So as promised, I have uploaded the second chapter on the same day as chapter 6. Thank you for reading my stories. I'm sorry if Eragon x Arya goes to fast. It's probably because I am impatient for them to get together. I'll try to go slow though. Anyways, please vote on my profile. Should I add the Varden? Other dragon riders? How about Murtagh? Please vote! And without further ado here is chapter 7 [the refusal for entry]..
Previously…
One of the shadows raced towards him and entered him through his mouth. He choked. Then he felt a sinister presence in his mind. He fainted for the second time that day.
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Chapter 8 (Ayra)
[The refusal for entry]
Arya watched as Eragon collapsed on the ground. She yelled out and bounded towards him.
Eragon was writhing on the ground, having multiple spasms. His tail was waving in the air. Then he transformed back into a human.
When she got there, Blödhgarm was already there. Figures. I was no hidden fact that her brother was sympathetic towards the Tateem Acurrun. Except when they're attacking him. He was also passionate about animals, hence his appearance. He even went as far to advise them to attain one. So that was why they went to the foreboding place to buy a Tateem. Thus Eragon came from that decision.
Blödhgarm was sitting next to Eragon and shaking him. "Eragon, wake up. Are you alright?"
Arya knelt down and checked his pulse. It was erratic, his heart was beating fast, he was hyperventilating, and he was sweating.
"What's wrong?" Islanzadi asked.
"We don't know," was their reply.
"Eragon, Eragon. Eragon. Wake up. Hurry, what's wrong. Eragon." Arya said worrying. She had come to like this handsome guy. He was sweet, at times. Even when he was not cooperative and defiant, he had a sad look in his eyes. Then she heard Blödhgarm gasp.
She looked and saw that Eragon's brown hair was turning red. Like Durza's. "What's happening?"
"What? What's going on there?" Their mother asked as she came over. Then she too gasped
"It would seem to be that after Eragon killed the shade, a malevolent spirit was thrown out and projected into Eragon." Blödhgarm explained.
"What do we do?"
"We can't do anything but wait and see who wins this mental battle. Eragon or whatever the spirit's name is." Islanzadi said.
They watched as Eragon's hair kept changing colors. Then finally, they stayed on brown. They gave a sigh of relief. But their celebration came too soon. They watched again as streaks of red stripes appeared in his hair. Then it stopped.
Arya tried one more time to wake him. But instead, she reached into his mind on accident. She was sucked into his mind. What she found there, was astonishing. Then she saw Eragon, with wristbands made of rubies, on his wrist. She also saw a figure, tied to the wristbands, shadowing him. Eragon spoke.
"Why are you in here? Get out!"
So here it is. The second part. I'm sorry that it's very short, but its just a continuation of the first part. But I wanted it from a different point of view so yeah. Please review. I might not be able to update on Thursday, but I will update on Saturday. My parents want me to study SAT's already. I'm only going into 9th grade. *sigh* Anyways, see you then. Oh, come and vote on my page. For the polls. Bye.!
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