Hello im back! So sorry for the delay. Ive been so busy lately. Ive got summer work so yeah and i got writers block so you can imagine how ticked i got. Anyway its finally here it took me a frantic day of writing but its here chapter three. chapter four is where its gonna say here's where the dialogue from the actual games gonna start but theres one line of in game stuff here too. so anyway here it is you know her name. i hope you like it. oh and im thanking people now. at the bottem of each chapter im gonna answer your reviews indavidually so look for your name if you review. so reveiw.

COPYWRITE: I dont own portal or portal 2. But i do own two characters in this... well one of them is a face for well. youll find out later. valve owns portal and its sequel... lucky... you know...


"Yes Wheatley?" Madeline asked.

Still hugging him she lifted her head up so she could see him. However, the face she found was not that of the young ginger scientist she had just been talking to.

The face she saw was that of a girl. She had a face shaped like a heart sprinkled from top to bottom with freckles. Her eyes were a few shades of blue brighter than Wheatley's. Her hair was the same fiery ginger color, and it was pulled back into two extremely neat braids. Her wire rim glasses completed her Eliza Thornberry look.

"Ya need to wake up." She said. She was Scottish apparently.

Madeline's eyes widened and pulling away from the girl, she fell back. She suddenly felt a searing pain in her right hand, and brought it up to her face to look at. There was no mark there however.

From her position on the floor Madeline could now see that the girls attire was that of a Barbie teacher from the 60s (A/N: I got loads of crap for the original line about models I put here, so there are you happy now?). She wore a bright pink skirt that went to her knees with a black belt buckled firmly about her waist. Her shirt was long sleeved, and had very thin black and white stripes. The stockings she wore went to her thighs and matched her shirt, while her shoes matched her skirt.

"Ya need to wake up lass, so you can wake us." The girl spoke again. Reaching out her hand she gripped the somehow injured hand.

Madeline screamed in agony. Struggling against the somehow

"I'm so very sorry, but I haf' ta do this. It's the fastest way to wake ya. I'm sorry but I have to do this to. Please don't hold it against me. I'm so sorry, beyond sorry. Please forgive me."

"Who are you!" Madeline screamed and looked her straight in the eyes.

The girl's eyes softened and she spoke one more time before she squeezed Madeline's hand so hard she saw white. She said, "I'm the one who's gonna get ya outta here alive. My name is Emma... Emma Michaels… And I am so, so sorry."

With that she squeezed the hand and then all Madeline saw was pure white.

LINE BREAK

The white veil of pain began to fade, and soon melted away.

"What," Madeline's eyes opened and brightness blinded her, "Ah, god what happened."

When she brought her hand up to her face to shield her eyes, and it wasn't till her eyes began to adjust to the brightness she noticed a deep cut on her hand.

"When did I..." The conversation with the girl, Emma, came back to her.

"Oh yeah... She said I needed to wake up... So I could wake her up, but that makes no sense? Right?" She stood now, tearing a piece of her tank top off to bandage her injury. She tied the piece of cloth round her hand and looked around.

"If she wasn't awake how did she..." Madeline trailed off realizing where she was.

The electronic controls and circuit boards in front of her were covered in a thick layer of dust. Computers with cracked and missing screen monitors, we're mounted on the walls right above the desks that lined those same walls. A shattered window lay on the wall just above a control panel. The glass shards littered the floor around her, and she noticed one of those shards had blood on it.

"GLaDOS main control room... I was here in that memory. Did I sleep walk here or something? I must have." She said now walking slowly over to the control panel.

She leaned against it and looked through the window at what was once the amazing GLaDOS consciousness computer room.

The tube that once housed GLaDOS's body had shattered. Broken glass littered the floor, now covered with foliage and wreckage. Most of the wires had been disconnected, chewed by rats, or deteriorated and had fallen in tangled coils all around the floor. The metal steps leading up to the platform the tube had once been connected to had rusted and collapsed.

There was no sign however of the beautiful GLaDOS consciousness.

Madeline looked all around but she couldn't see her.

"Where? Did she deteriorate? Wait oh there... She... Is. Oh my…"

There she was, GLaDOS, the beautiful main computer. She was not as beautiful anymore.

Her right shoulder was all that remained of her right arm. Her left hand was gone too, as well as a chunk from her left thigh, and her right eye. There were huge holes were these things used to be. They gaped open and showed the intricate circuitry of the android.

Madeline sighed. "She had been so beautiful too..." Madeline closed her eyes a moment.

'You have to wake up so you can wake us up.' Something Emma said flashed through her mind. She opened her eyes now.

"But how..."

A reflection in the broken glass caught her eye. She turned around and saw every computer screen was on and were flickering static.

"What? But!" She started confused as all get out.

Emma's face flashed across the screens and she spoke. Her image and voice were distorted and it would cut out, however she was still able to make out a few words.

"Sorr... The hand... I forg... To wake us... Must... The main... To wake... Activate the... Consciousness... Repeat... GLaDOS... You must turn... On…" Then the screens went black.

Madeline tried to make sense of it. "Ok if I'm not deaf, then I know I've got to wake something... Wait she said GLaDOS... Does she want me to wake her? Ugh! I don't know! Why am I even contemplating listening to her? What am I supposed to do!" she shouted and slammed her fist down on the control panel, accidentally hitting a small red button labeled main power.

"Power up initiated." The announcers voice echoed through the room.

The severity of what she had just done crashed down on her as she stood there. She looked down at the button as she was bathed in the red light of the alarm.

"Ummm... Well... Shit..."


Yay! it be done. you love it? you'd better... anyway i hope its good. i say every time don't i... sorry. i'm insecure.

Anyhow.. on to talking to my reviewers...

Smorgesborg~ And i cant wait to give you the next chapter

Taryn~ Im glad you like it. Also extremely glad you think shes cool. I wanted her to seem awsome. Also glad you like where its going.


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