Hey. Here's chapter two. I know some peoples out there have read this and this is for you. I would give names if I had some… :'( sadly no-ones reviewed.
So if you read this please please please review. Anyway here goes with Pirates.
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"…" speaking
Thoughts
(a/n) just my authors notes :P
Pirates
By
Risen From the Ashes
Chapter 2: Kai's Punishment part II
Captain's Cabin
"Brooklyn! Why's Kai walking the plank, it's a bit drastic." Shout Tala.
"I don't see why, he killed my parrot I'm killing him, simple really."
"Brooklyn you've lost it. Your love for nature is too strong compared to the love of your friends. You can't see that what you're doing is wrong."
"I wouldn't be listening to you if you were a normal person you know that right?"
"Yeah."
"So, what do you think I should do?"
"It should be something painful for him, he's always thought highly of himself and his high status, so why don't you make him scrub the decks? And live with the lower crew members?"
"That sounds like an idea, you sure this would defiantly make him feel like scrum?"
"Defiantly, like I said he likes his high status too much."
"Ok, Thanks Tala, you've been a great help, I can always count on you."
"It's Ok I'm just glad you realized that killing a friend isn't going to bring another one back."
"And I thank you for that, however I have to say I am still deeply annoyed at Kai and it will stay that way until he has been forgiven."
"Do you wish for me to tell Kai of the change in punishment?"
"Please do Tala; I'm not sure I could put up with looking at that Russian for quite a while."
Back with Kai
"He WHAT!"
"He wants you to scrub the decks and stay with the lower crew members; please calm down it's not the end of the world. Oh yeah you might want to stay on his good side and then you'll be able to join us again."
"The fuck I am, he's the one that wants me down there and there's no way in hell I'm going without a struggle."
"Fine, do it your way, you'll just end up down there longer than if you just got on with it."
"You think I care? He shouldn't send me down there in the first place."
"You're impossible you know that?" Tala stated with a sign.
"Yeah I get it a lot." Leaning against the side of the sniper deck he crossed his arms and closed his eyes.
Down on the main deck
"Where the hell is that blue headed arrogant basted?" Brooklyn asked one of his crew members with gingery brown hair and blue eyes (a/n I don't know if they are blue or not let me know what they are if I've gotten it wrong k?)
"Sorry Captain but he refuses to come down from the Sniper Deck."
"It's ok Michael, I think I'll be needing your help, gather two or three other crew members and meet me up there."
"Yes Captain." With that the American male walked away to do the task he had just been given.
Sniper Deck
"Kai, just go down!"
"No!"
"Argh!"
"Kai, You have ignored my orders, now I will have to use force." Kai's crimson eyes opened and stared coldly at his orange haired captain.
"Have fun trying, how the fuck can you on your own get me down there?"
"Who ever said I would be alone?" a smirk graced Brooklyn's lips.
"Even if you get me down there doesn't mean I'll work."
"That's what you think, you are lacking discipline and I intend to get you back in line."
"O.o I'm so scared." Stated Kai, his voice dripping with sarcasm.
A laugh escaped Brooklyn's lips. "You will be in time."
"I'd like to see you try."
"Lucky for you, you will see me try and succeed." His eyes had an evil glint to them. Kai was beginning to wonder how Brooklyn would manage to get him in line.
He doesn't scare me, but how could he? How far would he go to succeed?
"Now you have one last opportunity to just get on with your punishment or you can continue putting up this fight and make me get you back in line. So what shall it be?"
"I Think I'll just see you struggle thanks."
"If you want it that way then fine have it your way."
"You know your feeble attempts to intimidate me really aren't working."
A hash laugh was heard. This was exactly how he wanted Kai to react. Simple because it would be more fun to watch, also Brooklyn knew Kai wouldn't give up without a fight and that fight would make it so much more worthwhile.
A group of the lower crew members appeared behind Brooklyn. Michael was standing at the front "You asked for our help Captain?"
"Yes indeed I did. You see Michael I have called on you and your crew mates to help get Kai here back in order."
"Yes Captain, how can we help?"
"Hmm, lets see, He's highly unlikely to use his own legs to transport himself so I guess we'll just have to carry him."
"Yes Captain." Michael turned to signal his crew mates to go ahead with the command. They all have evil smiles plastered (a/n not sure if that's how you spell it sorry if it isn't.) to their faces for it's not everyday your given orders to transport Kai from one place to another by carrying him is it?
Slowly they approached him. As they advanced on him he backed up, only to be met by Spencer's solid chest.
Without knowing it Kai gulped. Spencer grabbed his arms to allow the others to get hold of him without too much trouble.
Within moments the crew had succeeded and Kai was scowling them all, even his close mate Tala was now on the floor laughing his ass of at him!
(a/n Tala rolling around on the floor laughing? What's this world coming to? Lol)
Suddenly Kai was thrown to the floor. "Now Kai, to save yourself humiliation get your sorry, Russian ass to work."
"No."
"What was that? The great Hiwatari wants more? Well then you'll get it. Crew you know what to do." With that Brooklyn walked back to his cabin with a satisfied grin placed on his features.
That's it,
For all of you who have read it and yes that does include every 33 of you! Could you please please please review! I do like this story even though I think it's a pile of shit my mate orla (on known as Fallen Phoenix of Darkness) has kept me on writing.
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