The End
I just got a recent review for this story, this reviewer, though saying it was not a flame deliberately tried too make me feel miserable about myself and even had so much free time as too count my spelling mistakes, he says my stories give a bad reputation, too the site and hurt readers eyes. So very well if this is true then I will stop writing and I apologies for hurting your eyes.
If any of you are curious here is his review
This story was recommended by one of your reviewers. I can see why.
Trash like this hurts. It hurts a reader's eyes. It hurts a reader's brain. It hurts the community. It destroys the site's image.
I dare to ask a question: how many minutes have you "slaved" over the "hot" computer screen clanking this monstrosity out? Make the numbers look big, please. I could use a laughable lie on this matter.
Now then, that is all you deserve. However, since I have to show sense in my words as well as prove righteousness, an analysis follows.
My friend, I have analyzed 430 words in your story. There were approximately 290 mistakes in those words (no exclusions, starting from the beginning). If you have continued with that tendency (have not wasted time to analyze the remaining four hundred) you have over five hundred errors in your story. (Pardon my capitals) FIVE HUNDRED ERRORS.
I am sorry, but I believe this gives me the right to state that you have little or no writing talent. My pen name had been on this site for over two years and I have never seen a story this bad. I am going to save this on the hard drive for future reference.
You want the errors pointed out for proof? Will do. The mistakes are examined in parentheses.
"Hi (comma) made this a while ago (comma) but decided to post it up here. Anyway (comma) please (comma) be nice (comma) where (bad word choice) reviewing (comma) thanks" Seven mistakes in an author's note. Bravo!
"Shadow lay (lied) on the (article "the") sofa watching the news(space, paragraph)"Today should(word choice) be a sunny day without a cloud in the sky(quotation mark, paragraph, punctuation mark, space)shadow(capital) looked out the window and watched it(what or who?) pour with rain(comma) as he saw(tense) this(comma) he shot the T.V.(comma) causing(bad word choice) the power to go off(period, space, paragraph)"dumbass(capital) weather man(space, paragraph, punctuation mark)"shadow(capital) groweled(typo) (paragraph)suddenly(comma) the(typo) was a knock on the door(comma) and as(bad word choice) shadow(capital) opened it(comma) a blue hedgehog with a 2 tailed(dash) fox holding his hand(verb missing, period, paragraph, space)"Sonic(comma) what do you wnat(typo, period) I'm in the middle of something vey(typo"
Let us add the regular stuff: lack of detail, characters are out of character greatly; plot holes, lack of motivation, randomness, stupidity.
This is not a flame. This is constructive criticism and a reminder: if you are cruel to your readers' eyes, your readers will not be nice to you.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.
P.S. Reported.