Hello again! I'm back! Sorry for being away so long, but I haven't had internet for a while. So here is what I could throw together. It'll be short though.
Raphael pov:
So, like, we were all hovering over master, trying to figure out what was wrong, and all the sudden this cloaked figure came in. It was like "I'm here to help" and the creep started to walk toward us like it was no one's business. I started yelling "What the shell are you doing here? How the shell did you get here?"
"Oi, now isn't the best time for answers, if you want your Sensei to be saved from a horrible fate, I'd highly suggest trusting me." I turned to Leo, who had this weird look in his eye, the "I'm so confused I don't know what to do" look. It seemed that fearless has run out of ideas for once. "Well..." it was obviously waiting for an answer. We all looked at each other, seeing as this guy, so I assumed, wasn't attacking or anything, that and we had run out of ideas, we would allow the creep to help, under our watchful eyes of course.
The guy swiftly walked right past us and into the room where Master Splinter was and kneeled right next to him, checking the eyes, pulse, and even skin temperature. It sighed and got up to face us "I am afraid your Sensei is in a very bad situation, unless something is done quickly, we could lose him forever."
She, judging by the voice channels, got us all to sit down and told us that she was sent by her master, Jeng Shin, to help them save Splinter. Somehow, she had known that Splinter was in going to be in trouble two weeks prior.
Cloaked persons" POV:
The green teenagers that father told me about looked confused, not that I blame them, I'm still a little confused about it myself.
I explained to them that there sensei's mind was trapped in limbo, a place between worlds where the spirits of troubled souls go to fix their problems themselves before passing over to the afterlife. Some of the greatest minds, such as their sensei, are able to separate their souls from their bodies and enter limbo without dying. Most of them enter to help the lost souls, well...most of them anyways; which you can guess was the cause of the current predicament we were in.
The boys looked to be even more confused, which is still understandable, seeing as they were new to all of this. The one in the red mask looked to be aggravated.
"What the shell do you mean?" he yelled "Your basically saying that master splinter is stuck in some ghostland all because of some guy causing trouble?"
"Well in short, yes." I replied calmly in hopes of calming down the angry turtle. No such luck though.
I sighed inwardly and thought to myself: 'this will be a long day.'
Well? How am I doing so far? Any sudgestions?