Ratchet & Clank: A New Story
Cool-Dolphin: This is my first story, so I'm hoping for some tips on what I can improve on.
Disclaimer: I don't own Ratchet or Clank or any games in the series. I do own the made up stuff though
Chapter 3: The Metropolis Battle
Ratchet was looking out the window of the dropship and saw all the chaos.
"Oh boy, this is terrible", said Ratchet
"Sarge, it's time to fight" said a ranger
"So where are we landing" Ratchet asked
"On a train", said another ranger
"What!" shouted Ratchet
Clank hopped on Ratchet's back. Ratchet jumped out if the ship and began to freefall. He then noticed red missiles targeting him
"Another freefall, more missiles" Ratchet said trying to miss the missiles
Suddenly, a missile hit Clank. Clank fell off Ratchet's back, but landed on the train safely with his heli-pack. Ratchet was about to fall to his death because he could not hover
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" screamed Ratchet thinking his life was an end
Just as he was about to hit the train, a Sniboot appeared. Ratchet fell on the Sniboot and squahed it. He threw the squashed the Sniboot into the sky. He took out his Double Blaster and started firing and strafing. Suddenly a three eyed Sniboot shot five big bullets at Ratchet. It hit Ratchet and almost knocked him off the train. He was hanging on the train looking down at the sky beneath him.
"Oh snap" he said to Clank
A Sniboots was just about to knock off Ratchet when suddenly he got up and shot it. When Ratchet was near the end of the train, a big helicopter was in his way. He tried shooting it with his double blaster, but it was no use. Suddenly a gun fell from the sky and hit Clank on the head.
"Ow" said Clank "Hey Ratchet, what's this"
Clank looked down at the weapon. Ratchet picked it up
"Where did it come from," Ratchet asked
Ratchet looked up at the sky and saw a dropship above with a ranger waving. He smiled at the ranger. A help message appeared. (The TNT Gun can cause giant bombs and wipe out enemies in its way).
"Perfect!" said Ratchet holding the gun in his hand.
He fired it at the helicopter and bam it exploded. Two more ships came and Ratchet shot them. Suddenly a bigger helicopter came, so Ratchet had to shot it twice. The train stopped at Al's Roboshack. Ratchet saw Al hiding behind the counter
"Don't worry Al, the monsters are gone" said Ratchet
"Ok thank goodness" Al said standing up behind the counter.
Suddenly a message came in. It was Skrunch
"Mwak kwak kawak Mkawkkkk Kawm Kaw" said Skrunch
"Huh" said Ratchet and Al
"He wants us at the Pheonix" said Clank "Mkaw kawak kawk Mkaw" he replied back to Skrunch
"What did you say to him" Ratchet asked
"That we will be there soon, come on Ratchet, we have no time to waste", said Clank.
Ratchet, Al and Clank ran back to the ship and got it. They headed to the Pheonix.
Chapter 3 done! I will write more soon