Ok, I've got good news and bad news. Good news first.
It's been, uh, 3 years, (nervous laugh), but I can't help but notice that people are still favoriting this story. And it's not that I wanted to keep it unfinished, it barely went anywhere! But I didn't like where it was going. And this baby had a semi detailed plot summary and direction. But the good news is that I've finally been able to play the game (trying to get to hero mode, damn 200 orbs, almost freaking there!) and get inspiration, and I've started to write stuff. Granted, it's a little later in the story, but it's like 80 percent through if you go by the game info, and that's good right? Means I at least want to get that far.
And, I'll admit it. I like it when people say they like my work, whether it's a drawing or a story. Who doesn't? I'm not conceited enough to think I'm the best, I know I'm not anywhere close. Not patient enough to think things completely out. But I like people to hear my thoughts, and I want people to read this AU and go "wow, that's pretty cool". And you can't do that if you don't have the whole story. So I want to finish this
The bad news is that because I've rethought how this is going, I have to re-write what's already written. Mainly because, one, I don't have a beta, and I keep finding all these stupid mistakes I'm urged to fix. I'll have you know that I can't finish a sentence without re-reading, and no matter how many times I re-read these things, there's always a mistake after I post. So if you're up for the job... (Hint hint, big obvious wink)
And two, yeah, something's are getting a big change. Like Ashlin (yes that how you spell her name) at the pumping station. I've given that thought, and that was just stupid. An important figure in the KG, and I give her a task that was very obviously meant to help the Underground. Crimes of treason usually result in death. I think I just put her there to get word to the Underground about Jak.
But yeah, I'm fixing that.
So every chapter I've already written is going to be replaced, all in the same day, not to get anyone confused. But it'll stay pretty similar, so don't fret.
As a last note, I would give you a preview of what I'm writing now, but I hate spoilers, they make everything anticlimactic (one reason why books turned movies are never as good) and again, it's pretty late in the game.
-Kastel