Ratchet & Clank: A New Story

Cool-Dolphin: This is my first story, so I'm hoping for some tips on what I can improve on.

Disclaimer: I don't own Ratchet or Clank or any games in the series. I do own the made up stuff though

Chapter 2: Back to Metropolis

When Ratchet came out of the ship, he saw lots of destruction and shooting everywhere, but he did not know where he was. Clank jumped on Ratchet's back still equipped with the hydro-pack. (he forgot to change back)

"Ratchet! Look Out", Clank screamed as he saw a missile coming right towards him and ratchet

Ratchets flipped right and dodged it. "Phew, that was close, thanks Clank, now come on, let's get going

"Ok Clank lets go" said Ratchet

Ratchet walked right into a wall

"Huh? There was never a wall here before" Ratchet said confused.

"Look! There's a ledge up there!" Clank said

Ratchet looked up and tried to fly up there.

"Clank, what's wrong with your heli-pack? Clank! You have your hydro pack on!" said Ratchet

"Whoops, hehehehe", said Clank giggling while he changed into his heli-pack form.

When Ratchet got on top the ledge, he saw a train. He jumped on and saw some dolphin-like creatures. One fired a missile at him with a gun that looked like a devastator. Ratchet dodged it.

"Uh Clank, what are these creatures?" Ratchet asked

"I believe they are the Sniboots, strange, they were thought to be extinct a thousand years ago. There suppose to be peaceful creatures though, they lived on Veldin" replied Clank

Ratchet hit the Sniboots with his wrench while strafing. He did a few hyper strikes on the three-eyed ones and a comet strike on the one who threw boomerangs. When the train ride was over, he saw the City Hall, the place where Sasha was. He ran to the hall, but then he noticed the bridge was out. It was too far for Clank to glide over. Helga appeared.

"Ratchet! Clank! Ze Bride is out and we can't open it back up again. Ze nazty creatures destroyed it. There is a button at the end of my training course to make a new bridge, but beware of ze lil hooligans! Oh and take this" screamed Helga. She gave Ratchet a new gun called the Double Blasters. A help message came up that said (Double Blasters can be used to shoot two enemies at once)

Ratchet took out his wrench and slid down the rope. When he landed, there were Sniboots on the left and Sniboots on the right. He took his wrench and knocked them off the edge. He climbed on top the blocks coming out of the wall and had to wall jump when two big blocks came out. He slid down the next rope. When he was near the top of the 2nd platform, small Sniboots were on top and they were ready to push Ratchet off. Ratchet climbed right, then left and then right again to make the Sniboots confused. He jumped up and used the comet-strike on them. When he reached the end of the fitness course, he saw a big shiny button. It looked like the one where Clank had to use his Thruster-Pack. Clank was about to equip his thrusters pack until Ratchet stopped him.

"Don't worry, I'll use my wrench", said Ratchet showing off his new Omniwrench 9000.

It was the same colour as the one in the first game, but it did way more damage. Ratchet hyper striked the button and they heard a bridge noise. A taxi came to them and dropped them back to Helga.

"Go Ratchet! Get across Zat Bridge!" sceamed Helga

Ratchet went inside that building and went up to the 23rd floor. He walked down the hall and saw one of the galactic rangers.

"Hi sarge, Sasha is waiting" said the ranger waving at Ratchet

Ratchet walked into the office. Suddenly, Sasha ran up to kiss him. Ratchet felt dizzy

"Heh, sorry, anyway nice fighting, but it's not done yet. There are some creatures in the west side, we need to stop them before they get here." Said Sasha

Ratchet was still dizzy. Clank jumped off Ratchet's back and climbed up on Sasha's desk and told her about the Sniboots

"But what do they want?" Sasha asked

"That I do not know", Clank replied

Ratchet became undizzy

"Anyways, there is a dropship outside, it will drop you to the west side, and Ratchet, be careful," said Sasha

"Ok I will" said Ratchet as he got into the elevator.

Ratchet got inside the dropship and went to the west side

Cool-Dolphin :Chapter 2 Complete!