Here is chapter three... sorry it took so long i wasn't motivated... i know only like one person is reading this so i will post it for them :)
so yeah ... hope you like it...
"Scanning, scanning…come on hurry up!" The Doctor muttered, frustrated as he leaned over the TARDIS display screen.
Jack stood out of the way with Donna and Martha watching worriedly as the Doctor became more and more impatient.
"What's taking so long? I need to find the cause of the disturbance and fast! The vortex is going crazy." The Doctor ranted as he glared at the screen, as though glaring could make it go faster.
"Doctor, it's going to take a while. We might as well get comfy while we wait," Jack said as he lazily leaned against the railing.
Donna and Martha went to sit in the captain's chair but the Doctor still hovered around the control panel. It was Jack's turn to realise that this was a fight he was not going to win.
"Yes!" The Doctor yelled, startling Donna and Martha awake and causing Jack to jump.
"We have a location. So off we go," the Doctor said enthusiastically.
"What, no plan?" Jack asked, obviously concerned.
The Doctor turned to look at him in disbelief. "You've been at Torchwood far too long. Where's the danger seeking, adventurous, care free captain I know? I won't say love 'cause you'd have a field day with that," the Doctor said, bouncing on the spot.
"Yeah, well, I just wanted to try to make sure that we would be able to get out if anything went wrong and have a back up in case…" Jack trailed off.
"Oh my god, you're right! I'm turning into a wimp that wants everything to be easy and always be able to find a way out. I'm turning into Mickey the idiot!" Jack said, looking horrified.
The Doctor sadly looked up. "Come on Jack, Mickey wasn't that bad, he helped save the world heaps of times in the end and he was always a friend to Rose…" the Doctor trailed off, distracted from his defence of Mickey as he looked away sadly.
Donna came over and rested a hand on his shoulder. "You alright?" she asked quietly
The Doctor snapped out of his day dream. "I'm always alright!" he answered, turning to fiddle with the TARDIS control panel.
"Well, let's not just stand here and talk all day. Let's find out what's going on! Time is of the essence!" he said, grinning as they all rolled their eyes at his bad pun.
So there it is... hope you like it, PLEASE REVIEW!!! i know you think oh well who cares and why do people always beg for reviews but you have to know they are my motivation what makes me actually want to get the next chapter up ...
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