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Chapter 4 - Plan C
"Ok" said Neal calling everyone to order,
"Any idea's" he asked looking helpless.
"Question her" called out Raoul.
"Use the Dreamer's amulet again" called out Thayet.
"Just plain out ask her, maybe she'll tell you" said Dom quietly.
Neal looked at Dom, he had a point.
"Ok guys, I have an idea... Tonight at the ball watch her closely, make sure you track her every move.
I'm going to get as many guys possible to dance with her, everyone watch her reactions carefully when they ask her, got it?" Everyone nodded in unusion. Neal sighed, hopefully this plan would get them somewhere.
Later that evening.
Neal danced slowly with Yuki, glancing over her shoulder every few seconds to see what Kel was doing.
So far Cleon, Merric, Owen, Raoul and her father had asked her to dance. All of them got the same response,
a polite "Sure, only for a song though." Now Kel was sitting talking to Alanna. He sighed, nothing seemed to go right.
He looked away when soon looked back her saw Dom asking Kel to dance. Kel smiled and accepted as she had done with all the other men. He watched them dance, it was a slow song and their bodies were slowly inching together.
Neal shuddered. Kel and Dom together, he thought, never! He kept watching,
Kel put her head on Dom's shoulder. The mystery was slowly unraveling, Neal shuddered again and Yuki asked him what was wrong, he told her to look at Kel and Dom, slowly they turned around. Neal could see Yuki smirking.
"What" he asked, he was now facing away from them.
"They just kissed" she said calmly. She starting cracking up laughing when she saw Neal's expression.
"Joking" she said whole-heartedly. He sighed, "Don't do that Yuki, you'll give me a heart-attack one day." Yuki giggled "It's funny seeing you like that though" she said through her tears of laughter.
Everyone was now looking at them. While no-one was watching Kel and Dom had taken their chance and snuck outside.
When the confusion had died down, Neal looked around and couldn't see Kel or Dom.
He panicked. "Where are they" he hissed to Yuki. "Outside" said Yuki grinning, "Look" she said pointing at the two figures who were locked in a passionate kiss. Yuki smirked, "go tell them to get a room" she whispered.
She looked at Neal when he didn't answer. He was pale as stone, shuddering he turned to her and whispered,
"My best friend and my cousin..." he paused "I'd better be the best man."
Note: Soo... What do ya think? Like, love or hate? Reviews please. Should I keep writing? Or should I leave it there? You know... I might keep writing...