Well… this chapie just popped into my little brain today during class and I just got around ta typing it… well I'd like to know which character you like the most: Flame, Serena, or Storm? Just submit a review with your answer, by the way, I'd definitely appreciate it if you guys would give some suggestions for improvement…TOODLES! Oh, stuff in … these is Storm's thoughts and stuff in …these is Serena's thoughts.
Crazy-Little-Neko
Chapter 3 (starlight kiss)
After lunch we tried to decide how we were going to get into town. Serena suggested that we pose as strays ,to avoid getting our muzzles blown off, (blunt, but accurate) but that was quickly vetoed by Storm…I said "'smatter Storm, afraid of getting a little dirty?" -in a smart alecky voice- "no! I just don't want to be seen in such a state…" Storm retorted. "you're too vain you shouldn't be more worried about your appearance than your life!" I scolded. Well after about…5 more hours of arguing we noticed it was getting dark out. "we better get to bed… we aren't gonna get anything accomplished at this rate." Serena stated. I decided to go for a walk since it was so nice out. full moon and a nice breeze to enjoy!
I walked along a semi steep cliff and stopped a few feet from the edge and looked off, I was deep in thought when a felt a tap on my shoulder… it was Storm. "hey, nice night isn't it?" he said, "yeah it is" I replied. "what brings you out here? I thought you'd be in bed by now…" I said somewhat hesitantly. "well…I saw you walk off and decided to follow you and see what you were doing. Plus it's a nice night, and I'm not all that tired…" he replied. what's this fluttering? OMG, I'm blushing! Good thing it's dark out how do I tell her…curse my bad social skills! (you and me both buddy) "s-so…do you like to watch the stars too?" I said, trying to make small talk. "um… yeah, I do like to stargaze on nights like this…" he replied.
-I moved closer to the edge and slid on a small rock, Storm caught me before I fell- then our eyes met…I…I didn't have time to think…he swept me up into an embrace, and we kissed…with the full moon and stars as our only witness. That kiss stopped the world from spinning, it was so unexpected…all the things we had yearned to tell eachother went into that kiss, I never thought I'd be this…happy for lack of a better word
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That night we slept under the stars on that cliff, still thinking of that magical moment…I'll remember this every time I see a full moon. I hope the days to follow go as well as today…I truly fear for us…(what a joy-kill!)
Well watcha think? I worked hard on that one, especially the love scene, so give pleasant reviews……any who, I hope that you guys don't mind the short chapies, I don't always have enough time to write. TOODLZ! -----(The story had to under go editing because of the whole "no original stories" thing)
Crazy-Little-Neko