I tried to read through the story so far, I try to do that regularly to keep it fresh in my mind so I don't go off in a completely random direction, and I found that I couldn't.

It was just so poorly written compared to later writing that I just could not get through it. At least, I like to think that later chapters are better written.

So...

I am going to finish the chapter I'm currently working on, and then I'm going to go back and do some re-write's.

At this point, I don't think I'm going to actually change anything, just clean it up, although I'm undecided if I'm going to keep Lily in there or not. To be honest, I don't even remember where I was going to go with that.