Remembering Chapter three: Oakheart and Bluestar
Disclaimer: epobbp does not own the Warriors series.
By the way at the end when I list some of the voting choicesit has a Moonrise spoiler if you don't want to know it then go to one of the other chapters and choice from there who you want to vote for or skip over choices 9 and 10.
This chapter I was planning to make for my friend Krista as part of her birthday gift but I was too lazy to write it and had no ideasonJuly 16th and I had to read the Harry Potter book and pack for camp.
Special thanks to:
Everyone who voted or suggested ideas, Swiftstar for being the fist anonymous reviewer of this chapter, and warriorfan2 for being the first signed reviewer.
Thanks to SandHeart, the real Violet Parr, Mandoo, and Ebonyclaw.
Reviewer responses:
Swiftstar: I don't mind if you have a poem series and the votes will tell when I use your suggestion (that will be a challenging one to do).
warriorfan2: Thanks!
SandHeart: Let's see how the votes go.
the real Violet Parr: I hate it when any cat dies especially if it is one I like. I find it easier doing one cat remembering one cat or two cats remembering one cat because it doesn't really matter whose is speaking at the time. You're welcome and it was a good idea.
Mandoo: Thank you and see what I wrote for the real Violet Parr's response because I don't feel like typing it out again.
Ebonyclaw: I don't mind that you posted a poem. And once again the votes will tell who I do next.
The poem does jump around time periods and I would think Mistyfoot's kit name would be Mistykit. Right?
Oakheart,
You say Graypool will be a good mother.
I hope you are right,
For Mistykit and her brother.
Oakheart,
Make sure they don't know about the fact that they are half-Clan.
It may affect their loyalty,
Which is not my intended plan.
Oakheart,
Tigerclaw said you killed my deputy, Redtail,
I would not think you would,
The fact that you had made me silently wail.
Oakheart,
I now know what Tigerclaw told me was a lie,
You died in a rock fall,
Which made me let out a grateful sigh.
Oakheart,
You have come for me.
Despite that I was a war with StarClan.
Then I was able to see.
Bluestar
You did the right thing when you gave me our kits.
If Firestar had not come,
The forest would be in bits.
Review and vote for who you want to see next the choices are:
1. Stonefur and Mistyfoot remembering Bluestar.
2. Mistyfoot remembering Stonefur.
3. Tawnypelt and/or Brambleclaw remembering Tigerstar.
4. Yellowfang remembering Raggedestar (suggested by Swiftstar)
5. Firestar remembering Bluestar (suggested by Sandheart)
6. Graystripe/paw remembering Lionheart (suggested by Ebonyclaw)
7. Cinderpelt remembering Yellowfang
8. Firestar remembering Yellowfang
9. Crowpaw remembering Feathertail
10. Stormfur remembering Feathertail
11. Ravenpaw remembering Tigerstar (Hey I didn't say it couldn't be remembering someone they hate)
12.Dustpelt/paw remembering Redtail
13. Firestar remembering Tigerstar
14. Tigerstar remembering Bluestar
And to think when I planned to update this, but my computer wouldn't let me, there were only eight choices and I can still think of more I could have put down.I will still take suggestions but please vote for one of these along with giving me suggestions. If I get enough reviews before August 28 I will update before then but if I don't then I will make a chapter on my birthday (August 28) ignoring all votes doing one that I want to do. I am going to be make the chapter on my birthday anyway but this is so you people who like it can get more chapters. So review quickly and there will be more chapters this month.