All right, i haven't written in a couple months, yes i know, Ive just been busy failing school and doing things i probably shouldn't. Oh well.
Anyways, i recently got a comment from a "amabitchdealwithit". And trust me, this person is a bitch. I will share with you the contents of this comment.

"personally, ppol don't take other stories for granted that they are too cliche and just plain shit, and yes you are one of those people who just don't get that fucked up mantra of having the same story plot.

whoever came up with the plot of kags being a demon, inuyasha betrays kags for bitch-ho bag kikyo- like all of you hates, then sess comes in the picture and fell oh-so-in-love with the once-miko-turned-inuyoukai-miko...what the fuck!?...really you people are tainting the characteristics of the character and a great disgrace to people who actually writes better stories, better yet, just not write a story at all, it saves the others dignity to write, that have the same plot but better story...do you get what i mean?

out of all the same plot people made stories with, some people do it better and others don't. in my opinion this really need to stop, do you people have no originality? it's really gay...i know that this is all a will to express yourself to people of what you think you should write, but really if people do the same thing over and over again, it's just like you have no individuality at all. i'm not just pointing this to you, but looked around and read, i know there are far more sucky stories than you have. But just a thought, if you ever make another story, make sure it's not bad, over-written or just plain shit.

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i know after you read this you hated me, but think over what i said...that is if you have the capability to think...let alone write a good story... "

Now, i couldn't write this person back because they were to afraid to post it on their real name. So Here's what i have to say. It doesn't take a lot of creativity to write a plain story about an anime. In order to write a character OOC or something alone those lines, you have to be creative, recreate an already made character into something that still works with their character, but expresses what you want to say.

Now, my question to this critic. If I'm tainting Inuyasha...then how come i have so many views on this story (4,980), comments (87), C2s (2), Favs (21), and alerts (48)? Your telling me that over 4,000 people are tainting anime. OH NO!!!!!!!!111!1!3455w2w!!!

And as for my capability to think.. if i can write a story and get people to actually read it. i think I'm doing pretty good. I have bashers and burners. but all that means is that my "horrible" writing caused them to loose about 40 minutes of their lives... and that just makes me smile.

And as for it being really gay... i personally don't take this as an insult.. i have been an open lesbian for about two years now, and am happy and content with my girlfriend of 6 months. People like you have no minds. You stick to what is told to you. You don't believe in change. Your probably a republican. (no offence to republicans.. my parents are republicans.)
As for the "plot of kag's being a demon, inuyasha betrays kags for bitch-ho bag kikyo- like all of you hates, then Sess comes in the picture and fell oh-so-in-love with the once-miko-turned-inuyoukai-miko." It just seems people have the same idea. I've probably read many more Fan fic's than you and have more creativity than you can muster up in your butt hole. But then again I'm not trying to be vulgar. hehe. I'm just commenting back my thoughts.
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as for the people that want to read my story. i am in the process of writing another chapter. and it should be done within a couple weeks.
Loves and kisses
A wannabe writer