Hi! Thanks for reading and coming back. This chapter is going to span two parts. They're not going to be as long as the others. From now on, only one character POV per chapter so yeah. Except for creepy parts in the middle with [insert bad person's name] talking to [insert name of one of his minions]. I am going to set a poll on my profile on whether I should add dragon riders or not. (Except Ormoris and Glader (sorry if I misspelled it I don't have the books with me. No internet for now either)) Should I also include the Varden? How about Murtagh? Please come and vote! Now here's the story.
Previously…
His long hair fell out from the hood. He had red hair. And from what they could see, he had chalk pale skin. Then he spoke "Stop. You will hand over the creature you call Eragon or face destruction."
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Chapter 6 (Eragon)
The Transfer
Eragon didn't understand why he was so angry. So, this person wants to take him back. That shouldn't have made him as angry as he was now. He wondered if it was because he was also threatening his master and her family. No, he didn't like them that much. Still he did care for them in a thank you for saving me from the dreadful prison but you now own me so, yeah kind of way. No, he was kidding himself. He for some reason liked them.
Blödgham stepped forward and said, "Who are you to be making demands of us?"
The mysterious person removed his hood. He had blood red eyes and a pale face. His crimson hair was parted on the left side. He could be described as handsome except for a long scar that stretched across his face. "I am a shade. We are also King Galbitorix's most loyal and faithful servant. I am named Durza Elfslayer"
The three elves looked at him in horror but Eragon didn't get it. So he was a freaky guy with red hair and eyes. Why were they so scarred? He tried to connect to Arya's mind. Her mind was all jumbled up except for the words shade. Shade. Why is a shade her? Shade. Shade… He was confused. Why is shade such a scary thing?
"What's a shade?" he asked Arya.
"All you need to know for now is that they are dangerous and powerful."
"You won't get him without a fight. We bought him with an enormous amount of lasrevinuyenom to buy him. Now we know that he is an invaluable asset to us, why should we give it to you?" Islanzadi demanded him.
"Galbitorix, the rightful ruler of Alagaësia demands it. And we will fulfill his wishes." Durza said. He then threw a magical talisman at Eragon.
It happened so fast that no one had time to react. When it hit him, Eragon found that he couldn't move. He was sealed in place. He tried to shout out a spell, but he couldn't talk either.
Blödhgam took out his sword and shouted at the shade, "Then you die today or we die trying!" with that, he charged Durza.
Durza laughed and pulled out his own sword from its sheath. He defended himself with ease. He countered Blödhgam's attacks. Blödhgam couldn't get past his guard. Then Durza stuck Blödhgam on the arm, then the legs. Durza was getting the upper hand.
Eragon saw Arya and Islanzadi take out their bow and arrows. Then they started to shoot at Durza. Durza just flicked his free hand and the arrows desingrated on the spot. The two female elves kept shooting while Blödhgam kept attacking the shade. Durza then started to chant. When he finished, Blödhgam couldn't get near him. Then fireballs started to rain on Arya and Islanzadi. Islanzadi was able to escape but Arya was trapped.
Something in Eragon's center broke. He felt Arya's pain as she was pummeled by the fire. He was torn at the heart. He was supposed to be protecting his master. He felt anger bubble up from within. He was angry beyond compare. Even more so than what he had felt earlier. Then one of the programming that he had to go through surfaced. He had to do anything, to help his master. He started straining against the magic holding him in place. But to no avail. He was helpless. Helpless. Helpless…. He wished the seal would break so that he could go and help Arya to relive the pain in his chest. Then like magic, the stone seal broke.
"What?!" Durza shouted. He lost concentration and the shield went down. That was when Blödhgam got past his defenses and struck him. The shade screamed. He shouted a spell and a blast wave radiated out from Durza.
Eragon yelled, "tcetor peth sevled naem morfeht tsalb" A shield formed around them and they were safe.
Eragon ran over to Arya to see if she was okay. When he reached her side, she was burned in some places but none were killing blows. "la ehwon" Arya's wounds healed immediately. So now part of the ache was gone, but the ache and anger wouldn't go away until he eliminated the threat. He changed to half-tiger and charged at the shade. He leaped up and yelled, "drows!" A sword appeared in his hands. He attacked the shade along side Blödhgam. As they attacked the shade, Durza kept throwing spell at them. Eragon countered each of them. "re taw" … "ria". But they couldn't defeat each other. Then Eragon said, "In ommu seht ylohd rows, rebilacxe". There was a flash of light, and a beautiful sword shimmered into being. Eragon grabbed it and attacked Durza. Durza immediately concentrated one attack at Blödhgam. He was blasted back and was knocked out. Arya rushed to him. Eragon and Durza started to duel. They attacked each other, but it was at a stale mate. Eragon only had one mission, defeat Durza to ease the pain in his chest. Finally, tired of this game, he shouted, "In ommu seht drow sfoth gil rehtea!"
There was a blinding glare of light as light itself bent to create a sword. Throwing Excaliber in the air, where it hung there, Eragon grabbed the sword in front of him and pointed at Durza. Durza then charged at him while shouting a spell. Eragon yelled an attack of his own. "s'nev aehgn iral ghtarw!" The glowing sword pulsed a beam of light towards Durza. It hit him straight in the chest and continued through. Durza shrieked out. Then his skin started to become transparent. Eragon could see writhing shadows under his skin. Then, Durza disappeared and the shadows were flung out. Eragon was about to yell out a spell to contain them, when one of the shadows raced towards him and entered him through his mouth. He choked. Then he felt a sinister presence in his mind. He fainted for the second time that day.
Glossary of spells
tcetor peth sevled naem morfeht tsalb - protect the elves and me from the blast
la ehwon - heal now
drows – sword
In ommu seht ylohd rows rebilacxe - I summon the holy sword excaliber
In ommu seht drow sfoth gil rehtea – I summon the sword of light, aether
Re taw – water
Ria – air
s'nev aehgn iral ghtarw - Heaven's glaring wrath
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Ok, so I haven't been keeping my promise. But I promise, the next chapter will be up today. But that might mean no update on Tuesday. I'll try though. Sorry for the misspelling, grammar, etc. errors present in this story. So what happened? Find out in Chapter seven [The refusal for entry] Please review and tell me how I can become a better writer. Flames okay if it is constructive.
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