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chapter 15 i believe

"Lily, Brook are you guys done yet?" Elaine said tapping her foot impatiently.

"um……." Lily said not wanting to answer.

"Is that a yes?" Elaine said.

"Yes we are done." Brook said looking over at lily.

"Then come out."

"No." lily and brook replied together.

"Why?"

"Look," Brooklyn began, "I have a perfectly good l piece up stairs I really don't see why we have to wear these."

"You have to wear them because one: it is your birthday and you are going to look gorgeous, two: you are in France on a beach with all these hot guys around you, and three: so that your boyfriend will comment on how hot and sexy you look." Elaine said exasperated, "Now come out now before I will have to come in there and get you two!"

Lily and Brook quickly came out of the hallway they were in and stepped in front of Elaine.

"Now, was that really all that hard?" Elaine asked.

Lily and Brooklyn just looked at each other for a reply.

"Grab your bags; we were supposed to meet the boys at the beach 10 minutes ago." Elaine said tossing a pair of sunglasses to each of them.

The three of them then began walking to the beach.

Elaine was wearing a bright pink bikini that was very revealing and she didn't seem to be embarrassed in the least while the Lily and Brook couldn't stop blushing. Lily was wearing a black bikini top with short swimming shorts, but the top went to the middle of her stomach revealing little of her. Brook was then wearing a blue two piece that had small skirt and a small bikini top to it.

They finally arrived at the beach and began looking for the 5 boys they were supposed to meet. They soon found them and laid their towels down right by them and greeted the boys warmly.

"Hello gorgeous." Sam said kissing Brook on the cheek. After arriving in France Sam and Brook had finally gotten the "later" they had been trying to get all day. Brook just blushed and smiled at him.

"So how does it feel being one year closer to the big sixteen?" Chad said. He was a cousin of Sam and Elaine's who lived nearby.

"Well I do have to say it sucks being the oldest of the girls, but still being the shortest, but being born on the 14 of July helps out a bit, doesn't it have a ring to it?" Brooklyn said lying down on the big blanket they were all sitting on.

"Ah don't worry Lyn you'll grow and yes it is a very sexy birthday." Sam said laying down right next to her.

"Yea well however sad I am about Brooklyn's height in which I really do feel your pain we are in France in the summer on one of the best beaches in the world so I'm going to go get a water and then sit down and tan." Elaine said getting up off the blanket and primping her hair slightly she then continued, "Lily, Bret, Chad, Ryan, and Geoff come with me will you?"

The six of them then walked off together.

"What was that about?" Brook asked turning to Sam.

"Maybe they just wanted to leave us alone, did you ever think about that Lyn?" Sam asked pulling off her sunglasses and tucking a stray piece of hair behind her ear.

Brooklyn felt a tingle run down her spin.

"Well it'd be nice of them but it all sounds just a bit fishy." She said closing her eyes and leaning back getting ready to tan.

"Think all you want Lyn, hey did I ever tell you how hot you look in that does it have enough material to be called a swimming suit?" Sam said drawing a small circle around her exposed belly button.

Brook laughed then managed to sputter out, "No, you didn't but it's about time you did I was wondering how long it would take you."

Sam then grabbed her and began tickling her more with her begging him to stop. When he finally did stop he said while kissing her politely on the lips,

"Just because you're the birthday girl I'll stop."

"Good now leave me alone so I can tan and make you get madly jealous with all the guys staring at me." Brook said slightly smiling waiting for his reaction and pulling away from him.

"No way am I gonna share you, besides I think it's about time you made use of that said swimming suit of yours." Sam said picking her up and carrying her to the water making her squeal and laugh.

Meanwhile in a small restaurant just up the beach the other 6 were sitting. Elaine was saying something or another but Lily really couldn't concentrate that much. But after all no one really could when their boyfriend's hands were tracing circles on their lower thigh.

She was then awakened from her trance with someone calling her name.

"Lily, Lily! Oh for goodness sake you and Bret can snog all you want when you get back to the house but will you please just listen for once!" Elaine said smirking.

Lily blushed slightly and grabbed Bret's hand so they were now just holding hands so she could concentrate.

"I'm sorry." Lily said, "What'd you say?"

"I asked you if we were sure we could get Brook out of the house till 8:30 tonight?" Elaine said now looking perturbed. Many said Elaine was impatient and some times rude when forced to wait. They were absolutely right.

"Um… yea Sam, her and Bret and I are going to go get dinner at 7 and it will of course take quite a while to bring home so we will be back by no later than 8:45." Lily said sipping her lemonade.

"Okay then I know that a huge party isn't exactly what Brooklyn wanted for her birthday but I'm sure Brook will have a terrific time." Elaine said smiling and snuggling close into Ryan's chest in which she was seated on his lap.

"You better hope Elaine." Lily muttered to herself.

Music was blasting all around and bodies were close to one another since there wasn't all that much room in the house. Many were jumping up and down singing to the music while others swayed back and forth and as always there were the couples that were pretty much dancing so close to one another that their mothers would faint just seeing them.

Of course with no parent supervision around except for 2 19 year olds that were occupied with each others mouths and a 17 year old who was busy with his girlfriend no one really cared.

"Thank you so much guys!" Brook tried to yell over the music.

"What?" Lily asked still dancing looking at Brook.

"Thank you…ugh never mind." Brook said then finally giving up made a sweeping movement with her hand from her chin to Lily which was thank you in sign language.

Lily, Elaine, and the rest of the guys just nodded and kept dancing. Soon after Brook and Sam disappeared and didn't appear later in the night, but a small red mark was later noticed and Brooklyn was never able to live it down

At the raging music parties with everyone dancing so close to one another that their backs touched, Guys and gals were known to get with one another in hopes of meeting a special someone. Well that's exactly what James Potter was hoping to do.

He had seen many pretty girls and had started dancing with them but he quickly bored of them and moved onto another. His best friend Sirius had seen a girl earlier who Sirius just had to have and had decided to go for her, but James wanted someone unique. And it looked like he had found that someone.

She was very pretty. Gorgeous in fact and boy did he want to be close to her. She was laughing throwing her head back her gorgeous hair flying about and dancing all around with many boys around her.

He had never seen her before and her lips and body were so appetizing it was making him nauseous not being able to be near her.

He quickly wound through the bodies that were dancing and came up to the girl smiling the smile that made all the girls swoon. That is except Lily Evans.

Lily looked up and saw James Potter dancing near her and smiling at her. Her heart leaped, not in attraction or anything of the sort, but in anxiety and in the sweet taste of revenge.

She saw him coming closer to her and soon he was right next to her bumping into her every once in a while.

"Get his attention, get him to want you with every fiber of his being, and then leave him alone and confused, with him still lusting after the you that is gone." She remembered Elaine saying.

If that's what it would take to get Potter back for the 4 years of hell he drug her through she would do it.

She smiled seductively over at him and moved her hips more to the music making his eyes look her over. She saw his eyes become hungry and she beckoned him closer.

She could tell she was dying to touch her and feel her but she would leave before he had a chance. She licked her lips and she could tell he was dying and then as a person squeezed in between the two she was gone.

And as she left and saw his eyes wander and glance about wondering where she was. She then felt for the first time….what was it? Relief, happiness, joy? No not nearly as satisfying as the revenge she knew would get in only a matter of time.

hello! i updated even before i said i would! i know it isn't that good but next chapter they'll be back at school soooooo...well i just wanted to thank every one and tell you all that When a Stranger Calls is soooooooooo good! you have to see it anyway i would love a review i get to write the next few chapters and i would appreciate getting some motivation.

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