THESE WERE MY ANSWERS TO THE PAST REVIEWS I RECEIVED SINCE LAST YEAR:
Okay before anything else, I personally wanted to thank the following people for their reviews… (-bows in appreciation-)
French. Couture
who am I?
izuki
emrevolemina
facadephazzad naks I liked your kind of thinking! I tried your idea thanks but unfortunately Tsubasa can't come in this part of my story not yet… I didn't like the brain wash thing… argh its too common… so just read what I figured out to add a little spice is kinda like me so I followed you so there.
sakura0038 my dear thanks and funny though I never thought someday someone will wait for my stories… thanks –collapse in the floor due to so much burst of feelings-
nikkiru dear I was kinda hoping for your review as well –wipes tears- well see you then…
and by the way last but not the least…
black cat girl 2006
And in answer to 'emrevolemina's' question whether if my character Ryu can copy the appearance of the one he kissed doesn't that mean he KISSED Natsume? To get his appearance, you got it all mixed up, my dear, because I said the memories of the one he kissed. Since Mikan had an awful lot of Natsume's memories, it's not at all impossible…
Now, have you gotten a clear view on the perspective? Just let me know when something bothers you again which is related to my story…
Okay guys thanks for all the votes now I finally made up my mind! Just read on and you'll all see my evil story…
-Oppps, it slipped-
It's not an evil story…
-hope so...- haha
Loving has never been that easy… Especially when that person has never felt to be loved.
------Revenge is a dish best served cold...-------
-Loving is not what we see but what we feel, not how we listen but how we understand, not how we forget but how we forgive. Loving is holding on when the pain dares you to let go.-
Disclaimer: Ok to cut it short this time, GA is not mine.
Author's Notes: Yippee! This is the time to show off who is the right guy for Mikan… The fight between the machos (hehe) I do hope he ends up to be a part of another invention… good for Hotaru!
Warning: I'm warning the readers! Please brace yourselves for the next scenes your gonna read.Don't tell me I didn't warn you!
I made it nicer this time… so the new readers may like it even more… This is my third time to edit this story so I think it could satisfy enough people… I removed unnecessary lines, phrases, scenes which is not appropriate…
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How Do You Heal a Broken Heart?
By: unnamed cat
Chapter 4: Either Animal Food, Toasted Body, or Part of another Invention
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"Ruka… Hotaru… stay here I'm going in!"
"Don't be so reckless Natsume. You're such a jerk! What do you think would Mikan say when she sees you like this?" Hotaru combed her now long hair and flipped it aside she took another bite of chocolate.
'Argh. How can she eat chocolate at a time like this?' Ruka thought violently.
"I have to keep my blood sugar up you know, like I told you before." Hotaru said kinda figuring out what Ruka was thinking.
"Why can't I have my thoughts for myself when I'm with you?!" he accusingly asked.
"Cause I don't want to! What if you plan nasty things on me or on my you know what! I can't allow you to devour me like an animal, can I?" Hotaru let out a soft giggle.
"Tell me Hotaru, where the heck did you get that so thick face of yours, ne?" Ruka asked a little pissed off.
"Oh don't try looking for one cause this is genetics work, hereditary. If you know what I mean." Hotaru teased him more.
"You know what sometimes I get the conclusions that you're not all human." Ruka was really in his boiling point.
Natsume who was franticly having a hard time to think on how he can save his precious Mikan had to stop these lovebirds from having their actually endless battle of the races.
"How about if the two of you won't shut your asses from chattering I'm gonna toast them for you!" he half shouted.
"Alright, alright already we got you're point." They said in unison.
They had to stop, if they want to save Mikan. Hotaru stop nibbling on her chocolate (a/n: darn I wanna nibble on too! Even just a single bar!) And concentrated on what she hears.
"Shoot. I can hear tearing up of garments!" Hotaru spitted out some chocolate.
"Dammit!"
"Wait, don't act on it yet Natsume. I've known Ryu he might chicken out so let's just wait for a while." Hotaru stopped Natsume. She somewhat felt the eagerness in him.
"Ok will wait for only 2 minutes. 2 minutes and his busted, got it?" Natsume rubbed his palms.
"Thanks." Hotaru whispered.
"For what." Natsume pretended he didn't know.
"For trusting another person except her…" she trailed off on purpose. She was beginning to like Natsume despite the fact that she once despised him.
"Huh? Y-yeah, yeah." He stuttered. She was right. It was the second time he trusted another person. And he felt an eerie feeling of a simple joy in his heart for that.
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Mikan was in Ryu's bed. She was covered with a robe. Her clothes were torn and she was half-naked herself. She felt a cold breeze beside her. She was finally able to wake up from the effect of the pills. She tried hard to move but found out she couldn't. She looked around in search of the culprit who did this to her for no particular reason she could think.
'Ryu' she said. But no voice came out.
'What's this? I can't move and talk? Damn what's happening?' she was having a brain fight in her.
How come she allowed this to happen to her? Why did she become off guard? The questions raced on her mind oh so suddenly. And she can't think of any rational answer for it.
She calculated the odds of her getting out of the room untouched. It's 0. A darn 0!
'That's what I get for not listening when the teacher teaches us math.' She scolded herself.
'Wait he's coming…'
Mikan looked at Ryu eye to eye. Ryu kissed her cheeks and then he used his Alice. He changed into himself, the real Ryu.
"What the? So the only time you really thought about me is now." He smirked. "Its funny, every time I'm kissing you I never change back to my true self because it was always that Natsume you were thinking about." He smirked again.
He reached out form Mikan's hair, which covered her eyes. He flipped it. She stared deep into her eyes.
"You know what I've been thinking Mikan? Who was the first man you've ever kissed. They told me I was you first boy friend, but I don't believe I was your first kiss because we've never even touch lips." He lowered his hands to her bra.
He sat down his bed and caressed her long brown hair.
'Please Ryu don't!' Mikan was begging but to no avail her voice just faded.
"Do you want to speak?" he looked at her somehow he pitied her but he didn't wanna lose her.
She somewhat found strength enough to nod her head.
He snapped his finger and she was able to whisper, only to whisper.
"Ryu, please don't do this to me…" she begged again.
"Mikan you don't understand. I love you! More than he can." Ryu clenched the blanket he was covering Mikan with.
Even though he was in a state like this he still cared for her. He didn't want her to catch cold or anything.
"So let me understand. Speak your mind, Ryu." Mikan was whispering.
The Mini spy that Hotaru clipped on Mikan worked with miracles. The audio they were receiving outside was crystal clear.
"Now you want to understand me?" Ryu was having second thoughts.
"Yes. I want to understand you. I don't want to put everything we had to waste with just like this. If it was about to end I want us to be the best of friends." Mikan tried to louder her voice but can't.
"If you keep doing what you've always done, you'll always get what you've always got. So when you want something you've never had; you've got to do something you've never done. That's what my sister's been telling me for years now. So there." Ryu quoted.
"So that means?" Mikan was confused. She never heard Ryu become serious with anything.
"It means that since I've always done the right things just to have you but still didn't I'm trying the not so right things to have you… it may work you know…" Ryu sheepishly said.
"Do you think that was what your sister wanted you to do? She wants you to be good." Mikan urged.
"No your wrong, my sis wants me to be bad. She's a psycho." He threw a pillow to the floor.
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"A brother with an Alice to control minds and a psycho sister? What else are in they're family blood line?" Ruka said.
"Now look here, Ruka. Just look at yourself for an instance. You're a walking animal specimen yourself. Ain't that weird?" Hotaru said coldly. Now she's eating a yogurt.
"Why you?" Ruka's head was emitting smoke. He was mad, really he is.
Fire suddenly came out of Natsume's palm.
"I thought I told the both of you to shut up?" he yelled.
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Ryu heard the yelling outside and thought someone might be spying on them. He looked out the window. He saw nothing.
'Maybe it was just the wind.' He thought.
"So Mikan let's start it already? No wait. I forgot to take a bath. Wait here ok?" he waved at Mikan and went inside the bathroom.
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"Now is the right time to act Natsume." Hotaru said. She threw the plastic cup of her yogurt.
"What do you want me to do?" Natsume held his wrist and stretched some more.
"I want you to buy me an orange."
"WHAT??!"
Natsume and Ruka shouted in unison.
"I'm serious. Damn why are you shouting?" Hotaru threw a twig at the two boys.
"Whose not gonna? You're asking for an orange!"
"Well go get one! Fast!" Hotaru motioned for him tom move.
She turned to Ruka.
"Now you pretty boy, call your animal friend inside Mikan's room. I have something for that rodent to do." She typed something in the mini laptop she always carried around her waist.
"Ok you say so…" Ruka whistled. "Mr. Mouse, come now I need you're help!" The mice ran out from a crack in the walls and went to Ruka.
"Now tell them to do this…"
"…"
"Got it! Okay guys, let's party!" Ruka signaled for the rodents to follow him and Natsume who was ordered to bring back an orange came just in time to witness the rodents fled with Ruka.
"What's happening? Here's you're darn orange!" she threw the orange in mid-air and luckily Hotaru who was an ace pitcher and caught the orange. She was about to bite the orange when Natsume caught her hand.
"Don't tell me you're just gonna eat that?!" he was angry, really angry.
"No I'm not just watch. By the way here's the plan…"
Hotaru filled him up with the exact details she informed Ruka. Natsume had a grin on his face and followed what Hotaru told him to do.
"Sheesh! Sometimes I can't believe a thing she says; now I'm following her? Darn Mikan, you're gonna pay for all of these... if it's gonna be my way or the other way around!" he whispered silently.
"Everything ready? Let's party!" Hotaru spoke in a tone different from her real identity.
"Roger that!" the boys said in unison.
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'Oh my God please someone, anybody, anything help me?! Lord please provide…' Mikan was really desperate to get out of that room. This time there was no more fooling around. When she was in the verge of tears she spotted a familiar raven hair.
"Finally that Hotaru made up her mind! I thought she would never let ME do the job now… it's pay back time!" Natsume waved at Mikan.
'God thanks.' Mikan thought.
But Ryu came before Natsume had the chance to open the window.
"So honey, are you ready?" Ryu grinned more.
"Ryu sorry but… he's here." Mikan who still can't move a muscle whispered to him hoping he heard.
"What?"
"Go get him…" Ruka shouted.
The mice came out of no where and opened every single passage of the room. Ruka and Natsume entered with style and Hotaru still eating her orange followed them in.
"You're going down buster!"
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To be continued…