SIMPLE MISTAKE

CHAPTER 8: THE BREAK UP WITH THE JERK

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"Shit, I can't believe I forgot that!" the young man raised his hands to cover his ears and letting them slid down to his face.

"and you called me the stupid one" his brother laughed slightly and sat down with a remote on his hand while looking at the screen TV in front of him as he turned it one.

"Why couldn't you just called her to know that?" his brother didn't bother to look at his brother by the voice he answer you could tell he was ticked.

"The fuck I tried calling her and she didn't pick up!" he shouted while pacing around now. His older brother just shook his head in disbelieve something it was better to watch his brother than TV, but at this point he was tired from his own personal live, trying to get Rin back from that Mortal boy she choose to hang with wasn't as easy as he thought.

" why don't you just calm down and wait until she get here then you can act!" he shouted now his little brother was getting in his nerves, he did at most times but pacing around like that because Kikyuo, his bitch was coming back didn't mean he had to act like a total idiot.

" fuck, she said that she was staying here until school opens or when he parents come back, you know how she acts!" he shouted at his brother.

"InuYasha!" Sesshy said warningly. Finally he turned to turn to look at his little brother, what the fuck was running in his mind when he told the bitch to stay here1.

"Damit InuYasha, that lazy hoe ain't coming to live here, I'd rather you bring Kagome back here than here!" he shouted really angry. The last time she staid for just a day she messed up everything, her cloths were every where the house stank of her and he couldn't take it he actually moved into a motel for that night cuz he couldn't stand her.

"I didn't tell her to come over, she just said that she was coming over to stay a couple week until her parents comes back from their business trip and she hanged up!" he shouted as he started pacing again.

" go get her a hotel instead I'm not moving out like the last time I did anyways this is my house I'll kick you and her out if she comes here" he said as he turned to the screen again.

"Great idea you had since you were born" InuYasha said as he walked to the phone and picked it up he pressed the redial button and placed it to his ear.

"Hey Kikyuo here!" a hyper voice said.

"Yeah Kikyuo, I was thinking about you getting a hotel cuz we don't have anywhere you can sleep and my brother said he ain't moving out like the last time he did" he said hoping she'll take it the good way and not the bad way.

"um….okay" she said" I didn't think of that, okay but you'll come with me right baby?" she asked he knew she was putting on her puppy face on by the sound of her sound.

"Yeah of course babe, see ya when you get here" he said smiling.

"Hugs and kisses" she said making a kissing sound.

"Same love you, bye" he said hanging up after her with a wide smile on his face.

"Idiot" a girl said as she shut her cell phone shut.

"Come here baby" a man said. He had long jet black hair with red pity eyes, he was very pale but he kind of matched with Kikyuo she was pale too but the make up she had always changed that.


"He's so stupid, he can't even tell that I'm using him" she said as she leaned in the sitting man's arms.

"Naughty girl" he said as he tapped her nose while making her giggle.

"Your naughty girl" she said their foreheads touching. They were in a hotel, Kikyuo really never did went on vacation she just went to like with that man since her parents went on a business trip telling her she could go on a vacation if she wanted but she had decided to stay with her other boyfriends who was Naroku, he always made her smile and she loved him with all her heart.

"Why did you decide to go out with him anyways?" Naroku asked as he pulled back on the sofa he was sitting on to look at the girl on top of him.

"I don't know he was popular at school and all the girl wanted him, I knew he had a crush on me so I decided to take the change to make the others jealous" she said shrugging her shoulders.

"Now no more questions, lets get back to where we were" she said in a husky voice.

"Yeah" he said kinda moaning when he felt her hand in his secret place.


"Kagome? You made it!" a hyper Sango shouted as she opened the door to find her long lost friend there looking a little confused at something.

"Yeah I thought you've moved or something" she said looking around the apartment she was in.

"Hey Souta, and no I'm not planning on moving" she said as she noticed the little boy who was more into the candy he had rather than anything around him.

"Kohaku I got you something!" she shouted as they walked into the house.

"Hmmmmm, you always say that when you want me to feed kirara, that cat eats too much I tell ya" he said from his room.

"Kohaku!" she shouted warningly and the little boy walked to his sister immediately. He was wearing a buggy jean with a 23 on each leg and a buggy white shirt that read 'south side' his brown hair was tired in a neatly shot pony tail with little freckles on the bridge if his nose.

"Where were you planning to?" she asked giggling.

"Running away from you" he teased as he looked at a boy who was wearing a buggy washed out black pant and a white buggy shirt over a white-tee underneath.

"Kagome, you're back' he said not knowing the boy's name, anyways he was too interested in the candy more than his greetings.

"Yeah yesterday actually" she said while she hugged him "you've grown up a lot" she looked at him he was taller and his hair was longer that when he say him.

"Yeah well do you want me to shrink" he teases as she giggled.

"Okay mister, that's Souta, her little brother, that's what I brought to you today" she said as the little boy looked up on hearing his name.

"Hi souta, I'm Kohaku as you would notice from my sister's big mouth" he said handing out his hand and shaking it with Souta's.

"I swear one day you just might find him dead if he doesn't watch his mouth" Sango said as he ruffled her brothers hair.

The two boys walked outside leaving the girl inside to talk about well girl stuff, like boys, cloths, styles, the hottest celebrity couple and stuff like that.

"So did you and Sesshy make up yesterday or did he get you ticked off even more?" Kagome said as they got off the point about hot celebrity.

" he broke up with me, then kissed me with his goodbye kiss, and say that it was best we stay friends and nothing more" she said sighing as she leaned on the wall more and messing wither her long brown hair.

"Oh he's as nice as that, Kouga is a total jerk, I'm planning on breaking up with him" she said as she threw her self on Sango's other bed. She had two for just incase Kagome wanted to sleep over or any of her other friends.

"I still don't get why you go out with that son of a bitch anyways" Sango said looking at her friend and stopped messing with her hair.

"I don't know I told you why, what time is it anyways" she asked picking her head up to look at her friend.

"It's, oh man its 8:59!" Sango shouted getting up "I got to make food for the dope and my parents" she said running to the kitchen.

"I'll help you if you want, just as soon as I call mom" she said as she got her cell out finding 100 messages, 99 were from Kouga (again) and one was from her dad.

"Okay I'll call dad back and call Kouga back" she said putting the little cell phone to her ear listing to the song that Kouga used as a ring ton.

"Hey Kagome" he said panting.

"What the fuck are you doing, having sex!" she shouted getting really angry at last she was going to break up with him.

"No was…..pant… just running" he said as Kagome head his x pant too from the background.

"We're over you really did cheat on me the first time too!" she shouted hanging up.

"Danm asshole" she said as she called her dad.

"Hey dad wass up?" she said calmly as her dad answered.

"Hey where are you where're home, it's time for you to come home" he said worried.

"I'm at Sango's house, its okay I'll be there" she as she giggled.

"Okay" her dad said and hanged up.

"So I'm guessing you finally broke up with Kouga, was he seriously having sex with her?" Sango asked as she placed some food on the table.

"Yeah, wow you cook fast" Kagome said as she looked at the food it looked a little cramped up but it looked good enough to eat.

"Don't laugh at me" Sango said looking at her friend.

"I'm not" she let out a giggle but didn't laugh.

"Okay I'm guessing you're not staying to eat my GOOD food" she said stretching the good part.

"No I got to get home, it's getting late" she said as they walked to Kohaku's room finding them sleeping on the ground.

"Babies" they said in unison and each picked up their brother.

"Well guess I'll be carrying him home, I'll see you later" Kagome said s she got out of the apartment.

"I would have helped if he wasn't asleep" Sango said as he pointed to his brother who was cuddling up in her arms.

"Don't worry he's very light" she said waving off.


"So did you find the hoe a place to live?" Sesshy asked as InuYasha entered the house with a grumpy look on her face.

"Yeah, and I had to pay for it, danm, I need to get away from her" he said as he threw his self on the sofa and looked at what his brother was watching.

"I didn't know you liked to watch passion" he laughed as a hint of red crossed his brother's cheeks.

"Shut up" he said as he changed the channel.

"I'm going for a walk" he said as he got out of the house.

"It's nine" he heard his brother but didn't really care.

As he was on he saw a figure of a girl holding something like a toy a big one in her arms. 'Aint the Kagome' he smelt her scent and ran to her.

"Hey" he said from behind making her scream but noticed it was him, the boy in her arms stiffed but didn't wake up.

"What are you doing trying to kill me?" she asked looking at hm. He was leaning his chin on her shoulder while his hands were on her waist, that almost made Kagome's legs give up on her but she was too stubborn.

"no then who will I hold this' he tightened his hold on her while he kissed her neck making her giggle slightly while leaned her head on top of his head tightly his in between her shoulder and head.

"That tickles" she could see her house and the tings around still looked a little messed up.

"well, home again' she sighed with a smile on her face. He pulled her closer to his body as he stopped and turned her around, taking the little boy from her hands.

"I'll help" he said smiling at her. When they got into the house her mom hugged her and took Souta from the nice young man as she said's hands and took him to his room.

"Come on, I'll take you to my room" she said giggling as she run up the stairs; he room looked exactly like when she used to live there.

"I thought you'd like it like old times" he mom said from the door but went down stairs withought hearing her reply.

"Your mom's really nice" InuYasha said as he looked around.

"Ha I got it from her" Kagome said lying on her bed, InuYasha sat next to her and lifted her up to his lab.

"Good, because if you weren't so nice I would do this" he said as he leaned and kissed her lips, she pulled his head a bit low and widen the kiss a bit.

"Yeah I guess" she said smiling up at him. He smiled down at her, how id he managed to like her so mush when he used to think that he hated her so much worse he even used to call her a beast but now she acts as if that didn't even happened, he thought about that only to realize he was staring at her.

"What, is something, you look like a mommy" she said giggling.

"It's because of you" he said blushing and turning to the other side.

"What'd I do" she said getting up and looking at him trying to get angry.

"Hey I never realized how cute you looked when you're to be angry" he thought out loud making her blush like crazy.

"Um…..I think I have to go" he pecked her on the lip and got out of the window.

"Idiot" she said smiling.

"He was cute, and he has cute ears not an idiot" her mom said from the door.

"Mom! I can't believe you were there all this time" she said blushing more than she imagined.

"Get over here and eat" she said giggling. Kagome got up and started chasing her mom down stairs, her dad and brother just chalked the tow as they raced down stairs.


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