I reviewer pointed out several flaws in my story, so I would like to address them before I go on.

1) I realize Nazgûl don't really talk. Well, they have some sort of language, but it's not English. But there is a reason why Abby can understand them, and it kind of has to do with powers (it will be revealed later in the story). I also ignored the whole attack of the black breath attack that they do, and I will consider revising that scene.

2) Also mentioned: Westron and English aren't the same thing. I suppose that's true, but in the books, movies and in other FanFics, they are making them basically the same thing for writing purposes. I'll do the same, but J.R.R Tolkien still gets lots and lots of credit for the creative and amazing languages

3) I had NO idea Nibenial meant "petty woman". I had a translation that said "loyal follower". Obviously it's a bad translation. I'll fix that soon.

4) I am also some readers are little sick of this girl falling from the sky and joining the Fellowship bit. But this is only my first story, and I've had it in my head for a long time. I was really excited to share it. If you don't want to read this story anymore because of it, I understand. I have basically automatically become a Mary-Sue. But I would still like to finish the story with the plan I had in mind.

Okay on to the real story

Disclaimer: Yada yada yada, I don't own Lord of the Rings!

This will be a shorter chapter, since I took up a lot of space trying to explain my problems. And I need more time to think about how to explain Abby's life in Lorien, because I did get a request to not skip it ALL. This also gives me time to edit the previous chapters.

Chapter 4 Recap

"If all mystery's were solved in one day, your life would be dull, Captain."

He laughed. "Indeed my Lady. For once, I will wait for time to happen." He gave polite bow. "Good-day, fair lady."

"Good-day, generous captain."

Haldir left to go find his new ward.

'Hopefully I can find her faster.'

Chapter 5

Haldir entered Abigail's room to find clothes a strew all over the bed.

"Can I only where dresses?" she asked.

"Most the time, it is the most fitting attire for a lady."

"I told you I wasn't a lady." She said.

He smiled. "Relax, there is also riding outfits and such, all depending on what activity you are doing."

She sighed. "But they all still look the dresses."

"Is there something wrong with dresses?"

"No, they're usually pretty and comfortable, but they are harder to move in."

"I suppose, but I've never had to wear one."

Abigail giggled.

"I would hope not."

After choosing a few outfits, and having Haldir assure her they could always find more, the pair began walking towards Haldir's "tree house".

Abigail noticed they were moving to a more private, less populated area.

"Are you alone out her?"

He nodded. "I have not married, yet. And I don't spend enough time at home to socialize."

"Where do you go?"

Haldir stopped her for a second.

"This is the part I did not warn you about. I am the captain of the guard, so I am often away on watches or missions."

"Oh," she said. "I understand."

"Don't worry," he assured. "I promised you would be taken care of, I can always send I nurse if I am going to be away that long."

"A nurse?" Abigail complained. "How old do you think I am?"

The thing was, of course, she really had no idea. His estimate was all she had.

"Perhaps between 12-14 years."

"See! Plenty old to take care of myself!"

Suddenly she stopped and sat on the road.

"What is it?"

"My wounds, I guess the medicine is wearing off."

"You can lean on me," he offered. She did so, and they continued.

"Okay, so maybe I need some help."

"Exactly," Haldir confirmed. "You are extremely young to the elves. I myself am a few hundred years old.

(A/N- I'm sorry! I don't really know how old he his! I'll work on my facts!)

"How?" Abigail asked.

"We are immortal."

This seemed almost unnatural to her. "I have much to learn."

"But many can teach you."

"What else can you tell me about the elves?"

He thought. "Other things we are famous for are our archery and horsemanship. We also value our music very much. All our history can be told through song."

"Can you teach me that?"

"What?' Haldir asked.

"Archery, horseback riding, even fighting. Wouldn't it be good to know how to protect myself?"

"We are here." He distracted her. They had arrived a glorious house. It was carved out of white wood, like all the other, and she finally realized that they had come to and higher part of the tree.

"It's huge!' she gasped. "And I'm going to fall off. I can not believe you didn't while carrying me!"

"Another things elves are known for grace and balance." Haldir replied.

"You never answer my question."

He set her down on a bed, in a guest room.

"True, I am very skilled in those subjects, but they are not things a girl should do. You should be sewing, baking and singing."

"Please sir Haldir," she pleaded. "Let us take advantage of all this privacy. I will work hard, and I'll still sing and bake. Please?"

He gave in too the poor child's wishes.

"Very well, I can teach you how to ride and fight. But it will not be easy. If we start this, you must not give up. And I do expect you to know the proper ways of a lady as well. As my ward, it is a bit crucial to give a good impression and reflection."

The girl nodded enthusiastically.

"I will follow and listen to everything you say."

"Good." Haldir said. "For starters, how about you go to sleep, and listen when I tell you to stay here.

"Yes sir."

"I don't have a watch today, perhaps I shall start with something simple, like geography."

Abigail half nodded, half yawned. Haldir walked quietly out of her room, and shut the door. The house already felt different, having another presence in it. This was no doubt the beginning of a strange and wonderful relationship.

So, I'm editing and fixing right now, and I have a school project coming up. It could be a while before I write again, but just remember I'm only trying to make in the best for you! (cheesy smile)

Thanks to lovely reviewers:

IwishChan, Hope of Freedom, Reborn19, Navaer Lalaith, ArwenEvenstar83, and ChirikoFan.

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Until we meet again!

-MysticNight9