RTC: Hi! I've got so many questions to ask! But first I'll answer yours:
Karina: Thanks, I'll try to update more frequently.
BlackChaosMelvin: Well, I won't kill Kai. You're putting it on your faves list? I'm touched.
Iluvbeyblade: Everyone loves torturing Kai! I'm glad you understand about that pre written chapters have run out so things may get slower.
Phoenix from the flames 1978: That was an evil cliffie, wasn't it? I love writing those things! I like the cute stuff in CH, so keep it up!
bladebreakers: Yeah, Daichi gets airsick. I know Kai would have argued with anyone else, but he does have a bit of a soft spot for his sister, but don't worry, I'll make sure he's really cold to everyone in the next chapter. I guess the dinner thing was a bit confusing, here's the explanation: they arrive in Moscow, go skating, buy food and go to bed and then the next day is when Kari's tense, hits Max and Kai gets kidnapped. Sorry, I shouldn't have used dinner as a reference point twice. I'm not very good at describing scenes, but I'll work on it!
jellybean-kitty: Thanks! I've been a bit too tired and I thought I might have irrated or scared you.
Flash Phoenix: Where to begin? The plot was going a bit slowly in the first few chapters and I'm trying to pick up the pace. There will be an explanation about Kari's whereabouts soon, maybe in the next chapter. Kai's parents are dead in this fic, they died in a car crash. Since this was in a review for chapter 4, I'm assuming that's the chapter you're talking about; no it wasn't Kari's POV, it was Ray's. You don't get Kari's POV 'till chapter 8. Lizzie and Lynn won't be too important in the plot, so don't worry. I took advantage of the fact that Ray hasn't had any family mentioned, so I made them up. I know Lizzie's a weird name to give Ray's sis, but his whole name is Raymond, and anyway, I thought up the plot 3 years ago, when I was younger and I didn't have the heart to change the name. (Obvious I changed some things to make it fit after G-Rev.) I'll try not to change POVs as much, but I'm not going to write in just 3rd person all the time. Chapter 6 is about Ray, how am I focusing too much on the OCs? Kari is probably the only OC who plays a significant role, but this fic is Kai centric. Thanks for taking the time to review all those chapters. Did you read until the end? Did you like the chapters?
RTC: Did you guys like the last chapter? Do you find the POV switching to be confusing/ irritating? What should I name my other fic? (it's about Kai's dad's past and the beginnings of the abbey) Do you dislike OCs? I'm putting the POV changing in bold so there won't be so much confusion, if there's no indication at the beginning of the chapter, then its third person POV or I've screwed up. Italics are for flashbacks, okay?
Tyson: Shut up! You're boring them! Get on with the fic already!
RTC: Fine; disclaimer please!
Tyson: Ray-Tiger-Cat does not own Beyblade!
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Kai's Back!
Kari's POV- 2 days after Kai was kidnapped
My fault. This whole thing was my fault. I should have gone back to Toronto as soon as
Kai had recovered. If only he hadn't insisted I stay in Japan.
Flashback (Kai's still in the hospital.)
"Kai, I need to go back," I told him.
"Why? You could stay here," Kai replied.
"I don't know your friends. I'll be a drag during training. I don't belong," I said.
"Kari, they'll accept you. Besides, I want you to stay. Do you like Toronto better?" Kai couldn't stay on one topic.
"There's nothing for me at home, but still...," I persisted. He looked so tired and lonely.
"Then you're staying here and that's final," he convinced me. I stayed.
End flashback
I listened, I stayed. I got him hurt. I came to save his life, but I put him in danger. Tears welled in my eyes and I found myself crying hard; not for the first time today.
"Kari? It'll be okay. Kai's tough. He'll fight back." It was Hilary.
"If he gets out, what'll happen to him? He's hurt badly and there's a blizzard raging out there. He could kill himself," I sobbed, "And it was my entire fault. If I'd been paying attention, none of this would have happened." Hilary gave me a hug.
"It'll be okay."
Late that night- general POV
Bang bang bang. There's a thumping at the door. Bang bang. Crash!
The G-Revs were all gathered upstairs and they all came running down the stairs. The front door was ajar, there was snow piling up in the hall and it was freezing.
"G-Revs, I want you to come out here. I've got an opponent waiting for you," Boris' voice came through a speaker.
"Should we go?" asked Max.
"They've probably got Kai! Of course we're going!" Kari shouted, grabbing her coat and running out the door.
It was Kai, but he didn't look himself. Kai was covered in metal armour and he was wearing a helmet with clear plastic over his eyes. (Like a motorbike helmet) Kai had an automatic launcher on his arm and he launched some beyblades.
"Boris, didn't you learn the last time? We can beat you!" yelled Tyson. The three cloaked bladers appeared beside Kai.
"Kai, what are you doing?" Kari asked, "Don't do this!"
"You fool, he can't hear you! Can't you tell when your own brother is being controlled?" a cloaked blader shouted. Then he launched a blade right at Kari.
Wham! Tyson had launched his blade and managed to protect Kari. Soon blades were flying everywhere. Kai's mechanical armour prevented him from helping his friends. He was being forced to fight them. Boris had a specific mission in mind for Kai: fight and kill his sister.
Kari was drawn away from the G-Revs by Kai. It was exactly as Boris planed; Kari was alone, without protection.
"Kai! I know you're in there! Fight him!" she yelled.
"What part of he can't hear you don't you understand?" yelled Boris and Kai launched a black beyblade.
"Black Dranzer!" Kai called and the bitbeast appeared.
Kari's POV (again)
I can't fight him; it's too hard. But someone's got to save him. Kai wouldn't want me to let this get to me.
"Let it rip! Go Dranzelia!" I cried. Three more blades appeared and attacked her. I looked around frantically for help.
"Look all you want; they can't help you," Boris said. He was right; the others were trapped by the cloaked bladers. I put my hand in my pocket and that's when I felt it. Dranzer. It was left on the basement floor and I'd kept it. I launched it.
"Go Dranzer!" Boris doesn't know that I can control Dranzer, so he didn't think about this when he was planning.
"Double blazing inferno!" I commanded and both blades melted the three ordinary blades and smashed in to Black Dranzer.
"You think that'll stop the most powerful blade on earth!" shrieked Boris in fury.
"Yeah, I do," I replied calmly before hitting Black Dranzer from either side, causing it to break in half.
"So you beat it. Kai's still in my control," Boris said.
"Really, now? I guess I'm going to have to fix that," I told him. This would be risky but Kai would rather die than be controlled. "Go Dranzelia!" She hit Kai's chest and sparks flew. Kai got electrocuted. I hoped he'd be okay but he collapsed.
"Don't- or I'll- No- control," came Boris' voice through the broken speaker. I quickly withdrew the blades and approached Kai. He felt so cold.
"Kai!" I'm screaming and shaking him. Could I have been wrong? Could he have not survived the blast?
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RTC: Sorry that was so short! I was writing in class. (Don't tell!) I probably shouldn't have posted this; I've got so much homework and way too many tests this week, but I cut my study time in half. So please review. I update mostly for you guys. Remember, three reviews before I update!
Kai: She's complaining its short and yet she still found time to try and kill me. Again. If you don't review, she might kill me and we wouldn't want that, would we?