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Jolie!
Disclaimer: Because I don't have enough money to buy all the characters in the Percy Jackson and Heroes of Olympus books, I have to put a disclaimer on here…
PIPER
Piper was in shock. Everyone was quiet. Nico started talking again. "One of the final lines of the Great Prophecy is:
'An oath to keep with a final breath'
"Just before Percy and Annabeth fell, they made an oath to each other. Percy said that they would always be together and he would never let go of Annabeth." Nico fell silent, processing what he had just said. "So… You're pretty much implying that they're both dead?" Piper shot up. "What do you mean?" Nico asked. "I mean that because the prophecy says that it's an oath to keep with a final breath, does that either one or both of them are dead?" she said. "Maybe…" Nico replied, though he was so quiet that Piper had a lot of trouble hearing him. Frank stood up and started talking, "Well, we can't just sit around, moping our butts' off. If Annabeth or Percy is dead, then they died the way they wanted to, with someone they loved. What do you think they would say if they were here now?" Leo replied with: "Well, they would say that we should start moving if we want to get to the Doors of Death by the deadline!" Leo dismissed everyone from the mess hall because he wanted to get ready for the fight that was going to happen soon and everyone else was going back to their rooms to figure out a battle strategy, like Annabeth would have done. When Piper got back to her cabin, she just sat on her bed and stared at her wall, bored out of her head. Then she remembered Katoptris or 'looking glass'. When she got this weapon out, she thought of the day she got it, and Annabeth had been with her, looking through swords and other weapons for Piper. Piper immediately thought after that that she should stop dwelling on the past and focus on the present, or in this case, the future. Katoptris is special, in the way that the person holding the dagger can see the immediate future. As Piper looked into the dagger, she saw something that put her hopes up instantly. She saw two people thatlooked like Annabeth and Percy, stirring.
Well that's the end of the chapter, and I hope you liked it. Please, pretty please review it! Your comments are priceless…