Hey guys I'm back with some more of this fiction. So... I don't have any thing to say right this second so lets just continue on. ON WITH THE FIC...-TION
Archery Practice
Star started to walk towards the forest, but was stopped by Duncan, who told her to stay. "Why should we stay here? Fire is still out there! Who knows what she might possiblydo!" She told him. All he said back was, "It is almost night. I don't want you to get hurt by a creeper explosion or something." Star looked up in the sky. Duncan was right; it looked like the sun would set in a hour or so.
"Alright, but tomorrow morning I'm going out to look for her." Star replied. Duncan nodded his head and showed her the guest room. "This is stupid. She could be anywhere now... I could have protected myself." Star spoke to herself as soon as Duncan left. She look around seeing if there was a window. Luckily for her, there was.
She smiled as she walked towards it. She felt like she was really crazy for going after her evil self in the first place. She looked down, hoping it would be easy to get out through it, but there was no way she could make the jump without breaking a leg or something. A skeleton started to shoot her, even though the window still closed.
Then Star got another crazy idea that involved her bow. Then the Narrator yelled at her whilst facepalming herself. "What are you doing!" She said.
Narrator: YAY I'm in the story, oh duh I said I was...
Star just looked around for where he voice came from but when she saw no one was there. She looked for a rope to tie to an arrow. She looked in the dresser and under the guest bed...
N: ok I think I suck when I'm Narrating it...
When she found one and tied it to the arrow she opened the window and shot it to the nearest pole. She was lucky it hit the pole. It stuck to said pole. Before Star could swing down Duncan knocked on the door. "Star are you ok? I've been hearing some sort of ruckus from here," he said. Star hastily said "Yeah, I'm fine. I'll see you in the morning." She Jumped out the window.
Duncan just blinked in confusion and opened the door. He saw that Star had just jumped out the window and hit himself on his forehead, "Hope she stays safe then..." He said, walking back to his room.
Star was finally outside. She could see Fire running towards the forest. Star followed her trail close to Rythian's place. "She didn't just go into Rythian's place..." She said. "Crap. This should be fun..." She walked along the path Fire just traveled.
Ok ok, I think it is safe to say I do suck at narrating and i am better at First person, but lets try on more chapter doing this... And maybe get some readers.