No offense meant to blondes, but they just don't exist in the Avatar world, so, naturally, Sokka would think it was weird. I don't think I'm going to ask you to review the Sue's story like I did before, but if you have any suggestions, I'd be happy to hear them.

Thanks to all who reviewed, and on with the story!

Wen Zuko showed up he had a girl with him. Theyl immdeditly saw that she was butiful, but that was all they saw.

"Everyone," Zuko said, "This is Mary."

"Nice to meet you," Mary said polietly.

"It's nice to meet you too," Katara said. "How do you get your hair to do that?" Mary's hair was blonde, adn it was braided very buetifully.

"I'll show you as soon as we're done fiting the Sues," Mary said.

"How did you know we were fiting the Sues?" Sokka said.

Mary said, sighing, "I was born ina small village. I was the most beuftil person in the village. Every1 loved me. But then a Sue came. Her name was Sue. She was beuftil becz of the way her powers were, making her beutifl. She kicked me out."

"That's so sad!" Aang said.

"We have to help!" Toph said. "Mary, we'll help you kick Sue out of your village so you can go back home and become the most beutifl person there again."

"That's very kindo f you." Mary said. "But I have gotten over my home. We must get rid of Sue, so that th epeople can make they're own choices about who is the most beutifl, but I don't want to go back."

"Why not?" said Zuko.

"Oh, umm..." Mary said. She was in love with him, but she didn't want to say.

Iroh saw this. "I'm sure Mary has her reasons, Prince Zuko," he said.

"You're right, Iroh," Zuko said. He waked away. He was i n love with Mary.

"Thank you," Mary said.

"No problem," Iroh said.

"How are we going to fight the Sues, Toph?" said Aang.

"It's an idea I got from Mary," Toph said. She had heard about Mary's adventures before. mary was famouse.

"Why don't you explain it, Mary," Toph said.

"Okay," Mary said. She began to explain it.

"See?" asked Toph. "I knew you could write a Sue story if you tried, Sokka."

"A natural-born Suethor," teased Katara. Sokka glared at her.

"Can we get this over with?" he demanded. "The sooner we finish, the sooner the Firebenders can go back to whatever villainous act they were doing earlier."

"Believe me, I'd be glad to leave," Zuko retorted. Despite his illness, he was able to fight the Sues due to a plot hole, and willing to fight Sokka due to his nature, and Sokka's big mouth.

"Let's look over this story and fix it, okay?" suggested Aang quickly. The older boys stopped fighting and sat down on the pillows.

"Alright, well, first there's spelling," began Sokka.

"And the character in general," put in Zuko.

"What about the OOCness?"

"Plot holes."

"Tragic past makes no sense."

"Alright!" shouted Toph finally. "We'll go through this one at a time. Character first."

"Why character first?" whined Sokka.

"Because it's the worst problem," Katara told him. "Now calm down and be quiet. Who wants to type this time?"

"I wouldn't mind recording again," Iroh said. "I did very little last time, as Suebasher... or, actually, the Sue, was taking everything down."

He moved in front of the computer, while everyone else went over the story Sokka had written.

"Alright, well, first of all, her appearance," Aang began.

"Makes no sense at all?" offered Zuko.

"We don't know much about her," Katara pointed out. "We have her name, a quick summary of her past, her hair color and style, and that's it."

"I think they should explain what she looks like before they tell us about her past," Toph said. "Unless, of course, her past is part of the story, but in this case, definitely more information is required before backstory.

"They tried," Aang reminded her.

"Let's just try and write a description of her," Zuko suggested.

"But we'll have to change it," added Sokka. "Her hair can't be yellow. That's just... weird."

Quickly, they began describing the Sue. Before long, though, it was decided that there were too many ideas to fit in one description. At Katara's suggestion, they each wrote their own. This is how they turned out.

No:

Wen Zuko showed up he had a girl with him. Theyl immdeditly saw that she was butiful, but that was all they saw.

Yes:

Aang turned and went to answer the knock on the door. Zuko and Iroh stood there, but with them was a strange girl he had never met before.

Her hair and eyes were dark, leaving her skin looking extraordinarily pale, even next to the Firebenders. The black strands were braided, at least, some of them were, and all of them were woven between and around, over and under, entwined like so many vines.

Yes:

Katara had thought Zuko's hair was dark, he was Fire Nation, after all. Those in the Fire Nation, she noticed, had dark hair and pale skin, marking them along with their eyes.

But the girl next to him had hair so black it looked blue. The numerous braids and twists made her scalp look like a giant optical illusion. Between that hair and her eyes, all the same color as her pupils, like pools of ink, the girl looked as if she had never seen the light of day before.

Maybe:

Sokka thought this dark haired, dark-eyed girl was very pretty, despite her Fire Nation paleness.

Yes:

Toph couldn't see the girl standing between the Firebenders. She was only a silhouette in the blind girl's eyes. And the descriptions that the others tried to give, of a girl with hair and eyes as dark as shadows and skin as pale as light, didn't help at all.

Yes:

Zuko knew they wondered about the strange-looking girl at his side. The ebony eyes they would see as soon as they looked away from her dark, dizzying hair were enough to make anyone blink. The hair or the eyes separately were natural enough, without the braids, but together, she looked like a creature of the night from the stories told by children to frighten one another.

Iroh didn't describe the girl, being too busy typing it up. Despite Katara's offers to stand in while he wrote, he said that he was getting to old for this and would listen to none of their protests. Finally, they gave in.

"Well, the one problem that seems to be in all of our descriptions would be that we always make her seem very special," Katara said. "It's alright to have someone who stands out, so long as it's realistic and not overdone, but making her seem overly unusual could be a cliché."

"For once," Sokka commented, "I'd like to see an original character who looked completely natural."

"You're the one who wrote her as a blonde!"

"As an example! I didn't do it on purpose!" There was a pause.

"You didn't do it on purpose?"

"On accident!!!!!! Accident!"

Toph rolled her sightless eyes. "Su-ure, Snoozles, you just keep telling yourself that."