat and making him do all the work. Another voice put in "Lead them well and you may be able to get promoted out of this battle and then make John and the rest fight instead of you.." Then, maybe you can kill him too" Jack quickly shook this thought out of his head and agreed to be the new sargent but only with a good nights sleep
As Jack walked to the barracks and got to his bed he already had evil plans running through his mind. When he layed down sleep finally took him but only to be filled with dreams of killing Bill, John and the rest of the new Karskins. Dreams ofbecoming a war hero for the Imperium and most importantly, to attain luxury
I hope you like it guys its an important chapter for information and a builder for the plot so don't worry he will get introduced to the new Karskins and to a new battle.
No flames!
Your Author: Emporer Arthas The Destroyer